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tati611 In reply to ??? [2022-02-11 03:02:46 +0000 UTC]
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ComedyBoy3 [2021-09-15 06:03:05 +0000 UTC]
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MaXoS9090 [2021-03-23 10:51:12 +0000 UTC]
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bardock29 [2017-09-15 03:18:03 +0000 UTC]
awsome
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tati611 In reply to 1423Ostafrikasaurus [2017-08-01 16:39:37 +0000 UTC]
Well if you think my Christmas one-shot was a beaut, check out my other work.
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jb20047 [2016-09-09 02:33:45 +0000 UTC]
This might just be my favorite story from you. Keep the good work up!
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Fastpoke94 [2016-06-05 15:31:15 +0000 UTC]
Ash's kindness is more than evident in this story, but that's not the only thing, the surprise from Grace, the dance... I just love it! So perfect!
Oh and I loved how trainers and Pokémon acted the same way. That line from Delphox, "First, put your tongue back in your mouth."... killed me! I was expecting an scene similar to Ash and Serena's, but I kinda forgot about the tongue scarf haha.
Can't wait to check out more of your work!
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AnthonyC12 [2016-04-27 02:11:24 +0000 UTC]
Great story! Think my favorite part had to be the simultaneous confessions between Ash/Serena and Greninja/Delphox. Sure didn't expect the Pokemon to confess their love either.
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Suitedmallard31 [2016-04-03 02:09:01 +0000 UTC]
More, More, MORE! These are wonderful! I've never seen a fanfiction as good as this! keep on the good work!
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Suitedmallard31 In reply to tati611 [2016-04-03 21:33:19 +0000 UTC]
There were no favorite parts... THE WHOLE THING WAS MY FAVORITE! My favorite parts in fanfictions are when someone gets hurt and the other worries about them. Or embraces. Those are my favs.
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PokeloverAshley [2016-03-05 18:12:54 +0000 UTC]
I have a problem with really good oneshots, the thing is I want them to continue !!!!! This is amazing well done!!!
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tati611 In reply to PokeloverAshley [2016-03-05 18:57:13 +0000 UTC]
Glad you loved it. What was your favorite part? Did you also read my other one shot?
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MCRasengan [2016-02-04 15:44:12 +0000 UTC]
Aawwww. It's so adowable.
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PRTArtist [2015-12-26 01:12:53 +0000 UTC]
Ahhhhhhh!!!
So cute.
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PRTArtist In reply to tati611 [2015-12-26 01:16:43 +0000 UTC]
The confessions between the couples.
So cute.
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PikaNepGamer [2015-12-26 00:00:32 +0000 UTC]
Nice story! Great job Ash and Serena!
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PikaNepGamer In reply to tati611 [2015-12-26 00:37:29 +0000 UTC]
The part where Ash and Serena sat outside, and Serena was crying happy.
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tati611 In reply to PikaNepGamer [2015-12-26 01:03:04 +0000 UTC]
What did you think about the part when Ash gave everyone their gifts and their reactions about what they got?
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