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Published: 2015-04-18 22:09:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 2661; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 3
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Description Alright guys. I have solved made mild progress on the next portion of Reign's Pacing Issues.

The problems? Paneling/Pacing.
The solution? Small updates.

Smaller updates is a direction Reign has been taking for a while now, but my original idea of smaller updates was 20 panels or less. The reality is, 20 is an awkward number. It doesn't allow enough panels for fluid transition, and it's too much panels for me to create regular updates with my current work/medical schedule. Updates of 10 panels or less are the perfect size; they create event-by-event page updates with plenty of room to detail the action, but not enough to bog down the flow with information.

TL;DR: Reign will now be updated in small pages of 10 panels or less... WEEKLY. That' right. WEEKLY.

I've always worked on a panel-per-day schedule, but I've been periodically redoing panels and pages because I just couldn't get the pacing right. I think these smaller, burst-like updates are a step in the right direction. Woo!

About this update:
Not much to say. I like it much more than the original... ten... drafts I had. I still think the NIGHTMARE panel could use some tweaking, but honestly, the tweaks I want to do are above my artistic level. So I'll just keep on practicing. XD


Nuzlocke Rules:
1) If a Pokemon faints, it's dead. Release or permanently box it.
2) Every Pokemon must be named.
3) Only the first Pokemon on each Route may be caught.
3a) No duplicates, including evolutionary forms
3b) Event based Pokemon, such as in-game gifts or legendaries, are exempt from this rule.
4) Only Moo-Moo milks can be bought. Everything else (including Pokeballs) must be found.

Reign
First: Prologue
Previous: Chapter 1.12
Next:Chapter 1.14
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Comments: 11

Naehja [2017-09-06 18:45:51 +0000 UTC]

"I'm not with Plasma, I just help this stupid kid to not die because of his stupidity"

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Miscomunication [2015-04-27 02:35:17 +0000 UTC]

Wooo smaller pages work fine!

And oh boy here we go

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TeamHeartGold In reply to Miscomunication [2015-04-27 02:40:42 +0000 UTC]

Yup! And the next one's already out, too~

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purpledevimon [2015-04-23 08:46:53 +0000 UTC]

Poor Touko, I like how she dropped N though X)

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SABERinBLUE [2015-04-19 04:52:02 +0000 UTC]

I LIKE where this is going.

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TeamHeartGold In reply to SABERinBLUE [2015-04-20 12:53:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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foxwafflesdraws [2015-04-19 03:26:29 +0000 UTC]

LOL I LOVE how in the first few panels Touya is like oh this isn't who I expected it to be *lets N fall THUD* Amazing story, I really love how you are practicing and improving things like pacing, it's really inspirational to see your improvement!

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TeamHeartGold In reply to foxwafflesdraws [2015-04-20 12:55:48 +0000 UTC]

Let's just say Touko's still a bit salty about being attacked by Plasma. XD

And thanks! I'm doing my best to improve so that the comic only gets better for you guys and more enjoyable for me as the artist. I'm glad it's inspiring. >////<

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IamaCutie [2015-04-18 23:22:55 +0000 UTC]

I can sense some major stuff is going to happen and possibly be revealed but I'm way too amused by N's head just hitting the ground

plus, doesn't Nightmare have an even more detrimental effect in sleeping victims...?

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TeamHeartGold In reply to IamaCutie [2015-04-20 12:56:15 +0000 UTC]

Hehehe. Touko may be a bit salty.

And you'll see~~~~~~~~~

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Gecko-Comics [2015-04-18 23:04:35 +0000 UTC]

ooh, now she gets to endure a nightmare world! yay!

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