RangerBryn [2016-04-09 09:29:07 +0000 UTC]
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I really love the setting. Your proportions are really good, and you can really tell what the mood of the image is! I think perhaps if you could either blend some of the lighting or make it sharper, it could improve the piece a bit. The lighting on the blonde's right shoulder should be blended I think. But other than these couple of things, I think that this piece is absolutely amazing! I LOVE the hair, and it looks really natural! Also, the creases on the jumper look real if you know what I mean e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="395" title=" (Lick)"/> In short, this is a GORGEOUS piece that could be cleaned up slightly ^-^
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TaffyDesu In reply to RangerBryn [2016-04-09 14:03:17 +0000 UTC]
Thank you soo much for your great critique! Was really helpful
RangerBryn In reply to TaffyDesu [2016-04-15 23:26:29 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome! I'm glad I helped Β
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RyuDrago [2016-04-09 09:09:20 +0000 UTC]
Yeah more starchild smoochies! ^_^ <3
TaffyDesu In reply to RyuDrago [2016-04-09 14:03:33 +0000 UTC]
YAY
MsVendetta [2016-04-09 07:59:36 +0000 UTC]
Woah!! nice lighting <3
TaffyDesu In reply to MsVendetta [2016-04-09 08:02:42 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! <33