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Sush1daddy — happy birthday love!
Published: 2017-12-09 18:55:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 73; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 1
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mm a early birthday gift for a good friend of mine ;w;;! <33mewmew413
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I asume you still want critique, so here i go!
To start off I want to say that I like the style! The had/chin looks a little off centered. Try moving it a lil to the right. the marks to show the collar bones look a little too big. I find that the smudgy shading throws you off from the style, I suggest cell shading.
OK THERE I MIGHT HAVE BEEN TOO HARSH AAAAAAH
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Nah nah
Its fine!!
This is what I'm asking for and I rlly want to improve my art!
Thank you!! <33
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AAA NP!!
HAPPY BIRTHDAY! <33
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