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Published: 2009-08-21 20:50:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 2332; Favourites: 14; Downloads: 42
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I feel like just a baby.Mikael had to say goodbye to his first.
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I'm actually really proud of this. It took me about two hours, in Easy Paint Tool Sai. I love how it came out, it was -just- how I wanted.
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Very good concept, well executed. The emotion is clear.
Although I do have a couple pick spots, but, don't I always?
The base lines in the hair should have darker areas
beneath them, so it causes the illusion of slightly
lifted pieces. Instead of randomly placed shading.
To be fair, I like this shading a lot better than
your flat work on hair.
Also, if the middle finger were that long, you would probably have to see the webbing between the index and it. It is also quite thick to work with his thin frame.
One more thing, that's it, I promise. The wrinkling on the sheets wouldn't be -quite- that severe. Usually if you're laying down the material will stretch tight from your body and go a bit looser, instead of gather. Unless of course he's been grasping at the sheets all over the place.
On the upside I think the nice light colours add atmosphere without distracting from the main image, your shading has improved in general. It doesn't sway away from what I assume is the main light source, which a -lot- of anime artists do I've noticed. You have also improved your necks... /weird, I've told you before my thoughts on necks. XD
Okay, one more pick spot, I lied. Watch the anatomy of your arms, I don't quite understand how his elbow is visible in that position.
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fsnfnffdslkhflh. Yeah, that elbow's kinda fucked, I agree. I can't save my files in Sai though, so I just have to tell myself to watch better next time, and do better.
I'm also not very good at hands-- I am trying though. XD I'll remember the webbing, too.
I will take the hair also to heart. >D
Thank yooou.
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Is the reason you cant save your files because you have the trial version of SAI? Because there IS a program called GIMP, you can download the whole thing for free, and it is really good for drawing ^^ here's the website! [link]
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Aw, haha. thanks! That was actually ages ago, and I use SAI without any problems now. c;
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ooohh... well then, hooray! That's good, you're welcome, anyhow!
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I know just how he feels...
Gorgeously done, hun. The tones sets the mood so well, and the emotion comes through loud and clear. Great job on his anatomy too.
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Aaahhh ;3; -wibbles-
Thank you so, sooo much. <3
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You are quite welcome, my dear.
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God, the emotions in this are so clear. It's quite lovely. <33
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Thank you so muuuch. >3< <3
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