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Areat In reply to WillowD [2021-10-11 02:46:22 +0000 UTC]
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WillowD In reply to Areat [2021-11-03 02:03:57 +0000 UTC]
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Seething-Snorlax [2020-02-07 19:45:06 +0000 UTC]
I kind of wish that he would atleast have become older again so they could still go out (obviously staying as a chick though as part of the lesson)
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Cabbitgurl [2019-03-02 09:04:30 +0000 UTC]
Jamie is kinda an evil bitch. I mean the kid turned around and won and she just kept on lying. She got off on torturing the poor kid, I mean he was a dick and I've vmet MANY guys like him and do wish they'd get some kinda comeuppance but... what good is a lesson if there is no undoing the punishment? How do you learn from the punishment? He'll just grow up extremely paranoid of everything and become a psychological mess of a child. All for Jamie's amusement.
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Alienbjn7 [2019-01-03 23:00:51 +0000 UTC]
Everyone must keep their promises. Mark my words Jammie...you will pay.
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Areat [2017-08-30 19:58:41 +0000 UTC]
Oh...
I've read and greatly enjoyed a lot of your unfair and dark stories, but somehow this one saddened me more.
Maybe because the character really seem to show repentance, and as we have seen with the faulty controller, according to Jamie own rules cheating is wrong. Evie really deserved a win.
I would be curious to see what alternative ending you may have written. Having Evie remain a baby but at least be a boy again, so that he couldbe back to his former life with time, maybe?
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ARstories [2015-08-09 10:00:30 +0000 UTC]
Really fun story! Looking forward to the next update...
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takatouiori In reply to ARstories [2015-08-11 21:29:51 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, I'm glad you've enjoyed it. I've been a bit busy lately but hopefully the next update won't be too long.
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LillyOnymous [2015-08-08 07:40:59 +0000 UTC]
*glomps Taka!* Thankoo thankoo thankoooo! ^^ It's da bestest story evers!
Also, Lilly is da bestest character ever just 'cause... I mean I don' have a reason or anything to say that... ^_^
*huggles!* Thankoos so much... I can't wait to show you my part of the trade! ^^
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takatouiori In reply to LillyOnymous [2015-08-11 23:25:04 +0000 UTC]
Ahhh I was kidding! Lilly is the bestest that ever was!
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Alienbjn7 In reply to MetamorphOfChaos [2018-08-03 19:16:36 +0000 UTC]
A promise is a promise. He will go back the way he was...if he wants to
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Orateck In reply to MetamorphOfChaos [2015-08-16 22:21:57 +0000 UTC]
its far from Karma, Evan wasent a bad guy, he just shared a common view of a stereotype, cheering for the girl who changed him, literaly deleting his former life all the time taunting him, and the first time he honistly to god beat her fair and square, she refuses to keep her word and change him back, honistly Jamie is the real villan of this story.
That Being said, it was a great story and i enjoyed it.
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MetamorphOfChaos In reply to Orateck [2015-08-16 23:21:20 +0000 UTC]
Actually, I was talking about how karmic it would be for Jamie to turn into a little girl with no knowledge of gaming as punishment for not keeping her word.
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