Comments: 25
Bandia13 [2010-10-10 05:51:41 +0000 UTC]
this sign is harder to see compared to the others. maybe make it a little more silver?
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Teakster In reply to Bandia13 [2010-10-14 15:29:05 +0000 UTC]
I've had a lot of mixed feedback on this image.
Thank you for the feedback. I think I will play with it a bit more.
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Bandia13 In reply to Teakster [2010-10-15 00:45:59 +0000 UTC]
i like it though
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maclegno [2010-02-27 14:53:32 +0000 UTC]
Your series is so beautiful and imaginative. If I have your permission I would like to make a wood plaque of the series. The only problem is that as a non-Arabic reader I cannot make out the Calligraphy on this one. Are there any other examples of the word AIR I could look at?
Gerard
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Teakster In reply to maclegno [2010-03-10 13:37:44 +0000 UTC]
I am glad that you like it!
This design was made using my own style of calligraphy!
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ConstantlyForever [2010-02-07 06:29:07 +0000 UTC]
I like how its blended into the background barely visible but you know its there. Just like the element itself.
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Haeztiger7 [2009-07-28 09:58:05 +0000 UTC]
Mystical!
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ArtIsWhatsUp [2008-11-20 03:16:06 +0000 UTC]
i kinda like that it blends in, it gives it a more light abstract feel; like air.
The caligraphy is hard to see though... i think id like it either way.
Overall, great series.
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Teakster In reply to ArtIsWhatsUp [2008-11-26 12:23:42 +0000 UTC]
Thanks - You know...I think this is one which got most of the harsh comments!
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xpsuedoxangelx [2008-07-31 14:16:22 +0000 UTC]
This one doesn't really seem to fit in as well as the others...
I agree with everyone else, you should def. try darkening either the caligraphy or the background - just to make the writing more porominent.
cheers ~
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AvocadoArt [2008-07-16 23:23:14 +0000 UTC]
You put these elements on great backgrounds, but this one is not to identify. What do you think about a thin black or dark grey contour ?
greets
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cai-borc-unit-0015 [2008-07-15 22:54:01 +0000 UTC]
I like it like this....makes the air more mysterious and symbolice of its properties *invisible*
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Kieli [2008-04-02 01:34:09 +0000 UTC]
You can still have the "smoky" effect if you make the calligraphy more prominent...perhaps give it sort of a greyish glow, just so that it can stand out from the ephemeral effects.
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queenpixie [2008-03-30 18:26:23 +0000 UTC]
i can see where ur trying to go with this...i think it wud work better if the calligraphy was a little more prominant- maybe cast a shadow over the smoke? jst a thought ^^
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Teakster In reply to queenpixie [2008-03-31 08:25:31 +0000 UTC]
Yeah I tried that...but I didn't like the effect.
Instead I wanted a kind of "smokey" effect!
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