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Tails212 — Poetry: Given up?
Published: 2008-12-20 13:39:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 639; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 6
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If one man were to say:" Your pride is on the line "
Would man not stand up
and defend their honor?
Like a boxer does to earn their gloves
Or a mother earning their child's trust?
Bound by the feelings they keep
Emotions pushing them on
If I was to fall, Knowing I tried
Yea, I could quit if I wanted
but to earn my gloves
I can't give up
Should you?
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Comments: 12
Not bad. The message is solid and it flows well.
You keep saying "there" when it should be "their", though.
Other than that, pretty good.
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Ah I never knew, and no one pointed it out so I assumed it was the correct wording
Thanks, I'll edit those the now, and
Thanks again
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Just. Beautiful. Meaningful. Inspirational. Heartfelt.
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O_O scarey plz, scares me...
to much joyful joy lol
thanks though
glad u thought so
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Very nice . I acctually liek this one more than others you have done in teh past .
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uh thanks
yea same
good thing I didn't upload the cheesey one I wrote seconds after this one lulz
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nope. I'm gonna wait until I have more time and maybe re write it
maybe
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i dont give up O_O
when have I ever said I give up whilst sparring?
I just act lazy
stop reading my stuff xD
jk jk
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