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tati611 In reply to ??? [2021-05-21 14:17:58 +0000 UTC]
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ringsandamiss007 [2016-12-11 20:01:16 +0000 UTC]
Time for the beginning of a really adventurous term.
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ringsandamiss007 In reply to tati611 [2016-12-11 22:06:12 +0000 UTC]
Gardenia going crazy over Grass-Types.
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tati611 In reply to ringsandamiss007 [2016-12-11 23:37:48 +0000 UTC]
It's pretty cute and funny of how she always goes gaga over Grass types.
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tati611 In reply to ChipmunkRaccoonOz [2016-11-04 13:11:38 +0000 UTC]
Picture the tunics like this but without the hood.
images.esellerpro.com/2466/I/4… (Note: I don't know how to make links. )
The knights wear these when they're not in battle. When they do, they wear a full suit of armor.
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ChipmunkRaccoonOz In reply to tati611 [2016-11-05 20:09:06 +0000 UTC]
Sounds logical.
I may do arts of the characters in such an attire at some point.
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tati611 In reply to ChipmunkRaccoonOz [2016-11-06 02:41:22 +0000 UTC]
Hey, I'm not rushing you. So don't worry about it. Take your time.
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ChipmunkRaccoonOz In reply to tati611 [2016-11-06 02:45:24 +0000 UTC]
Thanks.
What does Max and Bonnie wear for attires?
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tati611 In reply to ChipmunkRaccoonOz [2016-11-06 03:19:15 +0000 UTC]
We already discussed for Bonnie. And as for Max picture him in the costume he wore in "Lucario and the Mystery of Mew" for his squire's outfit.
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PikaNepGamer [2015-10-14 23:47:26 +0000 UTC]
Nice! It gave me a vibe from Lucario, and the mystery of mew!
Will Lucario appear sometime in the series that you're working on?
Cons: Stupid, flipping team rocket appears in this!!
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tati611 In reply to PikaNepGamer [2015-10-15 01:44:51 +0000 UTC]
You can definetly expect more vibes as the story progresses.
Hey, Pokemon just wouldn't be the same without those lunkheads. At least I'm making them funny and not serious like they were for the Unova series. They may be the bad guys, but at least they treat their Pokemon well.
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ChipmunkRaccoonOz [2015-10-12 22:37:02 +0000 UTC]
One thing I dislike about this fanfic is that those stupid stooges from Team Rocket are in it.
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tati611 In reply to ChipmunkRaccoonOz [2015-10-13 01:26:54 +0000 UTC]
Hey, Pokemon just wouldn't be the same without those lunkheads. At least I'm making them funny and not like the way they were during the Unova series.
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ChipmunkRaccoonOz In reply to tati611 [2015-10-13 01:29:30 +0000 UTC]
But them being around constantly trying to get Ash's Pikachu is really annoying.
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tati611 In reply to ChipmunkRaccoonOz [2015-10-13 01:39:30 +0000 UTC]
True, but at least they treat their Pokemon well not like that lowlife scum Paul. That guy just really ticks me off.
Speaking of Paul, I have big, big, BIG plans for him in my story, but that's until WAY later in the story.Don't bother asking what, cause I don't want to spoil anything but I will say this, Paul isn't a student in the story.
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ChipmunkRaccoonOz In reply to tati611 [2015-10-13 01:50:38 +0000 UTC]
Just because they treat their Pokémon well doesn't change my opinion on them.
I see.
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KidFlash95 [2015-09-14 12:14:13 +0000 UTC]
Do you think you'll continue this?
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tati611 In reply to KidFlash95 [2015-09-14 13:38:34 +0000 UTC]
Working on it.
Have you read the prologues? What were your favorite parts from this chapter and the others?
BTW, thanks for the fave.
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tati611 In reply to KidFlash95 [2015-09-14 20:11:53 +0000 UTC]
Believe me, I do. I'll be including chapters of what's happening with the others back home. It'll be kind of like Pokemon Chronicles,
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RSBCS [2015-07-27 04:34:18 +0000 UTC]
Sweet! I am so excited to see what adventures Prince Ash will have on Celesta Island during his training. Man, this is gonna be so cool!
Great job on this chapter. Those two shadows following the Pichu posse are intriguing. Wonder who they are and what they are up to? And it'll be fun with Melody at Celesta Island too. Is she a teacher too?
Sweet job man. You've done amazing for this first chapter.
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RSBCS In reply to tati611 [2015-07-28 18:28:14 +0000 UTC]
Pretty good progress on my end. Finished the next chapter, and got started on the one with the Chieftain battle. Just gotta transcribe them first.
For your story, I think my favorite part was at the end when Ash was thinking of Serena. That's kinda funny how you made him so fixated on her that he almost saw her in the sunset. I wonder how that'll affect his training.
Funny thing was, when Melody kissed Ash in greeting, I could imagine Serena fuming at her for trying to move in on him. Good thing Ash isn't exactly a rocket scientist when it comes to stuff like that.
I'm betting Ash is gonna be really surprised when he finds out that stone he got is for Charizard, the X Mega Stone. And it was funny when Muk tried to smother Headmaster Sycamore. Nice touch.
This just got a ton of fun. I can't wait to see what new adventures Ash is gonna have, and who he's gonna learn from at the academy.
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tati611 In reply to RSBCS [2015-07-28 20:00:29 +0000 UTC]
For the Mega Stone, you are dead WRONG that it's Charizardite X. I'm not gonna reveal what Mega Stone it is just yet so don't hold your breath. But you are right about Ash going to be surprised for what stone it is.
For Melody's kiss, yeah it would be hilarious if Serena saw that move. And technically, it wasn't sunset when Ash was thinking about Serena. The sky was blue to be sunset. besides, I did wrote that the sky matched her eyes did I? But I understand that you though it was sunset, it was an honest mistake.
For Muk, I really love how that big glob of goo could be so affectionate to people. If he did that to me i wouldn't mind. I always laugh whenever he gives Oak, Ash, or anyone else a hug attack. He's very sweet for a Poison type.
What did you think about the scene with the Pichu Posse of the ship? Did you like the part when Smoochum kissed some of the boys for saving her?
What did you think about Gardenia being a teacher of Grass spells and Sidney for Dark?
Give me ALL the details of your opinion like I did with your story.
Just wait until the next chapter is posted. I guarantee that it'll be entertaining when Ash meets his roomies and the rest of the students.
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RSBCS In reply to tati611 [2015-07-28 23:00:40 +0000 UTC]
Darn! I was hoping that stone was for Charizard. Ah well, I've got a second idea of who it's for.
Yeah, my bad on the time of day. Guess I'm too used to sunsets for the romantic side of things. Hehe.
Yeah, for a Poison-type, Muk is quite affectionate. And it's funny when he smothers anyone so affectionately.
The Pichu Posse is funny. I thought it was hilarious how Smoochum can't really go anywhere without seeing her reflection, and that need almost sent her overboard. And it was funny when she kissed everyone for saving her. Even more so since kissing is how Smoochum perceive the world, like we do with taste, touch, smell, and our other senses.
That was hysterical when Gardenia was so excited to see Ash's Grass-types, and that she is a teacher of Grass-types. Sidney was quite a surprise, since I never saw him used in the series. Just the games. How come you chose him for the Dark-type spells? Either way, their introductions was a great laugh.
I'll bet the next chapter will be full of awesome stuff. You are doing amazing with this story. Keep it up!
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mechazard01 [2015-07-27 00:09:04 +0000 UTC]
Dude, love the story so far, but I just have one question, Gardenia? Really?
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tati611 In reply to mechazard01 [2015-07-27 00:16:05 +0000 UTC]
Why not? She's a good teacher for Grass spells. Besides, It makes me laugh at how insanely affectionate she gets around Grass types. Remember how she got around James' Cacnea and Carnivine?
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