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Published: 2011-11-27 01:48:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 1140; Favourites: 42; Downloads: 13
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Twilight wonders why Princess Celestia didn't try to help her more. (Slight spoiler for chapter three.)Just some boredom, vent art for Shatterhorn.
Gonna be honest... I was disappointed in how little the second chapter was read. I've written five chapters so far, but I only have two published. I'm considering letting it go like everything else because, really, you guys don't care. No one cares about writing unless it's by certain people or filled with ponies sexing each other up.
Whatever... Enjoy Twilight crying...
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Oh and dont worry about the views it happens to everibody cheer up friend!!
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*gives Ariel a hug too*
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eeeeviiiiil spoooooilers!!!
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Ahhhhhhhhh~! R u mad!? I love Shatterhorn! Wait .... You have chapters already made!? Publish!!! Or face the wrath of Mare Do Well!
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I'm not mad. I'm disappointed. I enjoy writing more than drawing, even if I do drawing more. >< It's because people seem to like my writing less.
Next week. xD
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lolz 
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I tried to do a comic before, but I'm not that good.
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Just practice i saw tht comic its good!
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Eeew. Wait, which one?
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Oooh, you just had to add more suspense, didn't you?
You definitely can add 1 to the number of readers for chapter 3. ;D
I love your style of writing, you just have this flow and choice of words that just make so fun to read and just see where the story goes to next. If I start reading it, I can't stop until I reach the end. You have an amazing ability to write and you should be proud of it. Yes, no story is perfect, but Shatterhorn is certainly off to a good start and I eagerly await reading the rest of it. 8D
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When I did this I forgot I hadn't submitted chapter three. xDDDD Whoopsie.
Awww, thank you. I really do try.
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Lawl! Silly Ariel. XDDD
You're welcome. And it really does show.
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Nuuu
Iwannaseewhatcelestiadoesssss
I like your stories
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You willll~
Thanks...
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I agree, you need more feedback on your writing, it's a skill that needs to be acknowledged from you, not just your art. But, you need faith, too. Ariel, how far in your life are you going to go if you doubt your skills?
I, for one, like your writing and stories. There might be a error here and there, but hey, not everyone's perfect and honestly, there's something about your stories that are very interesting. Remember what Rainbow Dash learned today? Not to brag, yes, but you should also celebrate your accomplishments too. Have PRIDE, it's good for you!
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Ooooo, WHY did you have to watch the new episode?? Frick you and your good examples... xD
I'm sorry..
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You're lucky I didn't see the Muppets and found the episode instead. xD
Don't be, dudette. You're humble, I respect that, but you're never get anything done if you think everything you do isn't as good as something else and you should confident with your....
~IMAGINATION.~
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I know... xD
You're bringing Spongebob into it now, too?
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Just to prove my point. xD
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It's not fault.It's mine =<
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How is it your fault?
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For commenting,and for making you feel this way
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No,i mean for not commenting on you're writing when i've should have
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It's all right.
It's like I said to someone else; I LOVE to draw, but I love writing even more.
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Dude, can I please talk with you for a second?
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