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NovyCV [2017-07-29 20:16:18 +0000 UTC]
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For a human in your style, it does look quite pretty, but I will note out some minor things which you could slightly improve next time. Here I go.
The main thing that look a bit weird is the neck: unless it is in your style to drew them so, it seems too small near the base of the head, giving the head a bigger impression than what it actually is.
The headphones, while having a rather nice design, do seem a bit of of angle: the left one does not have this sense of 'depth/inclinasion' according to the angle KItzu's body is facing, but again, I can't be too sure about this one.
On the bright side of things, most of the drawing is well colored and shaded; the texture of the coat is interesting, especially with the way the lights and shades affect it.
The iris has this special touch you specialize at, with rather magnificient effects of coloring, and so does the hair, although looking a bit glossy.
It is a quite pretty human boy, I hope we will see more of you. Believe in yourself enough, and I'm sure the future ones will only get better and better. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>
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Angel018 [2017-07-27 06:34:41 +0000 UTC]
Nyanmega: ne recuerdas a Chat Noir XD
Igual muy lindo el dibujo
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cherrina44 [2017-07-26 14:40:57 +0000 UTC]
El pecoso ojos esmeralda c: ā„
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Resolve9 [2017-07-23 11:01:36 +0000 UTC]
In my smol opinion, headphones look off.
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Resolve9 In reply to SweetMintality [2017-07-23 14:34:18 +0000 UTC]
The headband thingy seems to be awfully thick and shaped like curved cuboid. And unless the headphones have that ability to twist the speaker a bit outside, it looks like the headphones are unnaturaly bent.
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SweetMintality In reply to Resolve9 [2017-07-23 14:43:00 +0000 UTC]
Mmm
Well I did think these headphones as the ones that can be bent
Eh, I dunno, next time I'll have to use a reference then
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Resolve9 In reply to SweetMintality [2017-07-23 14:59:01 +0000 UTC]
from looks of the band they didn't look like one of these ;v
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