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    Sapphire knocked gently on the front door and then opened it without even waiting for a response. Ruby’s mom had long ago learned that the wild girl would grow impatient at the doorstep and would then attempt to get in through one of the windows, which then usually led to a spat between the girl and her son. Thus, the door was left unlocked at all times.

    The girl in question entered the house, Plusle and Minun both holding on for dear life as she moved through in nearly half the time it would have taken to walk – which wasn’t very long at all. She spotted her victim friend sitting on the couch and walked up behind him. She eyed the cloth in his hands before speaking. “What’cha makin’?”

    Ruby barely glanced her way, quite used to her appearing out of nowhere. “A question generator.” He turned back to his sewing, carefully making sure that the stitches were even and perfect. “And it seems to be working quite well.”

    Sapphire frowned at him, her forehead wrinkling as she thought about this. Plusle and Minun climbed over and off her to peer down at the boy, curiosity showing in their eyes.

    “Why must ya make everythin’ difficult,” grumbled the girl, her blue eyes narrowing at him. “Why can’t ya just answer the question?”

    He turned back to her, his red eyes sparkling mischievously. “Now why would I do that? It’s a secret, of course.” He hummed slightly to himself as he turned back to his work.

    “…You are makin’ your plottin’ face again.”

    “I don’t have a ‘plotting face’.”

    “Yes, yes ya do. You are makin’ it right now.”

    “Hmm.”

    Realizing that she was getting nowhere with this conversation, Sapphire turned to leave, her plans of adventures this afternoon foiled, and her Pokémon were currently more fascinated with Ruby’s project than with her . As she reached the doorway, a sudden suspicion struck her, and she quickly turned around to face the couch. “Whatever you are plottin’, it better NOT mess with me.”

    Ruby just smiled at her in an infuriating manner and went back to his sewing, leaving a very irritated Sapphire with no doubt that Ruby’s plans involved her somehow.
^^ Felt like trying to write something in my description other than just my thoughts.
I really enjoyed drawing this piece; I feel like I'm finally starting to be able to to put more than one person in a picture as well as furniture and objects. Drawing a manga really does help you improve.

I would appreciated any feedback I'm given. I would especially love some constructive comments. Please, don't hold back in telling me the flaws, as it will only help me to improve in the future.

EDIT: Watermark has been updated

Any comments/constructive criticism would be most appreciated!

Pokemon is owned by The Pokemon Company, Game Freak, Creatures, and Nintendo. I do not own their concepts, nor their characters.
The artwork, however, IS mine, and you are not allowed to do anything with it, or post it on another website, without my permission.

Description

    Sapphire knocked gently on the front door and then opened it without even waiting for a response. Ruby’s mom had long ago learned that the wild girl would grow impatient at the doorstep and would then attempt to get in through one of the windows, which then usually led to a spat between the girl and her son. Thus, the door was left unlocked at all times.

    The girl in question entered the house, Plusle and Minun both holding on for dear life as she moved through in nearly half the time it would have taken to walk – which wasn’t very long at all. She spotted her victim friend sitting on the couch and walked up behind him. She eyed the cloth in his hands before speaking. “What’cha makin’?”

    Ruby barely glanced her way, quite used to her appearing out of nowhere. “A question generator.” He turned back to his sewing, carefully making sure that the stitches were even and perfect. “And it seems to be working quite well.”

    Sapphire frowned at him, her forehead wrinkling as she thought about this. Plusle and Minun climbed over and off her to peer down at the boy, curiosity showing in their eyes.

    “Why must ya make everythin’ difficult,” grumbled the girl, her blue eyes narrowing at him. “Why can’t ya just answer the question?”

    He turned back to her, his red eyes sparkling mischievously. “Now why would I do that? It’s a secret, of course.” He hummed slightly to himself as he turned back to his work.

    “…You are makin’ your plottin’ face again.”

    “I don’t have a ‘plotting face’.”

    “Yes, yes ya do. You are makin’ it right now.”

    “Hmm.”

    Realizing that she was getting nowhere with this conversation, Sapphire turned to leave, her plans of adventures this afternoon foiled, and her Pokémon were currently more fascinated with Ruby’s project than with her . As she reached the doorway, a sudden suspicion struck her, and she quickly turned around to face the couch. “Whatever you are plottin’, it better NOT mess with me.”

    Ruby just smiled at her in an infuriating manner and went back to his sewing, leaving a very irritated Sapphire with no doubt that Ruby’s plans involved her somehow.
^^ Felt like trying to write something in my description other than just my thoughts.
I really enjoyed drawing this piece; I feel like I'm finally starting to be able to to put more than one person in a picture as well as furniture and objects. Drawing a manga really does help you improve.

I would appreciated any feedback I'm given. I would especially love some constructive comments. Please, don't hold back in telling me the flaws, as it will only help me to improve in the future.

EDIT: Watermark has been updated

Any comments/constructive criticism would be most appreciated!

Pokemon is owned by The Pokemon Company, Game Freak, Creatures, and Nintendo. I do not own their concepts, nor their characters.
The artwork, however, IS mine, and you are not allowed to do anything with it, or post it on another website, without my permission.