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tanasinnss — Scratch Character Sheet for N'efu And Species

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Published: 2015-12-25 04:27:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 670; Favourites: 13; Downloads: 0
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Description N'efu - Wanderer of Wastes, King of Carnage (Closed Species)

This was the new monster I was talking about in an earlier submission, though this character sheet is only just the basics, it gives a pretty good idea of what I'm creating.
This new character I'm creating isnt fully developed yet, but I have worked out the majority of his specs.

The character, N'efu, which means Wasteland in the rustic Igbo language, is an entirely skeletal character. He is part of a god like species, called Enaid Dyn (meaning literally Soul of Man) that was created by man to help rule the earth, a group of living weapons per say, that could topple cities and incinerate a continent in a single day. His own power was unrivaled, and so he was feared by all who opposed him, as his ferocity and evil could not be matched. Because of this his creators had him and his brethren incinerate the earth as a final trump card of war, and so they sent humanity plummeting into extinction. After their power was maxed out, their minds and bodies became dormant, and they were covered by ash for over a thousand years, buried deep within the earth. Now he awakens to once again walk the earth.
Though this time he is alone.
And Earth has created something new in his absence.


The bodies of the Enaid Dyn cannot be melted, burned, scratched, or destroyed by any man-made weapon, and can only be destroyed by a fellow creature. The creatures themselves can emit a highly charged beam from their mouths, which power is ten times stronger than any nuclear weapon's. Because of this immense power though, the creature must take at least thirty minutes to cool down before emitting another blast, or else its skeletal bones will begin to melt. The Enaid Dyn can also fly, walk on water, and can shrink and grow at will. The creatures are also immensely intelligent beings who can even glimpse into the future. They also cannot breathe or feel pain, and emotions are distant.

(In case you cant read the side diagram)
HORNS- The horns are used for channeling and centralizing power, and for also sensing aura. The Enaid Dyn can use their horns to read the power level of another creature, and channel the psychic waves they use for communication, as these creatures cannot physically hear or speak, but rely solely on telepathy to communicate.

EYES- The eyes of the Enaid Dyn are significantly more developed than human eyes, and have a further depth perception and range. The vision of these creatures also has increased clarity, and they can somewhat see through opaque objects. Because the creatures are entirely skeletal, they do not have a physical eyeball, and so rely upon a magnetic field created within the eye sockets by the horns to see. So the creatures cannot be blinded easily.

HEAT CAVITY- This chamber located directly south of the Orbit, or eye socket, is completely used to help cool off the mouth of the Enaid Dyn. Because of how the chamber is shaped, a certain pressure field is maintained within the cavity, to keep the area below freezing temperatures. It also creates a vacuum for heat, and draws the hot air inside to cool it quickly and efficiently.

NASAL CAVITY- This chamber located south of the Heat Cavity, is used to balance out the pressure of the Heat Cavity, and to also absorb heat as well.

MOLARS- The molar teeth of an Enaid Dyn are extremely robust, and are stronger than a diamond. With a bite force of 1,000,000,000 PSI (per square inch), these creatures can crush anything within their jaws except the bones of each other. 

CANINES AND INCISORS- The Incisors are similar to the molar teeth, though have more shredding than crushing power. The canines are the main shredding factor, and can rip apart steel hulls of ships or planes like they were made of paper. The canines are permanent, as with all the teeth, and are extremely hard to remove or break. 

The Enaid Dyn are an infertile race of all males, and there have only been five known to exist in recorded history.



(I would also appreciate any and all feedback on this species, and please point out any gaps that may be apparent in this initial information. PLEASE COMMENT X3 and this species is CLOSED until i work on it further)

This is copyright of ABlackOrange! Please do not use this art without permission!
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Comments: 8

Tamuril-Vardamir [2015-12-26 15:28:19 +0000 UTC]

Awesome concept!! I'm totally watching to keep up with this character/species

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tanasinnss In reply to Tamuril-Vardamir [2015-12-26 15:51:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! Is there anything that you see that might need to be improved on? This species is just in the beginning stages so it is very open to feedback!

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Zunnash [2015-12-25 04:48:48 +0000 UTC]

"Oh look it's a horse skull...wait, horses don't have horns or fangs!!!!" that was me first inspecting it
By the way, I took my time to read it, and it's a very interesting story. I'd lovely to see them being used in a story

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tanasinnss In reply to Zunnash [2015-12-25 04:52:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!!! ^^ Let me know if there is anything that you feel should be added to make them better and/or complex, or if there is anything that should be fixed because it makes no sense at all. I am planning on building upon this species in the future, but for right now this is all I have. But thank you for your support!    

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Zunnash In reply to tanasinnss [2015-12-25 05:15:33 +0000 UTC]

I like the "gaps" in it's story, it make them look more mystical you know, what I'd do if I were you, i would make some "historical evidences" like an indian drawing on an wall or maybe even Viking runes on a stone mentioning something similar you know, just to add to the universe. but it's perfect so far

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tanasinnss In reply to Zunnash [2015-12-25 05:19:18 +0000 UTC]

Ah yes! I have thought of that! Though I will probably plan on how to put the historical pieces together. X3 but thank you for your generous input.  

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Zunnash In reply to tanasinnss [2015-12-25 05:21:43 +0000 UTC]

n_n Since i'm watching you (not in the stalker way) I'll keep my eye on this project of yours, you've got my attention

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tanasinnss In reply to Zunnash [2015-12-25 05:23:25 +0000 UTC]

Again, thank you so much!     

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