para-noir [2003-09-10 18:25:59 +0000 UTC]
Its hard to say why I like this poem. I just do.
The contraditions are plain, simple but very highly effective! And the final part...
"A belief that true love is the downfall of me"
...seems to stick out for me, maybe its just my current mood.
Good work though, keep it up.
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