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Published: 2003-08-24 22:36:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 131; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 16
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Empty.There is nothing inside me.
No emotions, no feelings.
Just empty.
When I wasn't alone I wasn't empty.
I was full of emotions.
No feelings though.
Just emotions.
My eyes show my inside.
Empty.
Nothing happening.
Just thinking.
I wish I didn't feel this way.
I wish that I wasn't like this.
I wish that I had someone.
I wish I didn't scare them away.
If I had someone I wouldn't be empty.
My emotions would grow.
I would be happy.
I wouldn't be sad.
If I had someone I would be optimistic.
I would be happy about the following day.
I would think that everything will be fine.
But I dont have anyone.
Empty inside.
Comments: 5
Awesome! I was feeling like that not too long ago.
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hmmm I LOVE IT. You've just written down what im feeling today. I know why i love your poems, its because you can writed something very deep from something very simple. And i like the style where you define the word then explain yourself. very nice *
"When I wasn't alone I wasn't empty.
I was full of emotions.
No feelings though.
Just emotions. "
This is what speaks to me the most. It is true we can feel emotions when we have people, although some how its like its floating in the air and we cant be touched by the bubble of love.
smile* (just my opinion thats all)
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Awwww very sad. I hate that empty feeling too, all I can say is it doesn't last and things will get better 
Beautiful poem
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very good! omg this is awesome what am I kidding? I liek the picture too is it a ghiesha girl?
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