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taumanso0 — Undertale Oc: Flour the Flower

Published: 2017-02-06 01:55:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 542; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Name: Flour, Tornia (former self)

Nickname(s): Soul Flower, Soul, Soul eater, Soul taker, Flow, Female Flowey (never call her that), Torn (former self), Bunbun (former self)

Gender: Female

Age: 11 

Species/What Are They: Flower (posthumous form), Bunny (former self)

Soul (Color): Doesn’t have a soul (yet she still has feelings)

Sexuality: Aromantic Grey Asexual, if sexual attraction, Bisexual

Atc: 5

Def: 16

Powers/Attacks: Seeds, vines

Fighting Style: Attacks in circles and in all angles with the seeds, attacks in straight lines (up, down, left, and right) with the vines

Friends With: Shepard, Frisk (end), Toriel 

Neutral With: Flowey, Alphys, Undyne, Asgore, and Frisk (beginning, middle)

Enemies With: Everyone else

Crush(es): Shepard (possibly)

Single, Taken, Or Talking (If the last two, with who): Single

Personality Towards Humans: Friendly, calm, helpful

Personality Towards Strangers: Friendly, calm, caring, nice

Personality Towards Friends: Caring, nice, energetic, talkative, helpful, smart, pitiful, carefree

Strengths: Her powers, her kindness

Weaknesses: Her powers (if she uses them too much), she's a flower... very vulnerable, insects

Flaws:
-Too friendly
-She’s a flower… she’s very vulnerable
-Thought she can sense if someone has the soul she needs... she's too slow to realize and realizes when it's too late

Likes: Water, the sun, freedom, the surface, determination, her former self, Shepard, gardens, flower crowns, music, bees

Dislikes: Her flower/posthumous self, fighting, violence, seeing people cry, Flowey (kinda), evil, being a flower, The underground, animals, Sans, hats (nobody knows why she hates them, she just does), puns, loud noise

Fears:
-People betraying her (because of her backstory)
-Chara (or as I like to call her/them, Genocider Frisk)
-Thinking/knowing she’ll never turn back to normal
-Birds
-Catapillars/Ladybugs (because they'll eat her)
-Animals in general (Except fish and bees)

Eye Color: Black

Clothes: She’s a flower, she don’t have any

Hair: She’s a flower, she doesn’t have hair (but if you count her petals… blue)

Skin: If you count her stem, green

Goals/Purpose: To turn back into her former self

Trivia:
-To turn back to her former self, she needs ALL the human souls (Patience, Bravery, Integrity, Perseverance, Kindness, Justice, and Determination); She has all of them but Determination.
-Her motto is “Live and Let Live”
-When she kills someone she gets very regretful
-The souls she haves aren't from the ones Asgore got, but from different people. (because if Chara and Frisk can both have the determination soul then... other people can have to same souls, right?)
-She refers to everyone as "Sweetheart" or "Sugar"

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Work-In-Progress (almost complete)
3 out of 10 Undertale oc's

CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM NEEDED 

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Comments: 1

MadKingMarc [2017-02-06 02:21:42 +0000 UTC]

i have a problem with the color palette and the colors and kinda the character in general.

first: she's basically flowey but nice and bubbly and that isnt really... original. (dont get me wrong flowey is nice in the end but yeah)

second: she shouldn't have all of the souls (i know that she doesnt have the determination soul) because they were scattered everywhere and possibly gone for good.

third: the multiple colors on the petals are impossible and even still that undertale is a game the flowers dont look like that, even flowey.
maybe just go with the blue so it doesnt look so unnatural or 'special snowflake'-ish

fourth: the unoriginal fighting style. maybe instead of 'bullets' like seeds or ladybugs or something. but im cool with the vines.

Random stuff that i kinda have a problem with: The fears are kinda... normal and like pretty much everyone has atleast one or two of those fears. maybe so something like the fears are... dogs, bird poop, shoes. etc. (just an example) the dislikes are also kinda like the fears so maybe mess around with them.

thats really it? she seems cool and seems like she could get along with edward(one of my ocs for undertale) tho he's kinda scary ^^'

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