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TC-96 — Undertale - Goat Mom is Everyone's Mom
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Published: 2016-07-12 20:07:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 132125; Favourites: 5023; Downloads: 710
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Admit it, Toriel is everyone's mom X3 especially when they go out on family outings to the park. Someone has to keep an eye on all these kids after all, and Papyrus can get lost easily when he wanders: "Undyne please stop fidgeting."
"But is was saving it for lateeer..."
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A very good picture to look at, simply wonderful.
It goes without saying every single character is portrayed perfectly according to their personalities, be it sans sleeping in Toriel's back, papyrus always being overjoyed and acting as a kid, Chara and Asriel as real siblings (Chara still portrayed as a mischievous kid and Asriel as a pushover), and Frisk just being Frisk (which may I add is a really good way of portraying them since the game never gives them any sort of personality, allowing you to fill that character with your own) and Undyne almost looking embarrased at Toriel's affection, and even Toriel herself with a calm expression that goes to show she has a lot of experience taking care of children (notice how she can even handle Papyrus without looking at him, and even had a handkerchief for Undyne), or in this case, EVERYTHING.
The character design is well put together, none of the characters feel out of place when comparing them to their game counterparts, Alphys looks a little odd however with thouse hands that, in my humble opinion, look too big for her. Also, none of them feel stiff or lazy regarding poses, especially papyrus and Asriel.
On another note is also a really nice touch to deviate a little on some of the character's clothes (Frisk and Alphys) because as we all know, we don't always wear the same clothes every day.
The colors of the characters are also well researched, they match their game counterparts well, and because they have just the right amount of detail (not too much) we're not driven away from the cartoonish feeling the characters themselves give.
The composition of the background is very well made, the colours are not too bright or too dark, and do a fine job at making it look like it's daylight. The soft appearance of the trees and the sky gives off a soothing feeling of peace, a beautiful way to describe the new world the monsters get to live in.
However, I have to say I feel like the shadows in the ground lack a little more detail since they act as a bridge between the characters and the background which was made in another style. The shading in the characters is hard to notice and it almost looks like they don't have any, all these however are minor details that don't affect too much my final decision (considering this is all supposed to be in the middle of the day).
In conclusion, this is a wonderful and heart-warming piece of work, the theme and the setting is extremely well done and the amount of detail is perfect for what it is about, I simply can't find anything wrong with this picture that could lead me to dislike it or that I should strongly enphasize.
In other words I like it.
PS: Thank you for reading, this was my first critique and I wanted to do it the best I could...
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Now I'm no pro, but I have seen a lot of different art pieces. I can honestly say this is a very fun and original piece. I can clearly see the vision of what TC was going for and everyone can have a good laugh out of it. I was particularly impressed with Chara burning ants and Asriel's reaction to it. It's clear that you can imagine this art coming to life, which is very important for a visual artist.
Overall, TC did a wonderful job on this work of art. I encourage him/her to keep up the good work.
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I agree. This is a true piece of art. :3
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First of all things alphys looks like a hobit, CHARAS LEGS ARE SO SMALL
How is chara's legs EVEN HOLDING HER Asriel is overlapped on the ant hill and it kinda makes him look weird. The background doesn't match.and I have to say I'd didn't know the Icecream piles can be that freaking long jeez.the shading makes it look like chara is taking a dump. And the way you drew papyrus's gloves THEIR GLOVES why do they not have fingers? This art is okay and all its just it looks a bit weird....yeah well I think the way you drew the letters Z makes it look weird
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I was probably an asshole in this one
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How may I sum this piece up, in one singular word? Well, this seems to be a daunting task. This piece is that good that it is hard to sum this up in a single word. But I can, but I think I'm cheating a little. There are three words that I think sum this up... the first being "adorable." Because just look at it. Toriel is in charge while everyone else is having their own silly antics. Chara's burning ants, Papyrus wants to run off and do... something... Undyne and Alphys are eating popsicles, and Frisk is standing there just being Frisk. Oh, and sans is sleeping. Sounds like a normal day in Tori's life. The second word is "motherly." Like I said, Tori is the mother around here, and you could be the kid who throws a tantrum at the slightest thing not going your way, and she'd still have that smile on her face. And the third? "UNDERTALE!" Undertale is one of my favorite games of all time, and to see all of these characters in the park, doing their own silly things, with Toriel being the best Goatmom around is just amazing, mindblowing, and the thing that just makes you say "Awwwww...." all wrapped up in one.
All in all, great work, TC!
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This piece is one of my favorites by you, and when I saw that you were asking for critiques, I just knew I had to do it. So thank you for allowing critiques on this piece! Keep up the good work, TC!
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I love the way you make oriel Everyone's goat mom. I can just imagine ASGIRE being on a leash! You show the emotions of everyone really well and how they would react. It captures the moment really well. This is one of my favourite artworks by you! Please make more like these. I would love it if you make an OC as well! Add in more FUNNNNNN Yeah i aint no good at writing any critiques.... PLEASE CONTINUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE yeah PLEASE d d d d d d d d d dd d d d d dd e d d d d d d d d dd d
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I immediately laughed when I was this. This was hilarious, and it really fit with Toriel's personality. Papyrus being handled like a runaway child made me laugh so hard, there are no words to describe how awesome this is. Frisk is just standing there, nobody even noticing him, which made me think he was being treated like the mature one of the group. What Chara and Asriel are doing is pretty interesting. I feel for those ants, as if it was the burning doll eye that Ashley Choi was burning with a magnifying glass in 'Hate You MV'.
(If my writing looks different, its because I was taught how to write really good critiques by my strict English Teacher)
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Next school year we should go see them.
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I have classmates who saw 'her' through our math class window.
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I think I know which teacher your talking about................
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[Intro]
Hey!
We are Number One
Hey!
We are Number One
[Verse 1]
Now listen closely
Here's a little lesson in trickery
This is going down in history
If you wanna be a Villain Number One
You have to chase a superhero on the run
Just follow my moves, and sneak around
Be careful not to make a sound
(Shh)
(No, don't touch that!)
[Chorus]
We are Number One
Hey!
We are Number One
We are Number One
[Verse 2]
Ha ha ha
Now look at this net, that I just found
When I say go, be ready to throw
Go!
(Throw it on him, not me!)
(Uh, let's try something else)
Now watch and learn, here's the deal
He'll slip and slide on this banana peel!
(Ha ha ha, gasp! what are you doing!?)
[Outro]
Ba-ba-biddly-ba-ba-ba-ba, ba-ba-ba-ba-ba-ba-ba
We are Number One
Hey!
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Hey!
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This is an Excellent portrayal of the characters Personalities. The details are absolutely Brilliant too! This is by far one of the most excellent pieces of work I found on this deviantart site. I love the way Chara and Asriel are portrayed as true siblings. I love the way Papyrus looks, as if he wants to go out and see the world in just one day. Sans Is portrayed as the game made him look. I love how toriel acts as a Mother to all of them, as if they are all her children.
goat mom is goat
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praise goat mom
toriel is goat mom
hail goat mom
hail goat mum
hail our lord and savior and mom toriel
mum goat
mom goat
there's no daddy
there's no asgore
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This is simply a good image, spirit of goat mom is really well implemented, the design of all the characters it's clean, the details, colouring and the background doesn't need anything else but, there are thing that I consider out of place.
First is the fact of perfection that have the image, all the characters are accommodated in such an order that doesn't look credible, then, there is a feeling of isolation, there are no other persons/silhouettes on the image, and makes it look like they are alone in the world, the third thing I notice is the change of style in the background and the characters itself, tho normally it doesn't matter or is not a big deal, I can't help the fact that the characters fit, but the style doesn't, other thing I see is the shading, even tho is good, it's poor, not in the way of it been bad or poorly done, there is too little of it, it complements well, but there space for so much, last thing is just a detail, the arm of toriel that is holding papyrus dosen't seems to be using force, even if pap is pure bones, undyne said it, "I don't thing I could even let him enter the royal guard, not because he is weak, he's actually really freaking tough it's just that he is too good".
thank you for reading, and I want to remind you TC-96 that even if this is a critique, is just my opinion and point of view, you can't please everyone, I really enjoy you content, and I just wanted to give you a sincere critique.
with appreciation Kevin Alejandro Floreas Pardio
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this is such a thorough critique, wow! i'm so glad that u r a part of projectcomment, cuz then others can enjoy such awesomeness too. And I am so very honored to have been added to ur watchlist. This is a great day!
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ty TxT XD you're the first person to ever tell me this things :v I'm saving this comment in my notifications, never deleting it XD
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ahahaha oh wow. Never thought it would mean this much to u. Now I'm happy too!ggyyyyaaaaahh!
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thanks for the critique, though the thing with Toriel's arm was intended to show that she makes things look rather effortless, even with Papyrus yanking on a leash, and the fact that she would be rather strong as a boss monster. The background and characters were supposed to sort of look like they were taken from a cartoon, where the characters do pop from the background and stand out, but that's just sort of my style, I need to work on more techniques to shading ^^'
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ok 
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I get the feeling that Sans just didn't wanna walk
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Uhh...... Toriel, you might want to look after Chara a bit more, cause...... uhmm........
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I think I need a kid leash sometimes since I walk away a lot :3. Oops
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The skeleton brothers are literally my favourite sibling duo and honestly scratch that, my favourite due of all times.
They are just so perfect.
Also ants, Please give Chara's chocolate back otherwise they are going to commit ant genocide until somebody slaps them in the back (Probz Frisk when they get older) and tells them to stop.
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