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tcisf2f — Wish he'd realise how she felt
Published: 2006-02-18 14:54:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 132; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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Description Always Tripping, Attension seeking,
Getting rid of pain the old fashioned way,
Wanting the same person,
She's got more chance,
I blew it when I was younger,

Don't mind the way she seeks attension,
But the fact he answers to her call,
Never realising her feelings,
Too busy concentrating on mine,

One day he'll see the truth,
I want him to be happy,
Just not with her,
He'll suffer the consequence.
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Comments: 29

rachelcomotto [2006-02-18 15:01:03 +0000 UTC]

definately something deep rooted, you portray it well. Seems like subtle threats although you wouldn't hurt this person despite who he chooses?
Definately thumbs up! You def have a talent

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tcisf2f In reply to rachelcomotto [2006-02-18 15:12:10 +0000 UTC]

awww thanx hun. No subtle threats there however lol. I would never hurt this person no no no no, but he has hurt me emotionally lol what talent? hehe thanx for the comment and for adding as a fave!

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rachelcomotto In reply to tcisf2f [2006-02-18 20:56:08 +0000 UTC]

not a threat to this 'person you like' but almost as a warning to this 'competition'? if that is the right terminology?

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tcisf2f In reply to rachelcomotto [2006-02-19 11:37:05 +0000 UTC]

yes perfect! thats the one, a warning, warning him to be careful as things can happen, hearts break etc etc lol

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rachelcomotto In reply to tcisf2f [2006-05-01 16:03:02 +0000 UTC]

so who's it about???

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tcisf2f In reply to rachelcomotto [2006-05-05 09:06:28 +0000 UTC]

Mr C, when I liked him for like EVER, but its annoying that now I dont. and he still was funny with me, but he's brilliant now, i think because im more chilled out around him and not so nervous, he can be himself round me, so this poem is useless now lol.....and at the time i didnt want him going off with a certain person, i want him to be happy as it says, but i didnt want him to go with that person, because he'd get hurt, although im starting to think that she would make him happy now too, they both deserve someone, and if it means them getting together im happy *grins* besides it doesn't matter anymore....im just glad that me and him can talk without worrying about what we both think about each other or what anyone else is thinking.... x x x

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rachelcomotto In reply to tcisf2f [2006-05-05 17:28:26 +0000 UTC]

I guessed Mr C... bless his lil cotton socks! Oooooh poetry is on on monday
Who's the 'certain person'???? Pawpus x

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tcisf2f In reply to rachelcomotto [2006-05-06 09:44:53 +0000 UTC]

yah! coolio im excited lol, the 'certain person'???? omg your gonna laugh and say how stupid i was at the time lol

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rachelcomotto In reply to tcisf2f [2006-05-06 12:47:29 +0000 UTC]

why??? Email me then .... x

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tcisf2f In reply to rachelcomotto [2006-05-06 13:34:28 +0000 UTC]

because....its one of my very best friends, who i think would be great with him, but i dont think she likes him in that way lol and visa versa...aaaaaand because its completly random

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rachelcomotto In reply to tcisf2f [2006-05-06 13:39:28 +0000 UTC]

do I know them????
WHy's it completely random?

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tcisf2f In reply to rachelcomotto [2006-05-07 10:28:54 +0000 UTC]

yes you do, more than anyone i would hope.....and its random and your gonna kill me for thinking such a thing...but they are good together *grins* so sweet! In a weird way lol

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rachelcomotto In reply to tcisf2f [2006-05-07 12:50:08 +0000 UTC]

Check your email! x

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tcisf2f In reply to rachelcomotto [2006-05-07 14:10:25 +0000 UTC]

check yours! lol

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rachelcomotto In reply to tcisf2f [2006-05-07 20:18:52 +0000 UTC]

I have check yours! x

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tcisf2f In reply to rachelcomotto [2006-05-08 18:28:00 +0000 UTC]

hahahah clever....dont check yours just yet lol

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tcisf2f In reply to tcisf2f [2006-05-08 22:37:50 +0000 UTC]

hahahaha it'll be done by morning...im up all night doing howgates work ya see lol x x x damn i wish id said goodbye to mr c properly rather then "shit....see ya" he didnt say anything did i? what did you guys say? sorry its just i have ot get lauren from school and its late enough getting her without missing my bus too! lol x x x

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rachelcomotto In reply to tcisf2f [2006-11-16 22:42:37 +0000 UTC]

ooooh i remember this thread of comments! Do you? x

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tcisf2f In reply to rachelcomotto [2006-11-23 10:13:48 +0000 UTC]

haha same here, poor mr c lol...i really have been mean the guy....I ctually swore at him lol nah not literally, and im not meen lol *ponders*

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rachelcomotto In reply to tcisf2f [2006-11-23 19:52:14 +0000 UTC]

well it was a general swear at the 3 of us surely??? although it worked out well as the carrots were planted lol.
Not mean............... nope! x

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tcisf2f In reply to rachelcomotto [2006-12-05 00:36:27 +0000 UTC]

yeah it was...but i said it too him as i was talking to him lol
Im over it now hehe

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rachelcomotto In reply to tcisf2f [2006-12-05 10:03:46 +0000 UTC]

well he got his revenge last poetry... shove that crutch down your throat!

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tcisf2f In reply to rachelcomotto [2006-12-05 20:27:18 +0000 UTC]

ha yeah....bet thats been building up for a while...I don't mind him having his go...he deserves it if not more...but not over silly things like that lol coz i hate it when im right coz i wanna argue the point lol he shud just come out and shout at me call me a bitch etc ha lol

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rachelcomotto In reply to tcisf2f [2006-12-05 20:48:16 +0000 UTC]

Maybe that's still to come.....? lol

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tcisf2f In reply to rachelcomotto [2006-12-05 21:00:41 +0000 UTC]

haha yeah lol...last day...the moment he has been waiting for *baldspot goes red and head explodes onto zoe*

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rachelcomotto In reply to tcisf2f [2006-12-07 20:52:57 +0000 UTC]

hehe.... we'll see eh! Although I'm in trouble now!

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tcisf2f In reply to rachelcomotto [2006-12-07 23:49:45 +0000 UTC]

yeah haha...lol nah ya not....he'll love ya more for it, people make mistakes...just meens ya normal

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rachelcomotto In reply to tcisf2f [2006-12-08 12:11:14 +0000 UTC]

Normal! If only.... lol
He'll love me more for hurting him?!?! I don't see the logic but I'll take your word for it! x

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rachelcomotto In reply to tcisf2f [2006-05-08 19:52:44 +0000 UTC]

okey dokey..... *sits and waits and twiddles thumbs*

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