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Jecjec [2012-01-20 12:34:19 +0000 UTC]
The left hand (or her right hand) seems awkward as well the right foot (her left)...and explain the yellow line thing angle in the background and in front of her gawddamn face.
Clean up the white bits outisde the lineart outside her legs...and give her a shadow~
Personally I don't think that the head is too fat...cos if you made it smaller it would've looked retarded.
Awesome colouring is awesome.
Cliche title could've been more cliche if it was in proper grammar.
And since I have a small brain and am going senile with old age, is it me or is the body facing one way, and then the face and the dress facing forward...please forgive me, the old woman who can't even draw or colour for herself.
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SwirlzSmile In reply to Jecjec [2012-01-23 18:57:11 +0000 UTC]
Oh, I getcha. I completely and utterly fail at deciding poses, and I stuffed up shading on the hands so... e.e. I must work harder!
...the yellow line is a yellow line, there to take up space. lol. don't read too deeply into it~ (and fyi, it's behind her. so what's supposedly in front of her face? e.e)
xD "white bits" = skin colour. got lazy... *cough*
NO, BAD COLOURING IS BAD ;A;
and I know. Hence why it's with bad grammar //shot
...it's just you. Honestly, she's facing forward, but with her head turned... or something to that effect. It probably looks odd cause of shading e.e
BUT THANK YOU FOR YOUR INPUT. I shall remember this!
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Jecjec In reply to SwirlzSmile [2012-01-24 03:37:16 +0000 UTC]
butbut the yellow line is in front of her face~~ just look at her hair...it changes colour when it comes in contact with the yellow line so therefore it is in front of her face.
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SwirlzSmile In reply to Jecjec [2012-01-24 05:34:31 +0000 UTC]
...it's honestly not. It's probably a coincidence. The only reason why the hair changes colour is 'cause of the way I do shading. lol.
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Jecjec In reply to SwirlzSmile [2012-01-24 08:18:25 +0000 UTC]
...righhhhttttttt.
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