Comments: 51
ZarthialDragon [2011-06-03 13:54:06 +0000 UTC]
Great work!!!!!
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sierramedellin [2010-01-08 18:01:45 +0000 UTC]
Wow this is really really wicked cool. You did so well
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Trevone [2010-01-05 14:11:34 +0000 UTC]
wow galing hehe
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SymbolHero [2009-12-05 18:37:11 +0000 UTC]
Wow, they looks awersome, you did a great job on it, well... but the red dragon has a big head, that makes him looks weird ^ ^° and there is some mistakes with the anatomy, but the texture and the atmosphere looks great. ^ ^
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TargonRedDragon In reply to SymbolHero [2009-12-06 09:20:41 +0000 UTC]
Thanks
You admit Reptilecynrik that their heads are wrong, but you didn't know I look at their head that are okay. I must have something wrong making dragons, but I better send a sketch of new dragon.
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Mutabi [2009-12-05 09:48:26 +0000 UTC]
Apart from some faults in the wings-anatomie, I don't see mistakes - WONDERFUL heads! Wonderful scales and coloration. Really detailed and amazing work!
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Mutabi In reply to TargonRedDragon [2009-12-06 14:54:43 +0000 UTC]
Maybe a little but you can't see, how thick their necks are... so I don't really mind it^^^"
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ReptileCynrik [2009-12-05 08:37:22 +0000 UTC]
From a personal point of view: I don't like it. Sorry.
But my personal opinion is not valid to write a critique. I just wanted to tell you.
From a completely objective point of view: It's not done very good, either.
POSITIVE ASPECTS:
+) The choice of colours is excellent! There are only dark, dimmed colour tunes, which you have combined and used in a very good way. The red and yellow is not too strong to "kill" the greyish colours. Very nice done!
+) The atmosphere of the darklands in the background works really well. It's a nice setting!
NEGATIVE ASPECTS (I keep it short):
-) The lightning bolt is too fat and thick! If you make it thinner next time, it will look way better!
-) The dragon anatomy is completely wrong (I don't wanna say "screwed up", but that would also be true).
Most of all, it's about the red dragon's body.
While the grey one's body looks quite alright, the red one's is horrible incorrect.
Yes, the body (legs, torso, arms) of the grey dragon is pretty nice!
BUT HIS HEAD IS WAY TOOOOOO BIG!!!!! *gwaaaaah*
-) The red dragon has wrong arms, wrong torso and NO legs at all. We can't see the wings, his tail... nothing that would indicate, that his body is complete.
-) BOTH HEADS are WAY TOO HUGE, Kevin!
We can see: YOU STARTED YOUR PICTURE WITH THE HEADS!!!!!!!!!
This is a classical mistake.
I mean, it is okay to start with the head but you must not work it out in detail and THEN go to the body. You need to see it as a whole.
And this here is just.... horrible.
You know what?
If you transform (using CTRL+T) the heads and make them smaller.... the complete picture will be extremely more correct. It would be better about 400%! XD
The lights and colours are so beautiful.... but the BIG HEADS (Big head mode ) really spoil it all.
Sorry.
Next time, send a sketch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And then I can tell you: Make the heads smaller before finishing it.
But well... if you don't listen, it's not my problem.
This is only an offer.
- RC
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TheShadowhisperer In reply to TargonRedDragon [2009-12-05 08:37:12 +0000 UTC]
Sorry, no I cannot.
And you are welcome.
P.S. What application is at your disposal?
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