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Published: 2006-05-08 23:09:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 300; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 8
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Only God can save me now,Small burts of passion,
Moments of silence,
Incapsulated in a source of wonder,
Give me the courage, strength and honour,
To spill the contents of my heart,
How every breathe shared with you,
Triggers such desire and fantasy,
A wanting, needing, A fight to survive,
Make me whole, give me life,
Love me in return,
For only you can save me now...
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ahhhhh *winces at the tickleyness* ahahaha lol
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you get weirder and weirder.... tis now official
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yey, its actually official lol
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yep men in white coats'll come take you away (we hope)! Oh dear did I really put that?
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yeah well I know how to get out of a straight jacket so blurgh! haha lol, I've had practise! nah....as they put it on you inhale loads and puff out your chest and stomach, then when its on and all tight and stuff you exhale, which gives you slack to put your arms over ya head, then you can undo the buckles on ya arms with ya teeth, and then undo the back with ya hands, pull it off over ya head and ya sorted *grins* lol and now you know next time you are take by strange men in white coats!
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yes dear.... thats old news... keep up!
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oh sorry, what is it now? use the mechanical screwdriver of none other than david tennant and christopher eccleson?
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could well be.... when I find out I let you know! lol
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hahahahah well thank you, I still like the idea of David Tennant coming along with his 'device' and helping me out of such situations! lol
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how could I possibly comment on that!
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By saying how write I am in thinking such a thing.....I wanna meet Dr Who! lol
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omfg, my brother just told mum that I have a porn stash, because he got caught with a porn stash! so he said I have one of Mr fucking C! grr im gonna kill him (i dont by the way) lol.
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Ouch.... thats just nasty thing for him to say! Eugh I don't even want to think about that! I'm meant to be revisin but I got bored already and mum's just come back from supermarket! Ooooops reply later! x
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yah v v nasty, 
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Yeh I have a feeling mum wouldn't approve of DA.
Nah I can defo think of mr c in better erm... 'circumstances'!
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bless ya! my mum never believes a word i say and seems to think that da is a site for "chatting up" people, lol she is always like "who are you talking to?" then i say Rachel, Rachel, Collete or Malissa and she just goes mmmmmmm as if im lying¬!!! grrr lol
yeah i dont tend to think of mr c like "AT ALL" unless i have had a dream about him 
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no im not! lol, i had a dream at mals last night! and people were coming back from the war lol, ive been reading too much of birdsong haha lol yeah he rocks
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haha your chatting up people on DA... hmmmmm
That's fair do's.... I haven't had a dream for aaaaaaaaaages! So unfair! Hehe off to plague him tomorrow! x
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I like it.... I think the free verse works well to create effects that would not have been as effective in a rigid or formal structure so congrats duster
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hahaha thanks dude! x x x
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awww a kiss! lol! x x
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but of course! x only the one mind!
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ergh, btw, i have just seen you lol and you went *groggle cesh* in my neck hahahaha what a way to describe eh? MEH! lol x x
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haha i know what you are waffling about which is good
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hahahahah yeah! I am glad you do because otherwise that is just completly random! lol
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definately! not that random is always a bad thing!
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definatly to you too! i LOVE random lol.....hows this for random.....i watched a film with kevin costner in and he was good lol. and i need the loo....thats random and sick! lol
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erm.... yeh I think that qualifies as random!
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I like it.... I think the free verse works well to create effects that would not have been as effective in a rigid or formal structure congrats duster
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hahahahaha well thank you very much me main dudette! x x
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well... i always enjoy your poetry so please write some more
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awwww thank you! x x x
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omg what a suck up! lol this poem is good sure...but not your best! hurry up and write decent poetry!
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thanx mark, coz i dont hate it enough
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haha no worries, just being a true friend! you write brilliant poety at times! what the matter at the moment? not getting enough to be in a romantic mood? lol....mr farron still likes ya lol he can help you get back into the romantic mood for poetry again hahhaa lol
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well you are a true friend, thankies *head gets big* no im not getting any! therefore romantic mood has gone to pot....mr farron still likes me?? poor guy doesn't know what he is letting himself into lol, i told you that I know longer what him to "get me in the mood" hahaha lol, but i still love him, just not like that and he knows it so! x x x
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mmmmm, well he says he has been in contact with you, he doesn't liek me in any way so sure....go get him tiger, you know you want him back! I meen, didn't the English/PE side to him turn ya on? lol He's more into English now as well since he has been doing cover for us when we were in secondry! He's good with words! and he covered our physics class once....so he's a little like Mr S lol
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If he wants me back then he shouldn't use an immature student, no offense, to do his dirty work for him. I have found others, so am no longer in need of another guy in my life. I know he's good with words.
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I like it my fellow poet. If this is a guideline then you have yourself one Hell of a blue print. Write on!
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hahaha why thank you *bows* x x x
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Excellent flow! Stay in touch!
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thank you! and i shall! x x
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