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IMjustHeretoreadxd [2018-07-11 01:59:43 +0000 UTC]
It was fun while it lasted
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RebelRazor [2017-08-22 00:38:01 +0000 UTC]
Um just gonna go cry in a corner nowΒ
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RawrImaOtaku [2016-04-24 02:53:52 +0000 UTC]
DAMMIT! I-I thought I was gonna be on his crewwwwwwwww T^T BUT THEN THE MOMENT I SAW ACE, DEAD, I WAS LIKE, "FUCK THIS!" T^TΒ
B-Beside the fact that the love of my life (excluding Luffy of course) is dead, it was g-good writing T^T
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NicoRobinPoneglyph [2015-11-05 15:13:47 +0000 UTC]
Just looking at the picture made me cry
Good story doe :3
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TachibanaSan In reply to NicoRobinPoneglyph [2015-11-05 16:52:20 +0000 UTC]
Sorry, I didn't want to make a story so sad Dx I hope that you liked the story :3
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ShaydenHarley [2015-10-17 21:53:50 +0000 UTC]
HOW COULD YOU SENPAI T^T HOW COULD YOUUUUUUUUUUUUU
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TachibanaSan In reply to ShaydenHarley [2015-10-17 22:11:53 +0000 UTC]
I am so sooooorry!! ;w; Please forgive me, kouhai!! T^T I never wanted to write it so sad... But then it happend! Β
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Wolffang1995Hyano In reply to TachibanaSan [2015-10-16 15:45:07 +0000 UTC]
*purrs even more, slowly curling up and nodding off while snuggling into Ace*=w=
Sabo: She looks pretty content...o3o
Luffy: No fair!I wanna hug too!!*tackles hugs both me and Ace*
OOF!>3<*grabs and cuddles Luffy before giving him a playful noogie, still snuggling into Ace*>w<
Luffy: Β
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TachibanaSan In reply to Wolffang1995Hyano [2015-10-16 16:05:31 +0000 UTC]
Sabo, I wanna hug youuuu!!~ *runs to him* If she is hugging Ace and Luffy is hugging them, I need to hug you. Shishishishi!!~ x3
Sabo: *sewatdrops*
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Wolffang1995Hyano In reply to TachibanaSan [2015-10-16 16:58:06 +0000 UTC]
lol~*happily snuggles into Ace as I cuddle Luffy Who's now stretching his arms and hugging you And Sabo*>w<
Mihawk: *walks in*Wolffang have you seen my-*stops mid sentence seeing the cuddle fest*...Never mind.*quickly walks away after slamming the door shut.*
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Wolffang1995Hyano In reply to TachibanaSan [2015-10-16 17:30:21 +0000 UTC]
lol~ No. He just didn't want to be dragged into the cuddle XD
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Wolffang1995Hyano In reply to TachibanaSan [2015-10-16 17:56:16 +0000 UTC]
Lol~ this is Dracule Mihawk we're talkin' about here dude XD
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TachibanaSan In reply to Wolffang1995Hyano [2015-10-16 17:57:26 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, there you are right xD Sad, that he doesn't like it... Or other things people like!
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Wolffang1995Hyano In reply to TachibanaSan [2015-10-16 18:04:50 +0000 UTC]
Lol~ He likes booze though XD Could probably bribe him with that and get Shanks to help out too XD
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TachibanaSan In reply to Wolffang1995Hyano [2015-10-16 18:10:49 +0000 UTC]
xDD Maybe he would then cuddle for around... 3 sec or less xD
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AwkwardAxolotl [2015-10-15 23:11:15 +0000 UTC]
Though this was a good idea, it could have been written better. I'm just going to give you a few tips that I think may make you a better writer and tell you some things I struggled with when I first started writing.
I'm just going to say this: it's very hard for me to cry or laugh when reading a story, I'm too stoic for my own good sometimes. When writing a sad story, you have to do many things. For example, getting your readers emotionally attached, using good word-choices, and being careful with grammar. I find it distracting when there are obvious corrections, and I can't get emotionally attached because I'm too busy thinking about how I would write it differently. In short, writing style is crucial to all stories, so pay attention to the little details. If you need to, you can find a beta reader to help you.
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AwkwardAxolotl In reply to TachibanaSan [2015-10-17 02:53:48 +0000 UTC]
Ah, I see! I'm learning German in school, but I've only been learning it for a little over a year. I think it's a pretty language, and I hope to go to Germany one day!
I would like to point out something that was missed by your beta reader. Typically, when a new character speaks, you start a new paragraph.
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MallowFluffy [2015-10-15 10:21:29 +0000 UTC]
NOOO!! WHY!!! ;w; IT WENT FROM ADORABLENESS TO HEARTBREAK!!
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TachibanaSan In reply to MallowFluffy [2015-10-15 11:35:35 +0000 UTC]
I am sooo sorry ;-;!! I never wrote a sad story and my other stories had a better ending... I never thought that this will happen at the end when I wrote it Dx sorry!!
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MallowFluffy In reply to TachibanaSan [2015-10-15 15:27:37 +0000 UTC]
XD It's okay! It's still a nice story! ;w; Only Ace died... once again... TwT
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TachibanaSan In reply to MallowFluffy [2015-10-15 15:43:34 +0000 UTC]
Okay,...
Thank you so much for liking it! ^^
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MallowFluffy In reply to TachibanaSan [2015-10-15 16:17:53 +0000 UTC]
No thank you for making a great story :3
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Fluffysunbunny1 [2015-10-08 19:57:36 +0000 UTC]
ACEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!! QAQ
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TachibanaSan In reply to Fluffysunbunny1 [2015-10-08 19:59:11 +0000 UTC]
Don't cry!!!! T-T Ace will always stays in our hearts!!! We will never forget him!! I am so sorry for making you sad Dx *gives tissues and a bear hug*
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