drift42 [2014-01-23 01:40:22 +0000 UTC]
"Past hard time and good throughout history" this one line is just a little awkward in phrasing. I'm not entirely sure how I myself would phrase it, but just wanted to put that out there.
I really love the meaning of this poem. Very deep, personal, and easy to relate to. You have a gift, never stop writing.
I'm really interested in what would be the result if you were to write something besides poetry. More story-like. I think you could really become a good author. It's good to experiment with different areas of writing.
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