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TakayoTemujin — Rise to Leadership 13

Published: 2009-06-01 11:35:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 3015; Favourites: 35; Downloads: 0
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Description Finally, i manage to complete part 13. Its very satisfying everytime i flip through my sketch book, sometimes i wonder if i really did all of this, im really happy that you guys out there really like my drawings! Thks you ! Please comment!

The story cont's- Dachande leap off the branch and caught the hardmeat's uncontrollable sickled like tail. In that split second, the Reaper Alien lift its head to see what caught its tail, Dachande with its body weight pierced the tail through the head with stunning speed!

The hardmeat roars in pain, tearing the flesh from its previous wounds and dislocating the jaw. Broken Tusk twist the sickled tail and drives it into the nervous system permanently ending its life.

It falls and Dachande roars with victory, with hope and excitement coursing through its very veins...

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Comments: 39

RedAngel-Sarah [2011-02-08 21:10:49 +0000 UTC]

Wowwwwww......

That's cool made o.O

From now on I am your Fan ^w^

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TakayoTemujin In reply to RedAngel-Sarah [2012-05-08 10:09:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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magicwolfimp [2010-10-16 22:53:06 +0000 UTC]

victory Yayz! and with such a badass killing move!

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ultrachicken [2009-07-10 07:21:52 +0000 UTC]

cool, is this comic published?

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TakayoTemujin In reply to ultrachicken [2009-07-10 08:01:07 +0000 UTC]

Nope. Its my personal work.

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dzafri [2009-06-03 02:36:17 +0000 UTC]

using the tail, that's clever dude !! I'm sure not many pred fan even thought of this XD.
Yeah !! you rock !!

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TakayoTemujin In reply to dzafri [2009-06-03 03:05:20 +0000 UTC]

Tks! Any mistakes?

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dzafri In reply to TakayoTemujin [2009-06-03 04:09:40 +0000 UTC]

Nope.all of em are good

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TakayoTemujin In reply to dzafri [2009-06-03 05:31:50 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm... tks!

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mortalshinobi [2009-06-01 18:35:00 +0000 UTC]

Pretty good page and nice concept, killing the alien with its own tail. You may wish to reduce the number of speed lines on the top corner image where dechande is jamming the tail into the skull. He kind of gets lost because of so many lines-but other then that I like it fairly well.

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TakayoTemujin In reply to mortalshinobi [2009-06-02 02:28:22 +0000 UTC]

But still, i wanted to make the background with more speed, like blinding u know? I think im still too excited in completing this page that i lost myself...

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mortalshinobi In reply to TakayoTemujin [2009-06-02 14:08:12 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, it gets kind of difficult to find the exact medium between figure and motion sometimes. Nice work so far.

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TakayoTemujin In reply to mortalshinobi [2009-06-03 03:06:52 +0000 UTC]

hahha tks! I realised using 0.05 the best for drawing.

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mortalshinobi In reply to TakayoTemujin [2009-06-03 03:24:34 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome.

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TakayoTemujin In reply to mortalshinobi [2009-06-02 02:17:54 +0000 UTC]

True, i regret using o.3 linings foe the back ground, i was too hasty... maybe i can do a white outline around him...

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mortalshinobi In reply to TakayoTemujin [2009-06-02 14:09:33 +0000 UTC]

Might work. You'd still want a few lines hitting him but not too many.

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TakayoTemujin In reply to mortalshinobi [2009-06-03 03:06:21 +0000 UTC]

Oh well.... too late..

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mortalshinobi In reply to TakayoTemujin [2009-06-03 03:24:20 +0000 UTC]

well, for next time I guess.

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TakayoTemujin In reply to mortalshinobi [2009-06-03 05:32:00 +0000 UTC]

Yep!

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chibilombax [2009-06-01 14:29:04 +0000 UTC]

what a satisfying page

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TakayoTemujin In reply to chibilombax [2009-06-02 02:16:16 +0000 UTC]

Really? Not too easy with the kill?

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chibilombax In reply to TakayoTemujin [2009-06-02 02:21:19 +0000 UTC]

im sure Dachande can tell the story differently a little bit to impress the pups more ^^ the tail thing was actually very clever.

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TakayoTemujin In reply to chibilombax [2009-06-02 02:26:19 +0000 UTC]

Hahhaha... Tks tks.. any problem with the drawings?

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chibilombax In reply to TakayoTemujin [2009-06-02 02:29:28 +0000 UTC]

none that i see so far. the aliens jaw seems to extend really far when its roaring in pain but thats nothing really serious

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TakayoTemujin In reply to chibilombax [2009-06-02 03:20:26 +0000 UTC]

Like i've written, dislocate its jaws~

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chibilombax In reply to TakayoTemujin [2009-06-02 03:33:15 +0000 UTC]

oh thats right. my mistake then

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TakayoTemujin In reply to chibilombax [2009-06-02 06:04:59 +0000 UTC]

Its ok...

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Doodlebotbop [2009-06-01 14:15:39 +0000 UTC]

Heck yeah he should be excited! Dang! That will make a good story for him to tell for the rest of his life!

Awesome action filled page!

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TakayoTemujin In reply to Doodlebotbop [2009-06-02 02:18:15 +0000 UTC]

Tks!

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Slangblade [2009-06-01 13:30:10 +0000 UTC]

Dachande wins!

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TakayoTemujin In reply to Slangblade [2009-06-02 02:16:41 +0000 UTC]

Elder!

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Predator755 [2009-06-01 13:13:41 +0000 UTC]

Boo ya! Nice work!

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TakayoTemujin In reply to Predator755 [2009-06-02 02:18:05 +0000 UTC]

Tks!

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Predator755 In reply to TakayoTemujin [2009-06-02 04:23:37 +0000 UTC]

No prob!

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Dragondude8102 [2009-06-01 11:45:06 +0000 UTC]

hahaha massive pwnage right there

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TakayoTemujin In reply to Dragondude8102 [2009-06-01 12:10:23 +0000 UTC]

Yep!

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Dragondude8102 In reply to TakayoTemujin [2009-06-01 20:07:29 +0000 UTC]

woohoo now his an elder right???

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TakayoTemujin In reply to Dragondude8102 [2009-06-02 02:20:33 +0000 UTC]

Yep.

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Dragondude8102 In reply to TakayoTemujin [2009-06-02 12:07:00 +0000 UTC]

cool

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