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tati611 In reply to ??? [2023-02-16 02:28:08 +0000 UTC]
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MockBirch684 [2021-05-03 01:40:05 +0000 UTC]
I will sit here patiently waiting for the next update. Even if I have to wait until 2026.
Please, take your time.
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tati611 In reply to Narusakuson [2020-11-13 03:43:21 +0000 UTC]
It’s not that simple.
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MockBirch684 [2018-08-05 16:19:02 +0000 UTC]
Prince Ash used PROTECT
It was super effective!
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tati611 In reply to MockBirch684 [2018-08-05 18:04:08 +0000 UTC]
A suitable first spell for someone who's willing to keep his friends safe, right?
And how'd you like my Lion King references?
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PanicBlade [2017-11-24 05:18:46 +0000 UTC]
Of course it would be Brendan that tells Ash he is dense and eats a tamato macron/poke puff. I can see him doing that
Anyway, great work, can't wait to see the next one!
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tati611 In reply to PanicBlade [2017-11-24 05:29:58 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. Have you read my other stories?
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1423Ostafrikasaurus [2017-08-12 18:03:23 +0000 UTC]
I just thought being they can use Pokémon moves if all the girls started to use attract on him lol
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tati611 In reply to 1423Ostafrikasaurus [2017-08-13 00:40:08 +0000 UTC]
Oh, I have something special in mind that's kind of like that for my story later on.
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tati611 In reply to 1423Ostafrikasaurus [2017-08-02 13:46:05 +0000 UTC]
That's because his denseness is slowly starting to break little by little since Serena's kiss in Prologue 3. Didn't you notice how he imagined Serena's smiling face in the sky at the end of Chapter 1?
Also, what did you think of the Pichu Bros. and their friends in the story? Cleffa and Tyrogue were my idea.
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1423Ostafrikasaurus In reply to tati611 [2017-08-02 17:20:26 +0000 UTC]
Ah I see, no I did not notice that, I haven't thought much of them yet
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Endermaster54 [2017-02-02 01:59:38 +0000 UTC]
When is the next chapter? I can't wait until it comes out.
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tati611 In reply to Endermaster54 [2017-02-02 02:37:20 +0000 UTC]
I've already started on Chapter 5.
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shadic4566 [2017-01-07 01:14:38 +0000 UTC]
Great Chapter. Did get a feel of The Lion King with the whole Pignite, Pikachu & Oshawott charging at the Mandiabuzz & rescuing the Litleo, the Mightyena taking over the pride of Litleo & Pyroar with the leader being a Shiny & having a scar on its forehead, although its a lose cause not catching it but all well. Really did like that Litleo decided to join Ash & his team & Ash managing to do his first ever spell before anyone could his first week. Could still see that Miette & Giselle are trying to get together with Ash & Macy fallen in love with Ash in this, to which I consider as the Florence Nightingale effect.
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ringsandamiss007 [2016-12-11 23:13:08 +0000 UTC]
If he keeps his pace up with Classes and Aura training, he would perform and seemingly mastered 10 spells in a month.
You know who Ash should catch next: a Milotic or her evolved form.
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tati611 In reply to ringsandamiss007 [2016-12-12 03:51:43 +0000 UTC]
Nah, I got something better in mind for Ash. But you'll get nothing outta me. Milotic however seems more likely a Pokemon for Serena.
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tati611 In reply to ChipmunkRaccoonOz [2017-01-15 03:18:14 +0000 UTC]
Since Feebas evolve into Milotic, a beautiful girl like Serena deserves a beautiful Pokemon like Milotic.
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RSBCS [2016-12-09 02:18:56 +0000 UTC]
Lion King reference!! Oh wow, how you managed to worm that in there with the Mightyena and Pyroar. Even that little line 'You're messing up my mane' was from the movie. Hilarious.
Quite a shocker for Ash to learn a spell so quickly. However, by nature, Ash is quite protective of his friends. I can imagine Protect would be an appropriate spell for Ash to learn at the get-go. But dang, that was really early. I would expect it to be some time before he mastered it. Which does bother me that Protect doesn't put a strain on him. Normally, powers like that don't come without some kind of cost. Nor are they so natural that you can use them except in heat of the moments. Just thought I'd mention.
This was a great chapter. Amazingness. Awesome stuff buddy.
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LatestNothingInteres In reply to tati611 [2016-12-28 06:00:58 +0000 UTC]
Thankfully it didn't follow the movie to the extent of having the Litleo's father die, at least.
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tati611 In reply to LatestNothingInteres [2017-01-05 03:29:17 +0000 UTC]
Well I didn't want this chapter to be too much of a reference of The Lion King.
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RSBCS In reply to tati611 [2016-12-09 05:05:56 +0000 UTC]
Muchas gracias, my friend.
Nice. That was one great movie. And I just now realized that the rescue scene was referenced to Timone and Pumba's rescue of Simba. Lol. Very clever. And Infernape being like Rafiki, nice touch.
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Joeycool1210 [2016-12-09 01:42:55 +0000 UTC]
First of all, I know how you feel about brainstorming and having a hard time thinking up a plot. Second, I noticed a few scenes that sort of remind me of The Lion King. Heck, I actually have the movie myself.
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tati611 In reply to Joeycool1210 [2016-12-09 02:03:30 +0000 UTC]
The movie inspired me to do those scenes. It's my most favorite of all Disney films.
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Joeycool1210 In reply to tati611 [2016-12-09 03:20:34 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, great movie. Definitely one of Disney's best.
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StoryKeeper44 [2016-12-09 01:10:48 +0000 UTC]
Another great read. Nice to see you're writing again.
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tati611 In reply to StoryKeeper44 [2016-12-09 01:14:59 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. What was your favorite part?
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StoryKeeper44 In reply to tati611 [2016-12-09 02:23:40 +0000 UTC]
I like the part about how the girls "puffed their cheeks in jealousy", and at the end when Giselle did it in disappointment. Lol, I know that reaction. Straight out of the anime.
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tati611 In reply to ChipmunkRaccoonOz [2016-12-08 20:35:19 +0000 UTC]
It's always been my favorite of all Disney movies. Matter of fact it's actually the first movie I've ever seen in my life.
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tati611 In reply to ChipmunkRaccoonOz [2016-12-08 20:58:16 +0000 UTC]
I think I'll start sometime in January. I'm leaving with my family on Christmas Eve to spend the holidays with our relatives in Guatemala.
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