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T-D-P — Daddy you are never here
Published: 2005-05-30 05:53:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 239; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 6
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i know your works important,but isn't your son too?
im daddys little son,
but i never get to see you.
you say im growing up too fast,
you say i've got real tall,
but when was the last time u saw me?
when was my last phone call?
daddy it breaks my heart so,
tears flowing in your absence
its hurts more then you'll ever know,
but thats just it you don't.
you don't realise what it's like,
i'm always felling really sad,
and i know its not you're fault,
but i really need my dad.
i really need a cuddle,
so i know that you care,
after a bad day with bullies,
but you're never even there.
i just want my dad,
i've had a really bad week,
i want to cry sat in your arms,
while you wipe the tears from my cheak.
daddy please come home now,
im choking on my tears,
i need you more then ever now,
to fight away my fears.
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Comments: 17
i saw this as one of my friends favorites... this is such a great poem and you are very talented... my dad died when i was little so i can feel like that sometimes too. *faves*
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TTwTT awww ish too sad. but you really are a great poet! like a pro. this is amazing, great work
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The ryhme is really cool, and, once again this shows a lot of emotion. I recently had a fight with my mom, and she hasn't spoken to me for 3 days, and I feel what is written in your poem. Good job!
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You have very good rhyme and cadence here, I like the overall structure very much. Good job^_^
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