Comments: 16
silver1998 [2010-10-10 22:28:33 +0000 UTC]
cool have you made a second chapter!!! is rav and rob a couple in this one?
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TeenyTitans [2009-08-23 18:15:14 +0000 UTC]
RAE/ROB SUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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bluelightningtw [2008-06-26 23:43:55 +0000 UTC]
A great beginning to a story with a very characteristic touch to it.
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17whitewolfs [2008-01-24 18:29:27 +0000 UTC]
great story wish I could do the same
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LadyWinter [2006-06-10 02:54:25 +0000 UTC]
great writing! I'm really enjoying it so far...If you don't mind, there are a few corrections I saw...(by the way, if you do mind, just tell me. some people don't like it and others like to correct typing errors). When I posted a story on my xanga site I found it helpful for a girl who read it to post my "SS" as she called it. (silly sentences).
"Starfire sat with his legs">>i think it should be "her"
"Cyborg and Beastboy was already there" >>were
"the door slide open">>slid
can't wait to read the rest...though I'll have to do that later.
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TadanoriOyama In reply to LadyWinter [2006-06-10 04:51:06 +0000 UTC]
Corrections are fine with me. I'd never catch them all on my own.
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Nexus-Seraphim999 [2006-06-08 13:49:24 +0000 UTC]
Damn, this is cool! You're one hell of a writer, the story sucked me right in! On to the next chapter!
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SoheeNight [2006-06-05 22:53:34 +0000 UTC]
Hope to see later chapters! You write pretty well!
I still think it would be an honor for my character to be in your fanfics! If not sounding to inpropiate.
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SoheeNight In reply to TadanoriOyama [2006-06-06 10:42:01 +0000 UTC]
That somehow is a great relief to know.
Hey? I know it might sound from a sudden but may I know when is your birthday? If you don't mind of course!
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TadanoriOyama In reply to SoheeNight [2006-06-06 15:00:11 +0000 UTC]
No problem. My birthday's on March 7th.
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