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Published: 2010-10-11 19:44:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 8159; Favourites: 166; Downloads: 0
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dont take the speeches too seriously .. the real thing wont be like this. I just sketched some pages for fun hope you like
chinook always fights with his hands in his pockets .. he only takes them out when his opponent is worthy of offering a good fight. so he enjoys to mock the enemy hehe
Edit: i did a mistake on the first 4 panels( from the left) haha those panels have to be seen from left to right . The others are from right to left sorry ^^'
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I really like your style: it seems a mixture between Bleach, Naruto and a little echo of occidental comics... a really explosive mixture, though. :3 don't give up, I'm curious to read more....
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Oh moi deusss *-*
Mas q cena T-T se eu fosse a ti fugia na proxima aula de gda, pk vais levar tareiiaaa!!! xp desenhas demasiado bem, pah!!!
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ai não, pobre de mim 
haha obrigado (:
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haha the joys of american comics and reading manga. I always get confused reading american comics now.
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beautiful body/poses O_O I can never draw them like that!
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You might want to add a bit more environment shots. When you just put character face shots it kind of makes things a little dull. Just my opinion anyway.
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well i did draw some clouds haha this is just a sketch, nothing like the final result
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I like the maturity of the fight. Don't censor blood out...
Only problem in the sketch is that the bottom right of the page with the leg is misleading as far as direction is concerned. The lighting seems off if we are looking at it from the person getting hits POV...
Still great I'm sure you've already considered that as a factor, just thought I throw my two cents in.
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leg knows its way, dont worry .. and lighting?
thankks
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great... figured you knew what was going down in that.
Just seems like the sketch didn't display the proper shading, idk overactive imagination gone wild over here...
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The placement of Takoru's arms in the panel where he's kicking Chinook in the face... bugs me. You can do better than that, friend.
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its not takoru haha and i dont see any problem with arms. what do you mean?
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They're not a very natural position for the arms, unless his arms are made of spaghettttti.
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No wonder I was a little confused how to read this, took my 4 times to get it
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Wow this is great! Have you got your new pens yet?
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Awesome as always. The thing I like most about your art is the motion and life you put into it. I've also read that others don't like the realistic style in your art, but I think it's cool. It's really unique.
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this looks so awesome! I love your style of everything!
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cool beans. glad to see your putting together pages now, this is an awesome fight scene C: and the panel thing happens when your thinking in an English mindset, you wanna draw from left to right. it's something psychologically affiliated. bleh.
and good thing you were messing around with the dialogue, almost gave me a little scare XD
but great job bro
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I find that drawing fight scenes is the most difficult for me. How do you come up with such awesome fighting poses/panels? Any inspiration?
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I just practice anatomy a lot. If you know anatomy precisely then its easy to make fighting poses in any angle you want
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So, now... WORK !!! I hope that I could read you soon. Bye
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I will be hunting for this on the shelves religiously. I'm falling in love.
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Pride, and love - That's the only thing worth fighting for! Well, I wish I could read your comic one day.
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Believe it or not, your art (hands) is a wonderful teacher!
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Ok not taking this seriously but I can't tell if it's reading from left to right or the other way. Drawing wise though it's looking cool.
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