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Published: 2015-06-02 20:10:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 3489; Favourites: 132; Downloads: 0
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My veins arepumping honey,
with sweet memories
of you
I touch my chest
and feel the beating,
sticky liquid
seeping
through.
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Comments: 56
wow this "honey" *3* your poem gives such a warm feeling! Nicely written ^-^
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Awwww thank you!!! <333
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It's kinda short but it's sounded so cute and innocent :3
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That is what I was going for. XD
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then you got it real well XD
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I think that this poem is really well written. Β I love how innocent it sounds, at least in the beginning. Β It's like the narrator of the poem is just reminiscing about a new or old love, but then the second stanza hits and you just get this feeling of a slightly darker meaning. Β I'm not sure what that meaning could be, but I did get the feeling. Β Overall a powerful short poem. Β Love it. Β Β Β
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Hahha, was going for cutesy innocence! XD
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Does it? hmmm interesting. Thanks for the insight!Β
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Yeah.... almost like a bleeding wound.
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Awwww thank you!!!
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Nope! But if you want to make it about that, your choice!
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THANK YOU 
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Romantic it is simple but it gets the point of love across to the reader nice work 
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Wasn't supposed to be! >.< But thanks for the comment!
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hmm....interesting....i might have a piece to add on to this idea soon...
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Ohhh yay! Make sure you tag me in it~
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YOU are amazing! Thanks for reading!
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I know! I guess, maybe, I am a hopeless romantic??
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Well, I'm the same
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