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Published: 2014-01-29 00:43:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 446; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 0
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I should go live near a lakeWhere my thoughts would be calmer
My sentences would be shorter
My words would be simpleminded
Like, I went all day without socks.
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Comments: 3
haha, that's great. i actually laughed out loud.
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Haha, I love the last line of this. Everyone's lives would be calmer by the lake...
Good work.
-BAA
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The poem reflects the subject matter (as does this comment, I guess.) Nice.
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