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teejaii — SMV: Sailor Vermilion drops in pg 3
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Sailor Moon (c) Naoko Takeuchi
Sailor Chaska (c) ~nagoyamonkey-smg
Sailor Vermilion (c) me
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And here we see the "stick figure" again -- in the future, try not to skimp out on that! If you're going to do that, at least keep some defining features so we know it's Jaques, like her hairstyle.
Anyways, I've pretty much said everything I needed to say in my past comments. Just to recap, I'd love to see you experiment with:
- Dynamic Lineart
- More detailed backgrounds
- Anatomy (especially males)
- Story Transitioning
But this is a cute start and I can't wait to see more of Jaques!
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Again thank you sooooo much for this!!!
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Awwh, poor Vermilion. I totally want to just gather her up in a giant hug and tell her "It's okay! <3"
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As I read this my OC's are sitting in the back of my mind and Dani is like "poor 'Mili!" I look forward to reading more about Vermilion.
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