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Published: 2016-02-15 17:36:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 3225; Favourites: 104; Downloads: 0
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Description they say
her heart
is like a hurricane-
a molten mess
of those she had loved

for boys muttered
mindlessly
lightning lies
on their tongues,

with no respect
to the storm
she'd become
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Comments: 34

Rawruru [2016-02-29 18:08:05 +0000 UTC]

What a beautiful poem. *~* Absolutely love it!

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Tangled-Tales In reply to Rawruru [2016-02-29 23:58:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so very much! I hope the rest of my gallery interests you!

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SurrealNacre [2016-02-21 03:24:34 +0000 UTC]

Wow i reaallly like this one <3

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Tangled-Tales In reply to SurrealNacre [2016-02-22 14:43:30 +0000 UTC]

Ahhh thank you so much!

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SurrealNacre In reply to Tangled-Tales [2016-02-23 23:25:09 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome!!

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TodallyNotAmazing [2016-02-20 03:43:18 +0000 UTC]

I love this poem that you made and it's really cool that you were able to do a trade with FridgePoetProject. She is really nice just like you.

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Tangled-Tales In reply to TodallyNotAmazing [2016-02-22 14:43:53 +0000 UTC]

Ahhh thank you so much!!

And yes it was wonderful!! She is so kind!

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TodallyNotAmazing In reply to Tangled-Tales [2016-02-22 15:53:13 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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Nortstar [2016-02-16 20:14:48 +0000 UTC]

it is really good poem

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Tangled-Tales In reply to Nortstar [2016-02-18 00:55:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Nortstar In reply to Tangled-Tales [2016-02-19 18:52:11 +0000 UTC]

you are welcome

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ANGRYLETTE [2016-02-16 19:43:41 +0000 UTC]

Love this. Excellent job at making me feel your feelings. Got me..

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Tangled-Tales In reply to ANGRYLETTE [2016-02-18 00:54:45 +0000 UTC]

Awww, so wonderful to hear!

Thanks for taking the time to read and comment!

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kassandraelise [2016-02-16 12:27:02 +0000 UTC]

beautifully written.

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Tangled-Tales In reply to kassandraelise [2016-02-16 15:58:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!!

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iamburningfire [2016-02-15 22:57:30 +0000 UTC]

Lovely I really loved reading this you did an excellent job

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Tangled-Tales In reply to iamburningfire [2016-02-16 01:41:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so very much!!

Stay awesome!

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FridgePoetProject [2016-02-15 20:05:22 +0000 UTC]

Simply gorgeous!! Β That last stanza sent the most wonderful shiver down my spine, and you can really feel your own heart tangling up like a hurricane as you read it. Β Awesome stuff, and thanks for the inspiration trade, my dear -- t'was oh-so-much fun! Β  Β 

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Tangled-Tales In reply to FridgePoetProject [2016-02-16 01:42:09 +0000 UTC]

Ahhhh you are too kind! Your work is quite amazing!

So much fun to do !

Best of luck, keep enjoying writing! Don't waste the talent within you! <3

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FridgePoetProject In reply to Tangled-Tales [2016-02-16 03:48:03 +0000 UTC]

A mantra to live by if ever I heard one! Β Wishing you the very same, my dear! Β  Β 

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Azirium [2016-02-15 19:54:43 +0000 UTC]

A truly inspiring poem! Great job!

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Tangled-Tales In reply to Azirium [2016-02-16 01:41:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so very much!

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2016-02-15 19:33:29 +0000 UTC]

Love can make us a mess. But a perfect mess on our own way.

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Tangled-Tales In reply to GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2016-02-16 01:40:56 +0000 UTC]

So true!

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave In reply to Tangled-Tales [2016-02-16 02:51:57 +0000 UTC]

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moondancer1233 [2016-02-15 17:53:01 +0000 UTC]

this reminds me of an oc I have!

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Tangled-Tales In reply to moondancer1233 [2016-02-16 01:40:48 +0000 UTC]

What is an oc? XD Sorry!

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moondancer1233 In reply to Tangled-Tales [2016-02-16 02:06:47 +0000 UTC]

oc=own characture

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Tangled-Tales In reply to moondancer1233 [2016-02-16 15:58:37 +0000 UTC]

oh!! Feel free to share!

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moondancer1233 In reply to Tangled-Tales [2016-02-16 17:35:17 +0000 UTC]

well.....she's lost alot of people in her life and she journeys to find her lost sister. she knows that her parents are gone, but deep inside her, she knows her sister is still alive.....I am drawing a comic about her right now if you want to learn more about her the comic is called "arrivel"

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Tangled-Tales In reply to moondancer1233 [2016-02-17 01:06:54 +0000 UTC]

Oooooh, sounds super interesting!

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moondancer1233 In reply to Tangled-Tales [2016-02-17 01:18:00 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! It is based of of my dream!

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Tangled-Tales In reply to moondancer1233 [2016-02-17 16:43:06 +0000 UTC]

Awe wow!

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moondancer1233 In reply to Tangled-Tales [2016-02-17 16:56:42 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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