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Description "FINE" shouted Taka as he stormed from the den early one morning. His teenage hormones were getting the better of him, and he had erupted when Ahadi refused to show him how to be king. He had argued that something might happen to Mufasa, but Ahadi was adamant that Taka was not invited.

Stomping through the long grass, Taka sat down and glared at Pride Rock from afar. His father was stupid in his opinion, and his brother never backed him up. The only lion he had left was his mother, and she was always too busy, despite how she tried to spend time with her sons.

"Didn't want to be king anyway" he muttered to himself, a tear rolling down his cheek.

"A king?" came a voice from behind him. "Does that mean you are a Prince?"

Taka glared backwards for a while, not even bothering to turn his head. "Im not a Prince. Im a nobody. Go away."

"Are you Ahadi's son? My mother told me about your family. Your brother is going to be king isnt he?" asked the newcomer naively.

He winced, and turned around to look at who was annoying him. He saw a young lioness, only just a teenager, staring back at him with eccentric eyes. She was scruffy and skinny, as if she hadn't been eating properly.

"Who are you?" he asked hopelessly, preying she wasn't lost. If she was that meant he would have to wander round all day with her trying to find her pride.

"Im Zira, whats your name your highness?" she asked politely, giving a bow of her head.

Shocked, the Prince took a while to reply "Im Tak-Scar...My name is Scar...what are you doing here?"

"Scars a weird name for a lion! Im here because I have nowhere else to go. My family disowned me and I have no friends."

Scar was surprised that she was still smiling. Why was she so happy? Maybe she was crazy, thats why her family didnt want her anymore.

"Can I stay with you?" she asked, looking sweetly up at him.

He scowled, but pondered for a moment. Perhaps his father would think more of him if he had a furure mate. And besides, Zira respected him as a Prince, something no other lion seemed to do.

"Alright" he replied, "But on one condition. I will find you a cave to stay in. And you must stay there. No leaving.I will bring you food, and when the time is right, I will bring you to my dad."

"Yay!" she cried, and leapt into his arms. He had never been hugged before, so he froze up rather than returning the favor. Morning dew sprayed everywhere, and Zira cackled as she noticed some drops on Scar's whiskers. "So wheres this cave then?" she asked confidently.

"Err...this way..." panicked the Prince, as he hadn't thought of that yet. He would just have to walk with her untill they stumbled upon a cave. Scar just hoped that the hyena's wouldn't find her, or worse, his father.

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Whew, Im glad I got this done!!!

Its a contest entry for , draw how Scar and Zira first met. I figure she was nuts when they first met, and they were just an awful influence on eachother. She would be telling him about all her nutty schemes and plans, and he would tell her about how she might end up as Queen if Ahadi and Mufasa die and there is no heir.

So yeah, its all good xD

Thats supposed to be morning dew. I fail ¬_¬ also, Scars nose is too big because his mane is small, bless him for being a teen!

Love you guys loads!

xxx
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Comments: 35

TLKPrincessMaia [2016-03-20 00:55:59 +0000 UTC]

this is really cool this should be a series or something if it isn't XD

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Kendell2 [2011-04-12 02:59:14 +0000 UTC]

Intresting idea. But she was probably a different kind of crazy back then than she was when we saw her. Like this is more 'out there crazy' where n the movie was psychotic. No problem there, I mean if she was mentally unstable to begin with, then clearly she'd be more likely to snap when hit with the blows she ended up getting.

Very good work!

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tardis101 In reply to Kendell2 [2011-04-16 13:53:31 +0000 UTC]

xD thankyou! Yeah, she was a different kind of crazy, its weird though I can just picture her family abandoning her but her being happy about it...especially when she finds scar haha!


Thankyou for the comment!

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Kendell2 In reply to tardis101 [2011-04-16 14:52:16 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. Though I do ultimately feel really bad for her.

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tardis101 In reply to Kendell2 [2011-04-17 12:19:44 +0000 UTC]

I do when it comes to losing the lion she loves but she brings some stuff pon herself i.e Nuka's death, but still its pretty tragic!

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ranielle1232 [2010-12-08 11:55:28 +0000 UTC]

wow THIS IS SO COOL!!!

very very very well done :d

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tardis101 In reply to ranielle1232 [2010-12-08 11:56:31 +0000 UTC]

awww thankyou!

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Chanethedemongirl [2010-12-08 07:58:30 +0000 UTC]

cute ^^

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tardis101 In reply to Chanethedemongirl [2010-12-08 10:13:38 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou ^_^

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Chanethedemongirl In reply to tardis101 [2010-12-08 19:15:36 +0000 UTC]

Welcome ^^

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PulcherNox [2010-12-02 21:59:54 +0000 UTC]

I love Zira's expression~! x3

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tardis101 In reply to PulcherNox [2010-12-02 22:12:18 +0000 UTC]

xD thankyou!

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PulcherNox In reply to tardis101 [2010-12-02 22:13:26 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome~

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animal-lover-247 [2010-12-02 19:22:23 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow, I love the story and the picture is Amazing!! I IT!

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tardis101 In reply to animal-lover-247 [2010-12-02 19:31:51 +0000 UTC]

Hehehe thankyou so much!!!

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animal-lover-247 In reply to tardis101 [2010-12-03 12:05:34 +0000 UTC]

^^ your very welcome

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SJArt117 [2010-12-01 17:26:35 +0000 UTC]

This is great! I really love your idea! Ive been thinking about m idea for ages! Im gonna get on with it tonight+tommorow!

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tardis101 In reply to SJArt117 [2010-12-02 17:30:11 +0000 UTC]

cool xD and thanks!

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Emma1235 [2010-12-01 13:10:15 +0000 UTC]

You are going to win!!! <3 ^^ GO LIZZIE

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tardis101 In reply to Emma1235 [2010-12-02 17:30:23 +0000 UTC]

Hehe thankyou!!!!! I sure hope so!

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Emma1235 In reply to tardis101 [2010-12-03 13:01:50 +0000 UTC]

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SJArt117 In reply to Emma1235 [2010-12-01 17:25:41 +0000 UTC]

Done get ya hope too high! Im really going for it on this one!

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Emma1235 In reply to SJArt117 [2010-12-01 18:02:37 +0000 UTC]

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Musicalmutt2 [2010-12-01 03:26:07 +0000 UTC]

happy zira is cute! ^w^ your art is amazing

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tardis101 In reply to Musicalmutt2 [2010-12-01 07:15:02 +0000 UTC]

xD thankyou!

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Musicalmutt2 In reply to tardis101 [2010-12-02 01:31:08 +0000 UTC]

no problemm!

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Fumasterfenganimals [2010-12-01 03:01:10 +0000 UTC]

I like it... but what happened to Scar's other eye?

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tardis101 In reply to Fumasterfenganimals [2010-12-01 07:15:35 +0000 UTC]

its blocked by his frown! I tried him with an eye there but it looked awful so I got rid of it xD

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Fumasterfenganimals In reply to tardis101 [2010-12-01 22:18:51 +0000 UTC]

It looks kind of odd, that weird dent just hanging there...

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tardis101 In reply to Fumasterfenganimals [2010-12-02 17:26:46 +0000 UTC]

I am aware, but trust me it looked worse with the eye...

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un-hynged [2010-12-01 02:32:12 +0000 UTC]

Very nice.

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tardis101 In reply to un-hynged [2010-12-01 07:15:45 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou!

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Claire-Cooper [2010-12-01 01:55:16 +0000 UTC]

Aww thats so cute you made Zira look so adorable xD

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tardis101 In reply to Claire-Cooper [2010-12-01 07:15:56 +0000 UTC]

Hehe thankyou!

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Claire-Cooper In reply to tardis101 [2010-12-01 17:09:26 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome friend :3

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