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Published: 2009-12-01 03:03:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 557; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 6
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Description One cold Winter afternoon, Mimiko quietly walked home from school, looking down at her feet, the wind began to pick up, gently blowing her graceful brunette hair, "Mimiko-chan! Wait up!" A shrill voice called, Mimiko turned around, "Oh, Hi, Miyu-chan" She said, smiling, Miyu quickly ran up to her, smiling softly.

Mimiko heard her phone play a gentle tune, "Uwah~ It's Nagi-kun!" She exclaimed, quickly pressing "Ok" To answer her phone, "H-hello?!" Mimiko blurted out, "Jeez, Naiami-san, calm down" Nagihiko's voice flowed gracfully into her ear, "I-Im sorry, Wh-what was it you wanted...T-to say?" Mimiko asked, her cheeks were as red as and apple,

"W-would it be okay if...if you can meet me in the park in the next few minutes?" Nagihiko asked, Mimiko's cheeks burned, "H-hai~" She murmered, "See you there" Nagihiko whispered, hanging up, "M-Miyu-chan! I-I have to go!" Mimiko shouted, running off, "Nu~ Mimiko-chan?" Miyu murmered, she shrugged and walked home.

Mimiko quickly ran to the park, 'Wh-why does Nagi-kun want me to meet him at the part?' Mimiko questioned herself, she soon found herself at the part, luckily, it was vacant, a few leaves barrowled around in the wind, "I didn't exspect you to be here so soon" Mimiko whipped around, "N-Nagi-kun!" Mimiko shouted, alarmed, "Come, sit over here on the bench" Nagihiko said, Mimiko blushed a gentle pink and nodded,

"S-so....Wh-what did you need me here...f-for?" She asked, sitting down next to him, "W-well...You see.." Nagihiko stuttered, he gently took Mimiko's hands, "Ever since I first laid my eyes on you..I knew right then and there, that your were the prettiest girl i've ever seen.." Nagihiko whispered, Mimiko's cheeks brightend in color,

"Your eyes are the perfect mix of emerald green and a crisp, ocean blue" Nagihiko whispered, gently cupping Mimiko's cheeks, "Your voice is as soft as a feather, but as clear as a bell; Your just beautiful in every single way" Nagihiko murmered in Mimiko's ear, her cheeks burned roughly, "I love you, Mimiko Naiami-san" Nagihiko whispered,

"N-Nagi-kun..." Mimiko murmered, Nagihiko pulled back, blushing bright red, "Your face is red, and your lips are chapped," Mimiko pointed out, Nagihiko hid his face in the palm of his hand, "Sh-shut up" He muttered, Mimiko smiled, "It'll hurt if we kiss...real bad" She said, Nagihiko's face lightened as he pulled his hand away, he quickly gave her a peck on the lips, "W-well...how was it?" He muttered, "It was just as i thought..it was rough..and really, really dry" Mimiko said, Nagihiko scoffed, looking down, "Also..it was really, really warm..." Mimiko whispered, Nagihiko looked up and smiled, "Ne~ It's cold, so lets-" Nagihiko gently cut Mimiko off with his lips, much longer then the first.

Nagihiko slowly pulled away, "One more time~" Mimiko whispered, Nagihiko smiled and connected there lips again, 'One more time...One more time~' Mimiko thought, kissing him ever so passionately, Nagihiko clutched the back of her head, pulling her closer,

"Mimiko-chan" Nagihiko whispered, slowly pulling away, Mimiko smiled and softly hugged him, "I-I love you too...N-Nagi-kun" She whispered, "Nu~ Nagi-kun...can you stay the night?" Mimiko whined,

"If its okay with your parents" Nagihiko said, Mimiko stood up, "It's not...but there outta town...so, how will they know?" Mimiko whispered, smirking, "Oh, Mimiko-chan..you're still the same old you" Nagihiko sighed,

"Yeah, but its still the same old me that you fell in love with!" Mimiko shot out, Nagihiko smiled and stood up next to her, "I accept your invitiation, Mimiko-chan" He whispered, "Yes!" Mimiko cheered, throwing her arms around his neck,

Nagihiko took her hand, "C'mon! Lets Go~" He said, running with her,

'Nagi-kun's so free-spirited, so sweet and passionate...I love him so much...he makes my heart flutter with joy...' Mimiko thought, Nagihiko slowed down once he felt Mimiko's hand slip from his, "Uwah~ Nagi-kun....I feel weird" She whispered, Mimiko collapsed onto her knee's,

"Mimiko-chan!" Nagihiko gasped, "It feels so hard to breathe...I can't run..." Mimiko whispered weakly, fainting onto the cold pavement, Nagihiko paniced and picked the young girl up into his arms, "Were almost at your house, Mimiko-chan...almost there.." Nagihiko whispered.

What felt like hours later, Mimiko's eyes fluttered open, to see Nagihiko swiping a damp rag across her cheek, "Nagi...hiko..-kun" She whispered, "Ah~ Hello, Mimiko-chan!" Nagihiko exclaimed, smiling brightly, "Wh-where....Am I?" Mimiko asked, looking around, "In your room, silly! Don't you recognize your room?" Nagihiko said, Mimiko nodded,

"Wait! How'd you get in here?! And how'd you know which room was mine!?" Mimiko shouted, sitting up quickly, "I looked in your bag and found the key, ableing myself to unlock the door, As for your room...there's a big "Mimiko's Room" Sign on the door, quite obvious" Nagihiko said, Mimiko's cheeks burned as she yanked the covers over her, "Sh-shut up!!" Mimiko shouted,

Mimiko felt the bed dip next to her, Nagihiko was crawling in with her, "E-eh?! N-Nagihi-?!" Nagihiko quickly clamped his hand over Mimiko's mouth, "Shh~" He murmered, Mimiko wasn't sure if her cheeks could go any brighter, "I know your tired, Mimi-koi" Nagihiko whispered,

"Wait! What did you just call me?!" Mimiko shouted, "I called you, "Mimi-koi" is that fine with you?" Nagihiko asked, "It's fine...Now get down!" Mimiko shouted, Nagihiko climbed on top of her, pinning her to the bed, "Nagihiko! G-get off!!" Mimiko screamed, Nagihiko smirked and lowered his lips onto her's, Mimiko blushed and gasped into his mouth.

Mimiko eyes fluttered closed, wrapping her arms around his neck, Mimiko pulled away and pushed him off, flipping onto her side, "I'm tired, leave me alone" Mimiko muttered, Nagihiko smiled and closed his eyes, falling asleep next to her, Mimiko flipped over onto her other side and stared at Nagihiko, smiling softly, she hugged him and fell asleep.


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Comments: 59

BeHappyBeHungry [2011-02-02 03:18:11 +0000 UTC]

I was getting interested, then I realized it was Torara. Oh well, it's good and I can still picture it in my mind.

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Chiokoxx [2009-12-12 20:19:50 +0000 UTC]

IKASU!!! yu so good at love riting...cud I make request?

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tadamufangirl In reply to Chiokoxx [2009-12-12 20:27:14 +0000 UTC]

sure!

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Chiokoxx In reply to tadamufangirl [2009-12-12 21:22:47 +0000 UTC]

cud you right a love-story for me and Tadase-kun that also incluse Kiseki and Kisai?and maybe Platnium and Golden royale working together??

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tadamufangirl In reply to Chiokoxx [2009-12-12 22:10:55 +0000 UTC]

Uwah~ Im not sure...writing about another paring with tadase other then Amu would be quite dificalt

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Chiokoxx In reply to tadamufangirl [2009-12-13 11:32:30 +0000 UTC]

Oh okay....plz try?I'm really no good at serious romance...

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tadamufangirl In reply to Chiokoxx [2009-12-13 12:40:37 +0000 UTC]

i'll get to it

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Chiokoxx In reply to tadamufangirl [2009-12-13 14:10:47 +0000 UTC]

Domo Arigato kudasai!

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tadamufangirl In reply to Chiokoxx [2009-12-13 14:11:38 +0000 UTC]

uhm...domo
..domo..

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Chiokoxx In reply to tadamufangirl [2009-12-13 14:30:22 +0000 UTC]

^^

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tadamufangirl In reply to Chiokoxx [2009-12-13 14:32:04 +0000 UTC]

Cx

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Ventrive [2009-12-03 01:15:06 +0000 UTC]

awww cute

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tadamufangirl In reply to Ventrive [2009-12-03 04:23:50 +0000 UTC]

:3

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Ventrive In reply to tadamufangirl [2009-12-03 04:56:31 +0000 UTC]

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tadamufangirl In reply to Ventrive [2009-12-03 04:56:43 +0000 UTC]

o3o

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Ventrive In reply to tadamufangirl [2009-12-03 04:58:11 +0000 UTC]

^^

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Brownpup5 [2009-12-01 21:03:35 +0000 UTC]

Very good! Do I sense a little of Toradora in the kiss scene?

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tadamufangirl In reply to Brownpup5 [2009-12-02 10:12:00 +0000 UTC]

ya~

you can read me like a book nee-chan~

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Brownpup5 In reply to tadamufangirl [2009-12-02 21:57:06 +0000 UTC]

^^

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tadamufangirl In reply to Brownpup5 [2009-12-03 04:29:14 +0000 UTC]

lol

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OliviaNumber1Fan [2009-12-01 08:53:04 +0000 UTC]

Awwh, that was really cute! It made me fav it ^-^
That was well written, better than my writing xD

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tadamufangirl In reply to OliviaNumber1Fan [2009-12-01 09:19:11 +0000 UTC]

aww, thx!

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sabermist3 [2009-12-01 03:23:13 +0000 UTC]

that was soooooooooooooo cute!!!!!!!!! -w- but kinda nauty...

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tadamufangirl In reply to sabermist3 [2009-12-01 03:29:36 +0000 UTC]

OMFG STFU
D////////////////////<

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sabermist3 In reply to tadamufangirl [2009-12-01 03:34:00 +0000 UTC]

CB hm~?

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tadamufangirl In reply to sabermist3 [2009-12-01 03:35:13 +0000 UTC]

You Perv...

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sabermist3 In reply to tadamufangirl [2009-12-01 03:41:46 +0000 UTC]

gigglez! ^-^ wanna RP?

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tadamufangirl In reply to sabermist3 [2009-12-01 03:42:44 +0000 UTC]

im not good at that

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sabermist3 In reply to tadamufangirl [2009-12-01 04:21:56 +0000 UTC]

aw~ come on! ill start of!
Meghan:*looks at watch* come on, *looks around* its getting dark, where is he???
Evin:*runing tord me breathing hard* s-sorry im late!
Meghan: grait! shes not with you.
Evin: wha?

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tadamufangirl In reply to sabermist3 [2009-12-01 04:26:16 +0000 UTC]

"Over here!" Mimiko called, running twords them


sorry, i like to write in story form

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sabermist3 In reply to tadamufangirl [2009-12-01 04:32:13 +0000 UTC]

(^-^ thats fine! this will be good! )
Meghan: come on! the concert is about to start!
Evin: right, lets go!

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tadamufangirl In reply to sabermist3 [2009-12-01 04:57:44 +0000 UTC]

mimiko: concert? What concert?!

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sabermist3 In reply to tadamufangirl [2009-12-01 05:08:09 +0000 UTC]

Evin: she dosent know!?
Meghan: sorry, i couldent! *grabs her rist* were going to a 3 Doors Down concert! *runs to stadiom* lets go!
Evin:*right next to me running along* hehe!

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tadamufangirl In reply to sabermist3 [2009-12-01 05:09:24 +0000 UTC]

Mimiko: Ah~ I see

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sabermist3 In reply to tadamufangirl [2009-12-01 05:12:29 +0000 UTC]

*they get inside and you could her the croud and Kriptonite*
Jaspur: *waving hand up* COME ON! THERE STARTING!
Meghan: yay!!
Evin:*smiles softly*

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tadamufangirl In reply to sabermist3 [2009-12-01 05:13:44 +0000 UTC]

mimiko: *sighs* Im so tired of you guys dragging me around

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sabermist3 In reply to tadamufangirl [2009-12-01 05:17:14 +0000 UTC]

Meghan: at least we're here.*opens door, souds of the croud and the music bursts out tords us* WOOOOOOOOOOOO! *lets go of her arm at runs to the seets*
Evin:*smiles* she can be like this somtimes but over all shes a wonderful person...

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tadamufangirl In reply to sabermist3 [2009-12-01 05:19:12 +0000 UTC]

Mimiko: Eh~ Are you talking about me? *glare glare*

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sabermist3 In reply to tadamufangirl [2009-12-01 05:21:54 +0000 UTC]

Evin: eh? eh? n-no.... why would, no... *smiles* Meghans a beautiful, smart girl, she just dosent know it...

(he told me that once...

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tadamufangirl In reply to sabermist3 [2009-12-01 05:22:48 +0000 UTC]

Mimiko

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sabermist3 In reply to tadamufangirl [2009-12-01 05:23:45 +0000 UTC]

(i didnt get anything! XD)

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tadamufangirl In reply to sabermist3 [2009-12-01 05:24:52 +0000 UTC]

Mimiko: ohoho!

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sabermist3 In reply to tadamufangirl [2009-12-01 05:26:46 +0000 UTC]

Evin:*looks at you* what?

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tadamufangirl In reply to sabermist3 [2009-12-01 05:29:46 +0000 UTC]

mimiko: oh, nothing!

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sabermist3 In reply to tadamufangirl [2009-12-01 05:32:45 +0000 UTC]

Evin:*blink blink* hm.. *shrug* hay! meghan! *runs to me*
*all you could see was there mouths moving and i laugh, we sit, i wave back*

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tadamufangirl In reply to sabermist3 [2009-12-01 08:48:11 +0000 UTC]

mimiko: *sigh* if i fall asleep, don't wke me up

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sabermist3 In reply to tadamufangirl [2009-12-01 14:34:56 +0000 UTC]

Evin: hehe...

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tadamufangirl In reply to sabermist3 [2009-12-01 14:35:32 +0000 UTC]

Evin: you'd screem if miley cyrus was on
Mimiko: no shit sherlock

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sabermist3 In reply to tadamufangirl [2009-12-01 14:50:57 +0000 UTC]

Evin:=3= well this band is good to! AND DONT CALL ME SHERLOCK!
Meghan: stop arguing you to!

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tadamufangirl In reply to sabermist3 [2009-12-01 14:55:57 +0000 UTC]

me: impossible *glare glare*

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