HOME | DD

SuzakuTrip — The Guardian Kirin

Published: 2014-11-02 03:41:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 977; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 0
Redirect to original
Description "I love you Tomoe, but you're wrong. This isn't he path we should be taking the Minawa down! Do you want to go to war? What are you thinking?!"

"I thought you'd say something like that, Ren. This is the time to take action, not sit back and let our enemies walk all over us!"

"So we're taking action by abandoning the Asukai?! AND TAKING ON EVERYONE BUT THE SHIROGANE? YOU THINK THE TACHIBANA ARE GOING TO BE ABLE TO CRUSH THE KITSUNE? THE ASUKAI? WE'RE BETTER OFF THAN THEY ARE- AND WE AREN'T EVEN THAT WELL OFF!"

He hadn't meant to startle her, however her shock wore off as she was clearly offended,"Oi, this is about our outside enemies, not about crushing the other clans! Who do you think I am?"

"Who do you think we've joined?" Why did she always miss the bigger picture? "Do you think that this is just gonna end peacefully as we protect the village?"

"This isn't about peace, Ren- this is about protecting our village from outside attacks! The best defense is offense!"

"So we go to war right, then what?! Get decimated again, only to come home to another fight? This isn't the right answer!"

"Have some confidence! Do you think sitting and cowering in our village is the answer? It will not solve anything!"

"We should be making alliances! We should be solving our own problems at home! You think that mess from a few weeks ago is over?!  You think we can win anything if we're not united as a village?! What does it matter if we go out and destroy are outside enemies, if in a few weeks we'll destroy ourselves from the inside!?"

"Then perhaps the rest of the village should stop acting like cowards! I will not wage war on them, nor will I let any other Minawa do so! But to do nothing in a time where Toro has so many enemies is nothing but naivety!"

"And to blindly follow a man who believes in the need to go to war to satisify some need for glory is the upmost in foolishness! YOU CAN'T PROTECT ANYONE THAT WAY."

"..Have you not seen what we have allowed to happen to our village? Enemies killing our own left and right? Do you really think raising the walls and picking flowers together will do anything to stop them?"

He slammed his hands down on the table, "FIGHT OR HIDE?"

She crossed her arms, clearly unimpressed by his outburst, with some other feeling hiding just below the surface. "Don't you? I don't see any other way, at this point. Did our excursion to Tonbo Kyuden not bring us a strong ally? Who knows what other excursions could bring us!"

 "A strong alley with fortified defenses, who was hiding from us! Maybe they're strong, but we're supposed to be stronger - and we're crumbling from within! Tomoe - Dad would have never gone down this path and you know it."

She winced at his words,"...I'm not dad. You should know."
 "I have to choose my own path, now.."

"and it's the path the rest of us are being lead down."

"Yes. To prevent more disaster from befalling us."

"This isn't prevention! This is provocation! Provocation the village isn't ready for.  I - I can't follow you Tomoe. It's wrong. I know it's wrong."

"Then WHAT? WHAT THE HELL WOULD BE BETTER?"

"I'm TRYING TO FIGURE THAT OUT, BUT IT SURE AS HELL ISN'T THIS!"

"THEN TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK! YOU ARE MY HEIR! YOU CANNOT JUST WALK AWAY FROM THIS!"

"I AM TELLING YOU WHAT I THINK! I CANNOT WALK WITH YOU ON THIS!"

 "NO, NO. THIS CLAN IS YOUR RESPONSIBILITY TOO. HOW CAN ANYONE TRUST YOU IF YOU DO NOT SUPPORT YOUR OWN?"

"The people I care about are my responsibility. I hope - I hope that my actions will be enough for them to trust me. Tomoe-"

She sat back down, her eyes burning but not wanting to show it, "Then what. Join another faction all on your own?"

"the Aoki have some ideas I agree with, Tomoe - I- I'm not trying to hurt you.  I'm not going to try and sew dissent in the Minawa.  I'm just trying to find another way before this gets out of hand."
 
She laughed bitterly, "Not trying to hurt me by rejecting the first choice I make as clan leader? Well done. Well done, Ren."

His voice softened, and he felt the stinging in his eyes - it's not like he wanted it to come to this., "Tomoe, this is going to be one of many choices you make, as your second - no as your brother, I'm letting you know - this is not the right one."

She inhaled deeply, and with a forced shuttering breath said,"Fine." She looked away, "Go on, then. Go and.. do whatever the hell it is you want to do."

"Hey Tomoe?...thank you."

Her eyes narrowed, "What for?"

"for letting me go."

"Please just leave me alone right now.
And just... don't come crying to me if it doesn't work out."
Not wanting to have him see her cry, she quickly moved aside, desperate for this conversation to end.

He quietly laughed with an air of defeat as he turned towards the door, "alright Tomoe, I won't.  You can always come cry to me though, even if it's because everything is working out. I'll listen."

He didn't see her dismiss him out the door, his eyes too busy looking ahead to see what was behind him.


HOW DO I FORMAT AN RP I am not a lyrical wordsmith at all.

Related content
Comments: 39

TraceofHatred [2014-11-10 03:37:18 +0000 UTC]

It's tragic to see another family division between the factions, but I think they'll both learn from this though.

Tomoe will learn that being a bad leader will cost you the support of people you love, and Ren that the right thing to do is not always the easiest.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

SuzakuTrip In reply to TraceofHatred [2014-11-10 09:18:52 +0000 UTC]

Mind you time will tell if Ren is making the right choice, but he certainly feels he is.  Giving up his family life in order to not just sit by idly was something Ren never thought he'd have to do.

Never even considered it.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

petitepurrito [2014-11-07 20:08:10 +0000 UTC]

Not a lyrical wordsmith? LIES

This was great ;A; the emotions in their faces fjaiofjigojea

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

SuzakuTrip In reply to petitepurrito [2014-11-07 20:26:03 +0000 UTC]

Ahahah x'D most of this is straight up dialogue from an rp ;v;

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

ochairo [2014-11-04 19:56:23 +0000 UTC]

Oh man Tomoe looks so beautiful and sad I wanna cryyy ;___;;

I really like the feeling of this and the colouring and hhh it's so good.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

SuzakuTrip In reply to ochairo [2014-11-05 21:18:36 +0000 UTC]

She's so sad ;v;

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Taminki [2014-11-03 09:46:51 +0000 UTC]

zhgfjzasf the drama

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

SuzakuTrip In reply to Taminki [2014-11-03 15:39:12 +0000 UTC]

I know ;n;

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

luluopp [2014-11-03 00:53:04 +0000 UTC]

"THEN TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK! YOU ARE MY HEIR! YOU CANNOT JUST WALK AWAY FROM THIS!"

"I AM TELLING YOU WHAT I THINK! I CANNOT WALK WITH YOU ON THIS!"

Probably my favourite lines on this ;A; it's such a beautiful piece though.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

SuzakuTrip In reply to luluopp [2014-11-03 09:11:13 +0000 UTC]

They fought so hard ;v;

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

darlingGrim [2014-11-02 21:04:17 +0000 UTC]

QAQ 
 '    '
The artwork and text work well together. 

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

SuzakuTrip In reply to darlingGrim [2014-11-03 00:30:10 +0000 UTC]

I mentioned in the comments but they never fought so a lot of what they're saying is hitting below the belt for them ;n;

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Sukieyo [2014-11-02 20:35:19 +0000 UTC]

This was intense, but amazing nonetheless.
The artwork really does portray the dialog, the feels man ;A; <3

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

SuzakuTrip In reply to Sukieyo [2014-11-02 21:01:00 +0000 UTC]

;A; this dialogue had all my feels.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

TripleC123Ninja [2014-11-02 15:30:20 +0000 UTC]

Whoa

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

SuzakuTrip In reply to TripleC123Ninja [2014-11-02 21:01:24 +0000 UTC]

:'C they went through their whole lives not fighting. THey don't know what to do.

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Dazed--Flame [2014-11-02 14:45:18 +0000 UTC]

That was so intense ;-;  Ren <3 and Tomoe too -hugs them all-

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

SuzakuTrip In reply to Dazed--Flame [2014-11-02 21:00:42 +0000 UTC]

;A; they never actually fought before so they don't know how.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Dazed--Flame In reply to SuzakuTrip [2014-11-03 01:31:27 +0000 UTC]

The first time is always the hardest!

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

SuzakuTrip In reply to Dazed--Flame [2014-11-03 09:20:00 +0000 UTC]

yeah ;A: they definitely hit some below the belt moments

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Dazed--Flame In reply to SuzakuTrip [2014-11-03 11:57:27 +0000 UTC]

all of TG has done that, i guess ;-;  

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

SuzakuTrip In reply to Dazed--Flame [2014-11-03 13:52:17 +0000 UTC]

:'C we're not great at being nice in situations

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

misslalariot [2014-11-02 14:25:47 +0000 UTC]

Oh no!!! Poor Tomoe baby.....let me hold you!!!
And Damn Ren's hair is sure growing !!!!<3

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

SuzakuTrip In reply to misslalariot [2014-11-02 21:00:25 +0000 UTC]

He should really get a haircut x'D He hasn't cut it since timeskip

;A; neither one of them is happy with this outcome.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

misslalariot In reply to SuzakuTrip [2014-11-03 02:42:48 +0000 UTC]

No Eri loves his hair ;A;

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

SuzakuTrip In reply to misslalariot [2014-11-03 09:19:43 +0000 UTC]

and he loves Eri >C

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

misslalariot In reply to SuzakuTrip [2014-11-03 12:51:21 +0000 UTC]

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Thriaemis [2014-11-02 09:10:47 +0000 UTC]

8'D I still get feelsy remembering that RP
REEEEEEEN
BIG SISTER LOVES YOUUUUU

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

SuzakuTrip In reply to Thriaemis [2014-11-02 09:25:45 +0000 UTC]

I get all feelsy too ;v;

Ren totally hit below the belt though with the whole "Dad wouldn't have done this."

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Thriaemis In reply to SuzakuTrip [2014-11-02 09:29:50 +0000 UTC]

He totally did x'D Bring up the one person you know she admires more than anyone

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

SuzakuTrip In reply to Thriaemis [2014-11-02 10:48:02 +0000 UTC]

these kids don't know how to fight >C

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Thriaemis In reply to SuzakuTrip [2014-11-02 11:59:20 +0000 UTC]

Not with each other, anyway 8'D So far all their fights have been weird-festival-mask related

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

SuzakuTrip In reply to Thriaemis [2014-11-03 16:05:14 +0000 UTC]

:C never trying to hurt eachother.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

Thriaemis In reply to SuzakuTrip [2014-11-03 17:06:26 +0000 UTC]

This is really a first for these two :'D

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

SuzakuTrip In reply to Thriaemis [2014-11-03 17:54:52 +0000 UTC]

and it's a big one :'C

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

BestNess [2014-11-02 05:08:39 +0000 UTC]

AUGH GOD MY FEELS NO //FLAILS

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

SuzakuTrip In reply to BestNess [2014-11-02 05:16:12 +0000 UTC]

it made you feel ;A;

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

BestNess In reply to SuzakuTrip [2014-11-07 00:18:49 +0000 UTC]

so much feel ;__;

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

SuzakuTrip In reply to BestNess [2014-11-07 05:42:19 +0000 UTC]

good >C

👍: 0 ⏩: 0