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Tatteredsoul-x — Brokenmoon application

Published: 2016-03-30 01:40:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 720; Favourites: 13; Downloads: 0
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Description


Basic info


••Name: brokenkit  brokenpaw brokenmoon
••Rank: apprentice 
••Clan: settingclan
••Age: 12 moons
••Apprentice: too young
••Mentor: Shimmerleap
••Breed: oriental shorthair, American shorthair mix  



Description

••Body build: vary lean and lanky
••Color: bicolor


Family

••Parents: faddedheart (father) silverclaw (mother) 
••Siblings: none
••Mate: too young


Personality

••Positive traits••
-humble-fearless-loyal-

••Neutral traits••
-calm(most of the time)-picky-workaholic-

••Negative traits••
-slightly sadistic-stoic-dislikes toms-

 

 History


••Kit•• 

Brokenpaws mother died in the process of birthing him, and out of his three siblings he was the only one who was not stillborn. Unfortunately this lead to all the blame of his mothers death to fall on him, and it didn't help that he was weak and small, he wasn't anything like his father wanted, he was a broken kit who had taken all he loved, what name would better suit him? Faddedheart left the clan 5 moons after brokenpaws birth, the death of his mate proving too much for him to handle amongst the endless failures of his son, he was never fast enough, never strong enough, never even coming close to the impossible standards set for him...


••Apprentice••

Brokenpaw lives peacefully with his demons, in fact they drive him to push himself, train harder, think faster, become the best!- or is that all just a facade....?
Brokenpaw hates his mentor. Although he knows his mentor means well, he simply can't stand him. To compensate for his lack of one on one training, he spends almost all his time training or hunting. This dedication has lead to him neglecting himself, he often skips meals and forgets to groom, luckily juniperpaw is there to make sure he is clean and eating enough to keep up his work.
he got in his first border fight with two nightclan she-cats, he was able to hold his own against one of the Warriors but wasn't able to kill her like he wanted. he has since started to train with other apprentices to improve further. during his training with one of the apprentice, he started to feel weird, he wasn't just thinking about training, he was thinking about her...(martenpaw) 
broken got into another border fight, this time killing the foolish nightclan apprentice who tried to hurt juniperpaw, Though he feels like he was in the right, he is afraid that he's upset Boulder....


Extra Info
•• the tears in his left ear are primarily self inflicted, they started out as a small scratch caused by rough housing, they wouldn't have been an issue and would have healed up right away, but he began excessively scratching  at them, gradually causing mor damage (the largest one was all at once, the original scratch being the deepest and simply splitting after enough scratching) they've gotten much better but he still scratches at them when he is really bored or stressed (Now that his father is gone he won't be destroying his ear as much -w- 


RP Info

 ••Comments ••notes •• Skype ••gmail

Send note for more rp info


Rp sample: 

The wind blew softly, ruffling through the fur of a slender bicolor tom. The grass was slowly pushed aside as he glided forward, golden eyes locked onto a small shape, hardly visible under a shrub. Any moment now, he'd have the small creature between his jaws. Brokenpaw, as this tall apprentice was called, was rather skilled at hunting these small rodents, all it took was patients and timing. Brokenpaw leaned back on his haunches and grit his teeth just before leaping forward. He swat the creature into the air, not giving it the chance to run as he jumped after it, snagging the small animal between his claws. Once grounded he wasted no time in ending its struggling with a sharp bite. He smiled to himself another successful hunt~





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Comments: 31

Keymidnight [2019-01-05 06:03:48 +0000 UTC]

Broken is the only character I remember and extremely enjoyed from Life of the Clans. I left about a year ago, due to inactivity. But I wanted to let you know Broken is a good angry cinnamon roll and i love him.

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creative-bliss2 [2016-11-26 04:21:23 +0000 UTC]

I was wondering if you would be interested in roleplaying with mossleaf from duskclan

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Mythimae [2016-11-12 05:11:57 +0000 UTC]

Heya! I was wondering if you'd wanna do a border rp with him and mythicalkhaos.deviantart.com/a… ? ;u; (uhhhhh her artwork needs updating) 

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Tatteredsoul-x In reply to Mythimae [2016-11-13 04:56:47 +0000 UTC]

Ah maybe, broken is pretty dangerous and unpredictable with night cleaners Though 

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Mythimae In reply to Tatteredsoul-x [2016-11-13 05:01:02 +0000 UTC]

Ah I see UvU well, if you don't want we don't have too ^u^

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Kodi-ak [2016-10-10 02:00:53 +0000 UTC]

Howdy! Would you like to roleplay with Vigilpaw ?

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Tatteredsoul-x In reply to Kodi-ak [2016-10-10 02:09:35 +0000 UTC]

As long as vigil can handle Broken XD he's a bit..grumpy 

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Kodi-ak In reply to Tatteredsoul-x [2016-10-10 03:00:36 +0000 UTC]

He will certainly do his best! 

How do you like to roleplay? o:

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Tatteredsoul-x In reply to Kodi-ak [2016-10-10 03:01:52 +0000 UTC]

Skype or notes

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Kodi-ak In reply to Tatteredsoul-x [2016-10-10 03:22:31 +0000 UTC]

Skype works for me! 

You're kitsunekyoto on there, right? o:

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Tatteredsoul-x In reply to Kodi-ak [2016-10-10 03:45:07 +0000 UTC]

Yepp 

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Rainyee [2016-09-09 16:20:38 +0000 UTC]

Want to rp with amberpaw?   
They are in different clans but we could maybe say they meet at the border between their territorys or something? :3

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Tatteredsoul-x In reply to Rainyee [2016-09-10 13:28:59 +0000 UTC]

 how do you wanna rp? I mainly rp through notes and Skype 

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Rainyee In reply to Tatteredsoul-x [2016-09-10 13:39:03 +0000 UTC]

Uhm notes maybe then? ^^ I've never tried to rp trough Skype but we could try if u want to :3

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Shiningstarofwinter [2016-04-06 20:56:30 +0000 UTC]

Would you be interested in RPing with Briarmoss?

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Tatteredsoul-x In reply to Shiningstarofwinter [2016-04-07 01:54:03 +0000 UTC]

Yeah sure ^^ just send a note so we can talk more about it

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Shiningstarofwinter In reply to Tatteredsoul-x [2016-04-07 03:53:54 +0000 UTC]

Okay, but fair warning DA has a bad habit of eating my notes without a trace. Both ones I send out and ones sent to me.

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Tatteredsoul-x In reply to Shiningstarofwinter [2016-04-07 19:31:30 +0000 UTC]

Well it's mainly so I can give you my Skype if you have one ^^

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Shiningstarofwinter In reply to Tatteredsoul-x [2016-04-09 05:06:40 +0000 UTC]

Sent you a note.   Hope it made it.

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Tatteredsoul-x In reply to Shiningstarofwinter [2016-04-09 17:20:43 +0000 UTC]

I got it, just sent a note back 

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greybowbaby [2016-03-30 22:49:17 +0000 UTC]

heyy!!
Shimmerleap's apprentice~
I hope they get along well and maybe Shimmerleap willl show Brokenpaw that not all Toms are bad!

Do you want to RP?
possibly them meeting?

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Tatteredsoul-x In reply to greybowbaby [2016-03-30 22:55:28 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I don't mind an rp, I want to see how brokenpaw reacts to having to talk to another Tom again lol

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greybowbaby In reply to Tatteredsoul-x [2016-03-30 22:58:00 +0000 UTC]

awesome! haha, I hope they can get along together!
Shimmerleap isn't a bad guy haha

do you want to start?

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Tatteredsoul-x In reply to greybowbaby [2016-03-30 22:59:54 +0000 UTC]

Well I'll be eating dinner right now, can you? I know I'll get distracted by something else and forget later 

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greybowbaby In reply to Tatteredsoul-x [2016-03-30 23:39:51 +0000 UTC]

okay haha

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XxxFantasyPagexxX [2016-03-30 21:37:47 +0000 UTC]

Welcome to Setting Clan!      

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CryptonicDemon [2016-03-30 17:29:47 +0000 UTC]

Brokenpaw is lovely! Welcome to Settingclan

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Tatteredsoul-x [2016-03-30 16:22:47 +0000 UTC]

*squishes brokenpaws cheeks* I can't wait to rp with him owo

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caprisunadd1ct [2016-03-30 03:15:35 +0000 UTC]

Brokenpaw's mentor will be Shimmerleap !

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RoarTigerRoar [2016-03-30 02:06:40 +0000 UTC]

//Screams//

Oh no he's so handsome! A shame I'm in Nightclan hehe. Wanna do a border RP when you get accepted?

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CrescentRose3716 [2016-03-30 01:56:27 +0000 UTC]

*pushes Juniperpaw towards and waggles brows*

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