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Takumi-ice — What if?
Published: 2006-02-07 23:55:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 88; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 2
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Description IfI died tonight, would I shine in the light?
If I died tonight, would I be lost to your sight?

What if I just faded away?
Would you look around or bother to stay?

If I was killed in a fiery blast,
Would you run away real fast?
Or if I died in a blast,
Would you help my soul pass?

Would you care at all?
Would you stop to call?

Would your heart have sunk?
Or would it continue with its normal thump?
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Comments: 4

yumi-neko-x13 [2006-02-08 04:45:05 +0000 UTC]

i love it!

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SatanLovesChildren [2006-02-08 01:12:12 +0000 UTC]

Nice!

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Killerlolsword [2006-02-07 23:57:24 +0000 UTC]

wow great feelings and nice wording. The only thing I would suggest is to be more careful about typos (unless thats supposed to be that way) good job!

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Tavana [2006-02-07 23:56:42 +0000 UTC]

Not bad.

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