Comments: 8
Dingopox [2018-08-24 21:19:12 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad for the flash intro of Silver, I like a fast paced comic.
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GammaEmerald [2018-08-04 19:26:16 +0000 UTC]
Starting with Silver already huh
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Tailsimp In reply to GammaEmerald [2018-08-04 21:33:38 +0000 UTC]
Yep! Getting right to the action!
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Cypher-DS [2018-08-01 00:09:43 +0000 UTC]
It begins!
Quick critique: The very top panel has a slightly odd perspective - I wasn't sure if it was a side view of the beach or a bird's eye view from overhead. For me, part of it has to do with the vertical dunsparse - it looks like it's sitting atop a cliff/overhang that's looking down on the beach. The flat beach blankets also add to this perspective oddity.
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Tailsimp In reply to Cypher-DS [2018-08-01 22:13:52 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for your critique. Now that you mention it I can see how the rock with dunsparce could be confusing; I think if I had shaded the rock itself better I could have avoided that. I'll keep that in mind for similar shots in the future!
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Zerochan923600 [2018-07-14 04:12:40 +0000 UTC]
always nice to see a different order of things from the game. and a different environment too!
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Tailsimp In reply to Zerochan923600 [2018-07-19 17:13:24 +0000 UTC]
I hope everyone likes it!
Fun fact: this is a place in the early games; just a part of it that I don't see utilized in many Johto nuzlockes. I'm trying to strike that balance of keeping it fresh but not changing too much.
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