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TachibanaSan β€” I don't want to say it (Child!Ace x Child!Reader)
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Published: 2015-10-08 17:39:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 8695; Favourites: 48; Downloads: 0
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"Aceee... I-I don't wanna gooo...", you cried and hugged your best friend, Ace. "(Y/N)... You need to go... Or your family will be angry.", he said and embraced you back while you weeped into his chest. "B-But Ace... I don't want to go... I don't want to be a marine idiot... Waaaah!!"

"(Y/N)! You can't go and leave us behind! I-I don't want iiiit!", sobbed the black-haired strawhat wearer, Luffy and hugged Sabo. "L-Luffy... You should hug (y/n)-chan and not me...", said Sabo while he sweatdropped. Ace looked at his brothers with a angry face and Sabo was sighing after he saw Ace.

Luffy stopped to embrace his blond brother and walked to you while you both still cried. "(Y/N).... I-I..." "I don't want to go too, Luffy..." "Waaahaaaa!!", you both had tears in your eyes and than hugged each other while Ace looked at Luffy angrily and Sabo began to chuckle. "Hey, Ace... Are you jealous?", whispered Sabo into the ear of his older freckled faced brother. "W-What are you talking about?!", Ace's
face had a lot of shades of red while he looked enraged at his other brother. "Oh, Ace... You have a crush on her!", said Sabo who began to laugh. "Pff... Shut up..."

"Heeey... W-Why are you laughing... I... I need to go soon and you two are laughing like crazy boys...", you said and went over to your friends. "I want to laugh too!", said Luffy with a cheerful voice and ran to his brothers. "Oh, I just said that Ace- Mhhh!!", Sabo wanted to finish his sentence, but Ace's hand was on his mouth to stop him. "Don't say it... Or I will kill you...", said the mad black-haired boy before he noticed that you looked at him with a curious look on your face. His face began to blush again and he looked away.

"Hm? Ace!! Your face! It's soooo red!", screamed Luffy and stared at his brother. "Are you blushing?", you asked and his face began to blush redder than before. "Don't be ridiculous! I-I am not blushing... And stop talking about me! We need to stop your family... Because you... You need to go away... Because of them...", said Ace his last sentence and glanced to the ground.

"You... You are right... I... I need to gooo.... Waaaaah!!", you began to whimpered again and were now bear-hugged Sabo while Ace glanced at Sabo angrily and the blond sweatdropped again. "Luffy... Uh... We need to go.", said the hugged blond and looked at his younger brother who was crying like the (h/c)-haired girl. "Huuuh? But whyyy? (Y/N) is leaving us... We can't go nooow!" "But uuh... We have something to do... Something important!", said Sabo and you stopped to embrace the top hat wearing boy. "And what?", you asked him. "Uhh... Something important... Uuh... It's uuh... A secret!", he said and took the hand of his younger brother. "We need to go! Good bye, (y/n)! We will miss you!", said the blond and kissed your cheeks and sprinted away with his younger brother, so that your best friend and you could speak alone. "Huh? O-Okay...." "Byeeee, (y/n)!! I will miss youuuu! Waaaaaaaah! Sabooo! She will goooo! I don't want that she-" "Thank goodness, that (y/n)-chan is so dumb like Luffy...", thought the blond while he ran away.

Now you both were standing alone. Ace stared to the ground while you were still sobbing with a blush on your face. "Sabo kissed my cheek...", you told Ace and began to enlaced your arms around him again. "Yeah... I know...", he said pissed and looked away. "Are you angry...?" "What?! N-No! I am not! Pff... Why should I be angry...?!" "I don't know... That's why I was asking you...", you said and hugged him tighter. "Shut up...", he said and embraced you back.

"You really need to go, huh?", asked Ace you with a sad face. You nodded and glanced at him while he sighed and dried your tears with his thumb. "So it means... Good bye...", he said and you nodded again. "But I don't wanna say good bye to you, Ace!!", you cried. "You look ugly when you are crying.", said Ace and dryied your tears again. "Thank you...", you sobbed into his chest.

"Hey... Stop crying... I only wanted to tease you, you know...?" "So... I am not ugly...?" "Uh... N-No..." Ace face flushed again and he became angry because he was blushing on this day a lot... "No, you are beautiful...", he thought and knew that he couldn't ever say that into your face... He was too shy for that.

"I don't wanna gooo... Don't wanna say bye...", you were still crying while he sighed and stared at you. "We don't need to say 'Good Bye', (y/n)..." "Huh? But I will become a marine idiot!" "Don't worry... One day, if we will see each other again... You will be a member of my pirate crew, okay? So don't cry! I-I don't like it when you are crying...", he muttered the last sentence and looked away. "P-Promise? Promise me that I will be in your crew!", you said and looked at his blushing face. "Promise.", he said with a serious face. "Don't worry... We will see each other again! So it's not a good bye...", he said to you and you smiled at him. "Yeah... So... See you later!", you said to him and kissed his cheek. "Yeah... See you later.", he smiled and kissed your forehead.

That was the last time you saw each other... Ace became a pirate. A really strong pirate. He was 'Fire Fist Ace' and you... You became one of the strongest marine 'idiot', how you still called them. Everyone respected you. You were nice, strong and beautiful... Still, you were hoping that you could meet Ace one day... He promised it to you! You will be on his side... In his crew... And then, you will maybe confess your love to him...

After some years passed by, you walked into your office and saw the newest newspaper on the table. You went to your table and held the newspaper up... You read the news and then... "W-What....?" You read again the page. And again. And again... "N-No..." The newspaper fell down and you put your hands on your mouth. "It... It can't be... Ace...."

"Fire Fist Portgas D. Ace, the son of Gol D. Roger, is dead.", was written on the newspaper... You couldn't believe it... He was dead... Your best friend and love... Was dead! You fell down and was holding your table while you cried. "Aceee! It was a promise! You promised it to meee!!", you sobbed. After some minutes passed, you walked to the window. "I can't believe it... Ace....", you sighed, dried your tears and looked up to the sky. "I shouldn't cry, right? I am ugly... If I cry...", you sighed and smiled while you thought about your past with your best friend.

"So it means... 'Good Bye' after all, huh?.... Ace... But... We will see each other again. I am sure... One day, we will see each other again... So it doesn't mean 'Good Bye'... So it's still a 'See you later'..."
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Comments: 44

IMjustHeretoreadxd [2018-07-11 01:59:43 +0000 UTC]

It was fun while it lasted

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RebelRazor [2017-08-22 00:38:01 +0000 UTC]

Um just gonna go cry in a corner nowΒ 

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RawrImaOtaku [2016-04-24 02:53:52 +0000 UTC]

DAMMIT! I-I thought I was gonna be on his crewwwwwwwww T^T BUT THEN THE MOMENT I SAW ACE, DEAD, I WAS LIKE, "FUCK THIS!" T^TΒ 
B-Beside the fact that the love of my life (excluding Luffy of course) is dead, it was g-good writing T^T

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NicoRobinPoneglyph [2015-11-05 15:13:47 +0000 UTC]

Just looking at the picture made me cry

Good story doe :3

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TachibanaSan In reply to NicoRobinPoneglyph [2015-11-05 16:52:20 +0000 UTC]

Sorry, I didn't want to make a story so sad Dx I hope that you liked the story :3

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ShaydenHarley [2015-10-17 21:53:50 +0000 UTC]

HOW COULD YOU SENPAI T^T HOW COULD YOUUUUUUUUUUUUU

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TachibanaSan In reply to ShaydenHarley [2015-10-17 22:11:53 +0000 UTC]

I am so sooooorry!! ;w; Please forgive me, kouhai!! T^T I never wanted to write it so sad... But then it happend! Β 

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ShaydenHarley In reply to TachibanaSan [2015-10-18 10:26:07 +0000 UTC]

It's okay T^T

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TachibanaSan In reply to ShaydenHarley [2015-10-18 12:09:37 +0000 UTC]

Β 

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Wolffang1995Hyano [2015-10-16 04:21:21 +0000 UTC]

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TachibanaSan In reply to Wolffang1995Hyano [2015-10-16 12:46:22 +0000 UTC]

I am sorry for writing a sad B-But I hope that you liked it....!

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Wolffang1995Hyano In reply to TachibanaSan [2015-10-16 14:54:24 +0000 UTC]

*cuddles Ace to me*Q3Q...

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TachibanaSan In reply to Wolffang1995Hyano [2015-10-16 14:59:17 +0000 UTC]

Ace: Poor girl... *hugs back*

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Wolffang1995Hyano In reply to TachibanaSan [2015-10-16 15:26:51 +0000 UTC]

...*purrs and snuggles and cuddles Ace*=w=

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TachibanaSan In reply to Wolffang1995Hyano [2015-10-16 15:33:49 +0000 UTC]

Ace: Β 

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Wolffang1995Hyano In reply to TachibanaSan [2015-10-16 15:45:07 +0000 UTC]

*purrs even more, slowly curling up and nodding off while snuggling into Ace*=w=
Sabo: She looks pretty content...o3o
Luffy: No fair!I wanna hug too!!*tackles hugs both me and Ace*
OOF!>3<*grabs and cuddles Luffy before giving him a playful noogie, still snuggling into Ace*>w<
Luffy: Β 

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TachibanaSan In reply to Wolffang1995Hyano [2015-10-16 16:05:31 +0000 UTC]

Sabo, I wanna hug youuuu!!~ *runs to him* If she is hugging Ace and Luffy is hugging them, I need to hug you. Shishishishi!!~ x3
Sabo: *sewatdrops*

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Wolffang1995Hyano In reply to TachibanaSan [2015-10-16 16:58:06 +0000 UTC]

lol~*happily snuggles into Ace as I cuddle Luffy Who's now stretching his arms and hugging you And Sabo*>w<
Mihawk: *walks in*Wolffang have you seen my-*stops mid sentence seeing the cuddle fest*...Never mind.*quickly walks away after slamming the door shut.*

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TachibanaSan In reply to Wolffang1995Hyano [2015-10-16 17:25:46 +0000 UTC]

Uuuuuh, maybe Mihawk is jealous!!~ Β 

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Wolffang1995Hyano In reply to TachibanaSan [2015-10-16 17:30:21 +0000 UTC]

lol~ No. He just didn't want to be dragged into the cuddle XD

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TachibanaSan In reply to Wolffang1995Hyano [2015-10-16 17:46:01 +0000 UTC]

Whaaat!? But cuddles are great! xD

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Wolffang1995Hyano In reply to TachibanaSan [2015-10-16 17:56:16 +0000 UTC]

Lol~ this is Dracule Mihawk we're talkin' about here dude XD

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TachibanaSan In reply to Wolffang1995Hyano [2015-10-16 17:57:26 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, there you are right xD Sad, that he doesn't like it... Or other things people like!

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Wolffang1995Hyano In reply to TachibanaSan [2015-10-16 18:04:50 +0000 UTC]

Lol~ He likes booze though XD Could probably bribe him with that and get Shanks to help out too XD

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TachibanaSan In reply to Wolffang1995Hyano [2015-10-16 18:10:49 +0000 UTC]

xDD Maybe he would then cuddle for around... 3 sec or less xD

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Wolffang1995Hyano In reply to TachibanaSan [2015-10-16 18:39:56 +0000 UTC]

lol~ If we're lucky XD

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AwkwardAxolotl [2015-10-15 23:11:15 +0000 UTC]

Though this was a good idea, it could have been written better. I'm just going to give you a few tips that I think may make you a better writer and tell you some things I struggled with when I first started writing.

I'm just going to say this: it's very hard for me to cry or laugh when reading a story, I'm too stoic for my own good sometimes. When writing a sad story, you have to do many things. For example, getting your readers emotionally attached, using good word-choices, and being careful with grammar. I find it distracting when there are obvious corrections, and I can't get emotionally attached because I'm too busy thinking about how I would write it differently. In short, writing style is crucial to all stories, so pay attention to the little details. If you need to, you can find a beta reader to help you.

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TachibanaSan In reply to AwkwardAxolotl [2015-10-16 14:46:57 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the tips, but I already knew them all... It's harder for me to write the stories in english, because it's not my mother tongue and it would be easier for me to write my stories in German. I also do have a 'beta reader', who reads all my stories and corrects them if I make mistakes.

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AwkwardAxolotl In reply to TachibanaSan [2015-10-17 02:53:48 +0000 UTC]

Ah, I see! I'm learning German in school, but I've only been learning it for a little over a year. I think it's a pretty language, and I hope to go to Germany one day!

I would like to point out something that was missed by your beta reader. Typically, when a new character speaks, you start a new paragraph.

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TachibanaSan In reply to AwkwardAxolotl [2015-10-17 08:31:43 +0000 UTC]

Yes, it's really a great language and a little bit harder to learn than English. Germany is really a beautiful country. There are so many sights and the a lot of citys are really green. ^^

I see, okay. I told that my friend, thanks for telling it me.

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AwkwardAxolotl In reply to TachibanaSan [2015-10-18 19:16:41 +0000 UTC]

Yup! I find that there are some parts of German that are easier than English. I find thatΒ spelling and pronouncing words is easier in German, there's a pattern, and once you know it, you're less likely to make mistakes. It is, also, German food is delicious!

No problem!

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TachibanaSan In reply to AwkwardAxolotl [2015-10-18 19:20:37 +0000 UTC]

Yes, some things are really easy, but a lot of people do have problems with the article (der, die, das) and etc.

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AwkwardAxolotl In reply to TachibanaSan [2015-10-21 00:13:15 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, articles can get pretty tricky!

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MallowFluffy [2015-10-15 10:21:29 +0000 UTC]

NOOO!! WHY!!! ;w; IT WENT FROM ADORABLENESS TO HEARTBREAK!!

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TachibanaSan In reply to MallowFluffy [2015-10-15 11:35:35 +0000 UTC]

I am sooo sorry ;-;!! I never wrote a sad story and my other stories had a better ending... I never thought that this will happen at the end when I wrote it Dx sorry!!

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MallowFluffy In reply to TachibanaSan [2015-10-15 15:27:37 +0000 UTC]

XD It's okay! It's still a nice story! ;w; Only Ace died... once again... TwT

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TachibanaSan In reply to MallowFluffy [2015-10-15 15:43:34 +0000 UTC]

Okay,...
Thank you so much for liking it! ^^

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MallowFluffy In reply to TachibanaSan [2015-10-15 16:17:53 +0000 UTC]

No thank you for making a great story :3

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TachibanaSan In reply to MallowFluffy [2015-10-15 16:27:00 +0000 UTC]

Aww, you are welcome x3!!!

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Fluffysunbunny1 [2015-10-08 19:57:36 +0000 UTC]

ACEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!! QAQ

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TachibanaSan In reply to Fluffysunbunny1 [2015-10-08 19:59:11 +0000 UTC]

Don't cry!!!! T-T Ace will always stays in our hearts!!! We will never forget him!! I am so sorry for making you sad Dx *gives tissues and a bear hug*

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Fluffysunbunny1 In reply to TachibanaSan [2015-10-08 21:29:10 +0000 UTC]

He will!! QwQ
No no its ok!!! *hugs back*

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TachibanaSan In reply to Fluffysunbunny1 [2015-10-09 04:54:24 +0000 UTC]

I will miss him so much Q-Q!!

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Fluffysunbunny1 In reply to TachibanaSan [2015-10-09 23:44:53 +0000 UTC]

Yess!! Q7Q

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