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Envytheskunk In reply to Taylor-Call [2015-02-16 17:23:14 +0000 UTC]
Ok good to know, in the end you did splendidly.
Thank you, I'll keep trying.
Maybe it would help if I could find a beta reader? I'll worry about that later. For now I have to make the chapter first before somebody can review it.
I have bits of my first chapter. I think I'm going to have to start over on it sadly because it's start off with a character that's not even going to be a big part of the story. It's more like a gag character or something. It was going to have the villain too but it just didn't flow right with me.
I'm going to start of with a "Po dream sequence" like it was in the first movie since KFP 3 is going to start off like that.
You know, coincidently my villain is kind of similiar to the villain the official KFP3 movie, power wise at least. The rest of him isn't really that similiar with my fan character villain.
(my big story is my version of KFP 3 by the way XD!)
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Taylor-Call In reply to Envytheskunk [2015-02-16 19:23:37 +0000 UTC]
Cool! If you want to get some pointers, you can send me notes! I'd be happy to help out
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Envytheskunk In reply to Taylor-Call [2015-02-16 19:44:03 +0000 UTC]
Ok, cool I'll keep that in mind. I sure would appreciate it.
Anyway, may you have many blessings on your other stories while I do my best on mine.
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