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suthnmeh — Commission - Ed and Des sketch
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Thank you very much! It's just two chapters from completion, so you can imagine how excited we are.
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Wow suth, this guy is just looking very creepy right now... like, seriously crazy! 
Again, great work with the posing and the mood, keep up the good work, as always!
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Hurray! 
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Just in case you didn't read the excerpt I included in a previous comment of mine, I'll tell you. 
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And such a lovely couple they make
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Ah, I see.
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Morally, I'm destitute
In the Tomb of Ill Repute
She's a rotten kind of cute
For a zombie prostitute!
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I suppose that could be the appropriate response, yes.
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Mwhaha where'd you get THAT anyway, it rocks!
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"Zombie Prostitute" by Voltaire.
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oh my god, that voltaire. I have got to investigate him more XD thank you!
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*ahem*
IT'S A ZOMBIE HOOKER. THERE'S A DIFFERENCE.
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THANK YOU.
THOMAS: I WILL SUMMON DESIREE TO EAT YOUR SKULL CONTENTS!
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Yeah, have some decency of words!!
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Ah, how could I have ever been mistaken? It was so obvious.
Please, good sir. Forgive me for this grevious error.
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I trust you won't make the same mistake the next time, old chap. '
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This is a good start.
However, a few things:
Edward is supposed to be in his late thirties. He looks like a teenager. Plus I don't know if you knew what I meant; its hard to describe it, but I want kind of a "proud/creepy" expression, whereas here, he just looks proud. Remember, later, he's got a scar on his neck where at one point he was cutting it.
Also, the contraption on her mouth. I want something that will cover her mouth, something that wraps around like a gag but it's not. Actually, I wonder if he could get a ball gag in her mouth without being bitten. That may be chewed to pieces over time...well if you have any specific ideas for that, I'll think it over.
Otherwise I think I like this a lot.
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I'm aware of all the things this is missing, I just wanted to see what you thought of the pose and composition. I do have an idea for the mouth thing, but still need to put it to paper. Have we talked about payment on this one? O_o Suddenly it came to mind.
And don't worry about his appearance, he'll look older once I render him^^
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Oh, do you think when you're designing the mouth clamp thing, could you do a final sketch(s) of the actual device, close-up? I'll pay you a little extra depending on what you do. I don't want it colored, just a cleaned up pencil lineart. You know? Maybe front and one side.
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Hmm you mean do like a separate drawing of the mouth clamp thing? Like with object designing?
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Oh, and I wanted to change his hair color. I think jet black would be more suiting to his personality, and his character.
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Yeah, I figured you'd sketch it to get an idea of what you're doing anyway, just a cleaned up version of what it is. I'd like to use it in the appendix. That would be cool. Maybe a sketch of the device, and then a sketch of it on her, and er head maybe pointing not directly at the camera. Does that make sense?
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Yes, makes sense, I think. Would it too much to ask that you add something extra to the payment for those extra drawings? If I'm going to clean them up, I guess they'd count as separate drawings. but don't if you're too tight on the money.
Ok on his hair color too. I'll try to come up with a suiting, interesting light^^
Thank you again, your comishes are always a treat
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I also forgot to say; he's German. And I don't know if it'll help any, an excerpt from the novel:
The driver, a strange loosely built man. His hair appeared to be greasy. It was black as night and hung in his face. He bore an aberrant smile as he exited the vehicle. He gave it to Fred who returned a more regular smile with a puff of his pipe. He gulped afterward, a bit disturbed by this man. He was about Fred’s height, but looked a bit sickly.
“Hi there!” the man said with the hint of a German accent. “Fancy seein’ other normal humans out and about. You must have a destination?”
“We’re headed someplace safe…just someplace safe,” Fred replied. The sliding door on the van opened, and Al got out of the car, as the coast had been clear. He needed to stretch his legs. “You, Sir?”
“I’d be lyin’ if I said anything different, but for now, we’re just travelin’. The name’s Edward.” He grinned with an outstretched hand. Fred took it in his, and shook, but pulled back as soon as he could. It felt so cold and clammy. He nonchalantly wiped it on his slacks.
“Who’s ‘we?’” Al asked, butting into the conversation, walking close to the back of Edward’s car. He drew up to the window, and a set of hands banged against the metal caging that Edward had installed in front of the glass. Along with the hands, joined a head, and face. It was the beautiful, but bruised face of a twenty-something-year-old. Her eyes were open wide, almost as if the lids were being tugged upward by invisible strings, and the eyes were bloodshot. She hardly blinked, but moaned a lot. There was blood on her shoulders, and she wore a bikini top. It barely held its contents in place. Al jumped back in surprise, and disgust.
“What the fuck?” Al cried. “Why do you have one of those fuckshits with you?!”
Edward looked at Al and chuckled. “Fuckshits? That’s a strange thing to call that beautiful Goddess. There’s nothing wrong with her, you know. She’s just not used to seeing other “normal” humans.” Edward’s discerning smiled remained on his white face as he did quotations with the pointer finger and middle finger on both hands. “Don’t worry, she won’t bite, not through the glass anyway.”
“These things aren’t humans!” Al said.
“Oh, ho, ho!” Edward’s laugh sent chills up Al’s and Fred’s spines. “That’s where you’re wrong, mein Freund. These “fuckshits” are most certainly human. I should know. They are alive. They can breathe. Their hearts beat, and best of all, they respond quite well…sexually.” Edward’s words froze Al and Fred to the ground on which they stood. They didn’t know what to say or do, but soon, Fred’s gas pump clicked, signaling that it had filled the tank. Edward laughed, a deeper, more guttural laugh.
“You’re a fucking sicko!” Al said.
“All she needs is some food, just like you and I, some water, and she’s good to go. And you may have noticed that contraption on her face. That prevents her from being able to turn me into a living zombie, or “fuckshit,” as you call it, fine Sir.”
“You need to get help,” Fred said. Paled, he went back around to the driver’s side. Al opened the door again, climbed inside, and Edward laughed again.
“I’m perfectly sane, you two. You don’t know what you’re missin’!” The van started to drive off, and Edward waved, with that same, almost scary smile. “It was nice meeting you! Have a splendid trip now!”
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Nice^^ I enjoyed that, and I think it's always helpful "seeing" the character in his context. So yay!
Ok on the tucked hair too.
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I don't know if I gave a color for her clothing, but I was thinking. Hookers often wear flashy clothing. Maybe a silvery, skin tight skirt, real short of course. A matching top should be good.
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I can quote what you said if you want, I got it all written down. Basically, hot pink short shorts and top to match. What'll it be, surr?
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I'd forgotten. But, I do like the idea of the flashy silvery outfit I mentioned in a previous message.
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Alrighty^^ Better than that hot pink then?
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Yeah, I lol the idea of a silvery material. I think that suits her better.
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Oh, and maybe on the right side (our right) have the hair just as long, but have it tucked behind the ear. THAT WOULD BE BOSS.
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Well, really they don't have to be THAT clean, just cean enough so you could tell what it is of course. It's almost like Edward had these plans before the zombie apocalypse...he's a creeper...you don't know what he might find fun...lol
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Alright, I'll see what I can do. You don't have to pay extra if you don't want to^^
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Okay, sorries. o_o
I likey the pose and composition of the piece for sure!
And payment, I think we agreed would be $80 like the Jordan/Ashley piece, but if that's not enough... O.O lol
Thanks, I can't wait to see more! I think this can be a truly DISGUSTING, DISTURBING piece!
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Lol you know you'd like a girl like her, admit it!
Nah, 80s fine^^ It's just best to settle it from the beginning, ya know. So yay! Remember, David's pic needs paying
This piece should be funnnn to do.
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xD...
Yeah, I meant to say in the last one. I plan on getting the monies out by Sunday.
I hope you has funs! And, as far as lighting goes, I want something that is darkish, but I want all the details to stand out and such, so you can kind of do whatever works for that.
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