sweetangel311 [2010-11-07 01:34:28 +0000 UTC]
yes of couse, it makes perfect sense. well as an artist im always trying to improve. I drew this to test my skills and to practice a different kind of pose then what i am use to. She could be considered sitting but at the time i planned on a background to show that it was like a floating kind of pose amoung like flowers and birds of all kinds. so i understand its kind of confusing. furthermore my description does say i drew this at lunch but it had started 1st period so i would say, seeing that my teachers hate when i drae in class that it took only 30-45 minutes top. since i was kind of rushing i did come out a little well....like that, but it was still harder to draw(seeing that it was a new pose and that people i didnt even know kept bothering me about it). as for a background, i planned to her to be a child whos family has been through a roughpatch and throughout she had stayed pure untainted by hate for the people who mocked her and abused her. and if you could be so kind as to go into the nitty gritty about this i would very thankful. also pleas check out some of my other work, i find your critiques very helpful to me.
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SteveCTHOing [2010-11-06 12:06:59 +0000 UTC]
Okay I will. Where can I begin? How about the pose? The angle makes it hard to determine the pose of the character, but I see that it is at a sitting pose or it's trying to tip-toe on the line. If that was the case, it is a clever idea. That's all I can say. If you want, I can give you all the nitty gritty stuff, but I need to know the reason why you drew this and the amount of effort you put into it (time took to finish and how hard it is to draw). I also need to know the background for this work too. I'm doing this so that I know about this work and what you do before I can put any feedback to it. Does this make sense?
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