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dazed-succubus [2009-05-11 13:58:32 +0000 UTC]
Yay! ^^ Rudi's drawing again!! *hug*
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aokamidu [2009-05-10 19:00:06 +0000 UTC]
Ah this takes me back to my university days...
Indeed, we had to do something like this for a project all of our own; I chose to do a young Pliny the Elder's perspective on the Pompeii eruption.
Regardless, nice start you've done there, leaving room for the text. However, what I was taught was that when doing the page drafts, always do a scaled down box of the format you're working with, unless this is purely the thumbnails stage. Still, be aware that you'll be working within a constrained box-of-vision. Print has to remain inside a "safe zone" for the printers, and well, since you're such a graphic based artist, I'd say leave a bit of breathing for the 'bleed'. What I've learnt is that it's always safest to work larger than you intend to show with backgrounds so at least when it comes to cropping down, nothing valuable you want is accidentally snipped out.
Of course, I'm rambling and just going on what I could remember of my classes nearly 4 years ago now and I haven't seriously done anything outside of that one commission I got the summer of 2007.
By the way, I like your consistency on the last three pages. How big of a book is it? And are these all single pages on a landscape format, considering the audience you're tailoring it for. I
If you're interested, I can show you the remnants of my aforementioned project (although my project was going for a slightly older market, 7-10 really so I could afford the text), so you can see what I did. Not that you need it, I think you're doing very well here and have progressed very nicely for such an important project. From what I saw of American children's illustration, it all seemed to be going for a kind of believable realism moment, but then again, it totally depends on the subject matter and the nature of the book and its publisher and all sorts. I think your style will work though; bright, bold, colourful. Definetely a plus. Just make sure they look cute. I got remonstrated for making my work too... beast-ish. I wish I had done a Lauren Child and just scribbled but never mind.
Apologies if I came across as overly critical or just blathering pigswill. Still, I wish you the best of luck with this project.
I hope post-production goes smoothly for you.
Best wishes.
P.S. Apologies for taking so long on commenting; I just wanted to make sure I had something worth saying properly, ya know?
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TahoeWolf In reply to aokamidu [2009-05-12 23:44:14 +0000 UTC]
Hehe, I'd LOVE to see your unfinished book project :3
Thanks for all the wonderful input Kami :3
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mamei799 [2009-05-07 22:49:56 +0000 UTC]
awww hehe but looks interesting :3
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LeftWingDuck [2009-05-07 00:44:07 +0000 UTC]
Yay for stories!
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RedRodent [2009-05-06 23:42:58 +0000 UTC]
Awwww, poor Tahoe >: I hope the story has a happy ending! :3
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TahoeWolf In reply to RedRodent [2009-05-07 00:19:14 +0000 UTC]
LOL, of course it does. I'm not THAT mean to the poor wuff D:
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