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Syphellium — Redline: Squeekii-Jellybean

Published: 2012-07-17 10:35:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 2293; Favourites: 71; Downloads: 18
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Redlines for ~Squeekii-Jellybean here is their original artwork! c:


Oh wow I took a longer time than usual on this one, partially because I was doing a bit of research and practice for myself (thus the little diagrams of eyes/paws on the side) I put those little sketches in so maybe others could find them useful too c:

Points not properly explained:
- Make sure you pay attention to all the joints and bones! The tailbone joins to the base of the spine, other than the shoulder join there is also the wrist and elbow joints! Same goes for backlegs too.
- Most bones work a lot like a human arm or leg would even if the proportions are different! Try bending your legs into the position you want to draw and see how they fold together, sometimes you'd be surprised! c:
- Foxes have slit-shaped pupil which dilate and expand according to light intensity. This is different for wolves and dogs which have circular pupils!
- Don't forget the dew claw! It's like a more primitive version of our thumbs

I felt most parts of this drawing were quite well done, such as the head and muzzle shape which only needed a bit of tweaking, but it would be better if you used reference photos to correctly position the facial features (such as eyes, they were originally drawn far too much towards the side of the head).
I like how you interpreted the kitsune tails and most of the sitting pose was drawn very well! Also unlike a lot of artists, you payed good attention to the fur direction and the fact that foxes have whiskers! Good job overall, keep up the great efforts and improvement!

Copyright redlines and sketches to =Syphellium
Copyright original artwork to ~Squeekii-Jellybean
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Comments: 4

Ricchin [2012-07-18 21:40:03 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I learned quite a bit from it too O.O
Good job!

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Amadoodles [2012-07-17 15:58:32 +0000 UTC]

Eee Syph I love looking at your lines, I always learn a lot. I didn't know that foxes have slit shaped pupils

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Squeekii-Jellybean [2012-07-17 11:31:34 +0000 UTC]

Ah, thank you very much! I forgot that I had submitted this, so I was pleasantly surprised to have this done I think I will make a newer version of this image later so I can practice taking into account all the tips you've given.

Thanks again!

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MysticWolvesHowl [2012-07-17 10:48:29 +0000 UTC]

could you possibly do a redline for me on [link] ?

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