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Violently-Chaotic [2010-02-19 00:01:06 +0000 UTC]

wow this is wow.

the picture gives the impact that there is speed and the colors blend in so brightly that i like.

what i think you need to improve is that hand in the front in my opinion i think it needs to be a little more up as when u run u tend to bring the hand up to ur chest. as in here it looks a little to low.

other then that i really like it <3

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ginisluv [2010-02-18 21:17:54 +0000 UTC]

How awesome, i love it~!!

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toiletseat [2009-09-04 20:22:03 +0000 UTC]

LOVE THE ACTION HERE

rush to me, kai~ 8D

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Lordoflazy [2009-09-03 07:19:19 +0000 UTC]

wow, ur getting better! again! o__o

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angichan [2009-09-02 16:06:07 +0000 UTC]

great motions! get im! get im!

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Raikita [2009-09-02 11:14:46 +0000 UTC]

I usually don't see this type of style, so different, so I'll do my best to make a good critique based on that. ^^

I really like, though, the eratic colours, and it's especially well done on the ground. Although, with the ground, is it a boat? I think you should probably make it more distinct as to what your OC is running on. It looks like a boat with looking at the bottom and knowing that boats are shaped that way, and the background being a sea-green just adds to it. But then the edge of it on the right (our right) is going upwards, so it's like uuhhmm!
So if it were a boat then just make sure that the top part is parallel with the bottom.. okay not exactly parallel, but you know what I mean. ^ク^
Also, with the lines it should be more um.. I don't know how to say it, better tapered. Even if it is just a background. xD;; But you've done a very good job with the texture on it! It's very fun to look at, as well as the greenish part too.

And then it just adds more mood to a boat-like place is the sea because of the misty white at the top.

Hahaaa, I love the expression, her lips, hehe! The right eye (our right) is a bit too high, especially with seeing the position of her ear, looking back at the basic face anatomy, the ear is aligned with the eyebrow and the bottom of the nose. :33

The arm on the left looks a bit dislocated because of how the shirt is pointing downwards and then the arm going upwards and such. If it were bending downards like the sleeve then that should fix it.

Anyway, speaking of the clothing, I like how you used movement and wind in it, really eccentuates the running. <3

I can't stop looking at the hair I *love* the hair, it's so simply done and drawn, like the rest of the picture, but it's even more simplistic which is so appealing for the eye. Yeheee, I also really like how you drew the hand, it is so powerful!

And yes I especially really like how you coloured it, but the shading seems a bit too forced on the shirt whereas the rest of the image is more relaxed in a way. I say forced because it looks it is harshly darkened at the folds, and I don't think it's necessary to add lineart AND shading at the same time, but I have seen it done very well so you can keep that up if you'd like. ^-^;; Although yeah, I guess I'm just talking about the one right under her face, it really sticks out and unfortunately not in the best way it could be like the hair. D:

But still the image is nicely crafted, ESPECIALLY THE COLOURING I love the background most for that. <333

I really like the style you've used overall. :3 Some stuff to fix and consider but it's still a very lovely image! Good jooob.

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YoshikoFuru [2009-09-02 05:34:02 +0000 UTC]

i like the lips XD

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geans123 [2009-09-02 03:40:48 +0000 UTC]

It's kind of hard to tell it they're running or jumping. In terms of running the arm movement is oposite to the leg movement though making it seem more likely that Kai is jumping.

Other than that I can't see much else wrong with it. ^^ the picture has a great feel to it and I love the expression of the face.

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andy5281 [2009-09-02 02:39:45 +0000 UTC]

well done for the emotions and movement! keep it up!

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