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If you want to see Layout 2, please click on this [link]

Ok, so in my Creative Writing 1 class, we were assigned to write and draw a children's book. This is my layout for the pages and cover, so please keep reading so that this makes sense to you! Keep in mind that the project is supposed to be aimed at 3-5 year olds, so keep all the "this looks gay" comments to yourself

MAIN PLOT:
The main story starts as Tahoe draws something on paper. Since he's an artist, he enjoys drawing, but he thinks his art isn't that great. As the story progresses, his friends try to cheer him up by showing off their talents/hobbies and in the meantime, they hint that practicing will help Tahoe improve his talent. Eventually, Tahoe practices and draws an amazing drawing at the end of the book.

The assignment required us to have both an academic and a life lesson. My life lesson in the story is "practice makes perfect" and the academics is exposing kids to different hobbies/talents.

WHAT'S ON THIS LAYOUT:
This side of the layout shows the front and back cover, front insert pages, dedication page, interior title page, and the first half of the story until page 10 (the rest of the layout is coming up soon on DA).

STORYLINE ON THIS LAYOUT:
(Follow this section by referring to the page numbers in the storyline)
1.) This is Tahoe when he's drawing something and thinks to himself that his art stinks. He then gets depressed.
2.)Tahoe's friend, Miko the Fox, comes over and tries to cheer up Tahoe by offering to show him his newest dance.
3.) Miko does his dance and Tahoe asks how he learned to do it.
4.) Miko then says that he learned it by practicing. He then says good bye and leaves.
5.) Tahoe's other friend, Vincent the Deer, comes over and tried to cheer Tahoe up by showing him a football drill he learned out on the field.
6.) Vincent shows the drill and Tahoe asks how he learned how to do it.
7.) Vincent tells him that he learned it by practicing. He then says goodbye and leaves.
8.) Tahoe meditates on what he's seen his friends do so far and ponders if practicing will help him get better at art.
9.) Tahoe begins to cry because he keeps thinking to himself that he won't get better no matter what.
10.) Tahoe's friend, Lilly the Otter, sees him crying and tries to cheer him up by showing him how fast she can swim in her local swim meets at school.

Well, I hope you like this story! I had fun making it. To see Layout 2, please click on this [link]

Story, characters, illustrations and everything else involving this story (c) Rudi (Me)
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Comments: 14

Wordgirlserenity67 [2015-03-28 20:46:30 +0000 UTC]

Wicked cool! I'm a writer myself  My book is right here: www.amazon.com/Kindergarten-De…

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dazed-succubus [2009-05-11 13:58:32 +0000 UTC]

Yay! ^^ Rudi's drawing again!! *hug*

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aokamidu [2009-05-10 19:00:35 +0000 UTC]

Oh, and I didn't make my original comment a critique since I'm not very good at those.

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aokamidu [2009-05-10 19:00:06 +0000 UTC]

Ah this takes me back to my university days...

Indeed, we had to do something like this for a project all of our own; I chose to do a young Pliny the Elder's perspective on the Pompeii eruption.

Regardless, nice start you've done there, leaving room for the text. However, what I was taught was that when doing the page drafts, always do a scaled down box of the format you're working with, unless this is purely the thumbnails stage. Still, be aware that you'll be working within a constrained box-of-vision. Print has to remain inside a "safe zone" for the printers, and well, since you're such a graphic based artist, I'd say leave a bit of breathing for the 'bleed'. What I've learnt is that it's always safest to work larger than you intend to show with backgrounds so at least when it comes to cropping down, nothing valuable you want is accidentally snipped out.

Of course, I'm rambling and just going on what I could remember of my classes nearly 4 years ago now and I haven't seriously done anything outside of that one commission I got the summer of 2007.

By the way, I like your consistency on the last three pages. How big of a book is it? And are these all single pages on a landscape format, considering the audience you're tailoring it for. I

If you're interested, I can show you the remnants of my aforementioned project (although my project was going for a slightly older market, 7-10 really so I could afford the text), so you can see what I did. Not that you need it, I think you're doing very well here and have progressed very nicely for such an important project. From what I saw of American children's illustration, it all seemed to be going for a kind of believable realism moment, but then again, it totally depends on the subject matter and the nature of the book and its publisher and all sorts. I think your style will work though; bright, bold, colourful. Definetely a plus. Just make sure they look cute. I got remonstrated for making my work too... beast-ish. I wish I had done a Lauren Child and just scribbled but never mind.

Apologies if I came across as overly critical or just blathering pigswill. Still, I wish you the best of luck with this project.

I hope post-production goes smoothly for you.

Best wishes.

P.S. Apologies for taking so long on commenting; I just wanted to make sure I had something worth saying properly, ya know?

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TahoeWolf In reply to aokamidu [2009-05-12 23:44:14 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, I'd LOVE to see your unfinished book project :3

Thanks for all the wonderful input Kami :3

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mamei799 [2009-05-07 22:49:56 +0000 UTC]

awww hehe but looks interesting :3

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LeftWingDuck [2009-05-07 00:44:07 +0000 UTC]

Yay for stories!

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spiritedfox [2009-05-07 00:38:40 +0000 UTC]

Heh, I can't wait to see the whole project when you're done. You're defiantly a wonderful storyteller. The idea is very unique too. :3 Also your layout is very clean and smooth. The expressions are very well done and you can tell EXACTLY what the character is thinking and feeling. Keep up the great work, RudiKa. I know you will! ;3

As for this fox, he's going to read on what more great work you have!

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TahoeWolf In reply to spiritedfox [2009-05-07 10:14:43 +0000 UTC]

Thanks you :3

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spiritedfox In reply to TahoeWolf [2009-05-07 13:35:08 +0000 UTC]

No problem. :3

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RedRodent [2009-05-06 23:42:58 +0000 UTC]

Awwww, poor Tahoe >: I hope the story has a happy ending! :3

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TahoeWolf In reply to RedRodent [2009-05-07 00:19:14 +0000 UTC]

LOL, of course it does. I'm not THAT mean to the poor wuff D:

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RedRodent In reply to TahoeWolf [2009-05-07 06:26:29 +0000 UTC]

Especially considering that the poor wuff is you

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TahoeWolf In reply to RedRodent [2009-05-07 10:13:47 +0000 UTC]

Yeah

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