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MockBirch684 [2018-08-05 15:25:49 +0000 UTC]
I just got to the “OUT OF MY WAY. OUT OF MY WAY. OUT OF MY WAYYYYYYYYYY!” Part and I knew who it was.
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tati611 In reply to MockBirch684 [2018-08-05 18:02:56 +0000 UTC]
You know Bianca, when you hear her shouting that, you HAVE to get out of her way. What else did you like from the chapter?
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tati611 In reply to 1423Ostafrikasaurus [2017-08-02 04:31:40 +0000 UTC]
Well she can't because of her duty as handmaiden.
Did you enjoy the part with Noibat?
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LatestNothingInteres [2016-11-04 13:08:20 +0000 UTC]
Are you still working on this story? You haven't uploaded a new chapter since last year.
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ChipmunkRaccoonOz [2016-03-02 15:37:21 +0000 UTC]
You picture Ash's Honedge evolving into Doublade and eventually Aegislash?
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ChipmunkRaccoonOz In reply to tati611 [2016-03-20 05:16:20 +0000 UTC]
Of course you should have Noibat evolve into Noivern at some point. Not right away, of course.
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ChipmunkRaccoonOz In reply to tati611 [2016-03-20 05:40:36 +0000 UTC]
I don't suppose Ash would happen to have Pokémon the likes of Butterfree, Pidgeot, Squirtle, Haunter, Primeape, Lapras, and Goodra in your fanfic would he?
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ChipmunkRaccoonOz [2016-01-15 03:56:54 +0000 UTC]
Will we see what Serena is up to in future chapters?
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tati611 In reply to ChipmunkRaccoonOz [2016-01-15 19:56:02 +0000 UTC]
Count on it, as well as some of the other characters.
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MCRasengan [2015-12-23 01:07:59 +0000 UTC]
This is a really good story.mi hope you continue to work on it, and I'll continue to look for new chapters of this interesting story.
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tati611 In reply to MCRasengan [2015-12-23 01:50:10 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. I really appreciate your support.
Have your read my other chapters and my one shot? If you have, what were your favorite parts in each of them as well as chapter 3?
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RavenQueen3241 [2015-11-29 17:43:09 +0000 UTC]
Baby Noibat is so cute
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tati611 In reply to RavenQueen3241 [2015-11-29 17:55:06 +0000 UTC]
Glad you liked my new chapter.
What else did you enjoyed from it?
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RavenQueen3241 In reply to tati611 [2015-12-12 00:12:53 +0000 UTC]
I like the chapter keep going you have amazing gift
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tati611 In reply to RavenQueen3241 [2015-12-12 01:34:18 +0000 UTC]
Aw stop. You're making me blush.
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StoryKeeper44 [2015-11-28 20:15:08 +0000 UTC]
Another great chapter of this story. Excellent work! Keep it up.
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StoryKeeper44 In reply to tati611 [2015-11-28 21:40:35 +0000 UTC]
You should know by now, I could never select one part of the story as my favorite. I like the story as a whole.
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Narusakuson [2015-11-28 17:33:38 +0000 UTC]
Ohh that was funny will be incorporating other things from the anime into this keep up the good work cant what foe the next chapter
Ps do you thinks you can do a Christmas amourshipping fanfic you don't have to if you cant
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tati611 In reply to Narusakuson [2015-11-28 17:55:32 +0000 UTC]
I'll see what I can do.
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ringsandamiss007 [2015-11-28 11:54:34 +0000 UTC]
Baby Noibat be popping popular!!!
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shadic4566 [2015-11-28 09:05:02 +0000 UTC]
Dang! Some of the parts were really funny to me. Really glad that the returning gag of Bianca running into Ash into a spot with a source of water will happen from time to time. Wattson is one of my favorite Gym Leaders from Hoenn due to his humor in the anime, as well as Chuck from Johto. Surprised to see that the two, plus Korrina, Flint, Clair, & Whitney are in here as well. Really glad that you made a way to have Ash's Noibat be in the story since it wasn't when it first began. The note Ash sent to home with Noctowl reminds of when Harry did with Hedwig in their own series.
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RSBCS [2015-11-28 07:13:25 +0000 UTC]
Sweet-sauce! I shoulda figured Wattson would pull a stunt like that slide if he was the electric teacher. Flint, I'm guessing, is the Elite Four from Sinnoh? Or did I get that wrong? Ah well.
Man, what a crazy first day. I don't think that red blur was Magby. It moved too fast. I'm betting it was something else. Nice little gag return with Bianca knocking Ash into the fountain. I bet we'll be seeing that more often.
I almost forgot that Noibat should've been a part of Ash's team as of recently. Well, the way it hatched reminded me of when Manaphy hatched in "Temple of the Sea". Will Ash have to train it to fly like in the series?
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tati611 In reply to RSBCS [2015-11-28 16:17:22 +0000 UTC]
First of all, you are absolutely correct about Flint. Second, yes that red blur was Magby.
Yeah, Wattson sure has quite a sense of humor and likes to have fun. What about Chuck, Clair, and Whitney?
I wanted to have Bianca's ever famous gag in the story As well as her huge adoration for cute Pokemon. She also adores Pokemon with muscles so I'll see if I can add a scene like that some time.
Ash will teach Noibat to fly, but there won't be a big scene about it. Maybe something small, but nothing too major. What did you think about the part when Ash sends Noctowl home to deliver his letter?
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RSBCS In reply to tati611 [2015-11-28 21:37:14 +0000 UTC]
Huh. Guess I was mistaken. I bet Pikachu will be quit surprised to run into the Pichu Posse.
Wattson sure likes to have fun. Whitney was a surprise to see. I'm surprised she's a teacher rather than a student. Interesting. Chuck was hilarious with his entrance, and his teaching method. Of course, that's Chuck for you. Clair seemed a little lackluster, so I can't say too much about her. By the way, how do Fighting types have spells? I always figured they were more physical attributes. Unless, that's what the spells utilize.
I'm betting if Bianca was in Ash's fighting class, she would've gone bananas for Chuck's Machoke. And she probably will go gaga for some of the team's Pokemon, and not just the cute ones. Hehe.
Cool. Can't wait to see those moments with Noibat.
I thought Ash sending Noctowl with a note was rather sweet. Not to be sappy or anything, but I thought that was cool of him to send a letter home. I am curious why he sent Noctowl. I would've thought Staraptor or Unfezant would've been his choice, as they are fast to send and return to their trainer. Hmm.
All the same, this has been interesting. This was definitely worth the wait.
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tati611 In reply to RSBCS [2015-11-29 01:37:50 +0000 UTC]
Simple. Imagine your fists and your legs glowing red or white when you do Karate Chop, Power-Up Punch, Mega Kick, and Rock Smash, or your body speeding up when you do Close Combat or glowing red with Bulk Up. You know what I'm getting at?
Ash will send his other Flying types to deliver letters. For now, Noctowl has the first flight.
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RSBCS In reply to tati611 [2015-11-29 01:53:13 +0000 UTC]
Huh. Now that's what I figured with Fighting types. Though, never did I think it involved sorcery. Neat concept.
And cool. Well, I suppose that way, Ash can have his Pokemon spend some time at home and not just at the academy.
I'm betting we'll see Ash battle more of the students as the academy progresses. I wonder how he'll do with some of them.
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shadic4566 In reply to RSBCS [2015-11-28 09:08:10 +0000 UTC]
You got the part where Flint is an Elite Four member from Sinnoh right.
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RSBCS In reply to shadic4566 [2015-11-28 09:32:29 +0000 UTC]
I knew it!
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ChipmunkRaccoonOz [2015-11-28 05:34:03 +0000 UTC]
So Korrina's one of the students. I guess Maylene would be one as well?
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