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I've been feeling a bit down as of late, and a bit out of it creatively... so hopefully some wholesome Jirenx21 fluff will help me get back to being creative again.


I headcanon Good 21 being fond of the warmth - if she finds something (or someone) warm - she curls up and falls asleep ^^


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Teira-Nova In reply to ??? [2020-09-03 08:45:28 +0000 UTC]

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t-aj In reply to Teira-Nova [2020-09-03 13:17:45 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, well, Jiren would not mind cuddling (in private of course) whatsoever in my story, although he's extremely shy when it comes up to the fairer sex. Of course she'd sleep for hours. But I do think that the Pride of his Universe would pass the time by meditating? Oh I would love to!

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Teira-Nova In reply to t-aj [2020-09-05 03:03:16 +0000 UTC]

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t-aj In reply to Teira-Nova [2020-09-05 08:07:56 +0000 UTC]

Oh I know. In my story, he would admit that she's his first date. First Valentine date was hilarious as it was kinda nice, apart from Toppo telling them that they have troubles, 21 would assist Cocotte, Zoirey and Tupper while Jiren would help Dyspo and Kun'si. The results were hilarious as Jiren kind of went overboard...
Oups. A glare from the Gray, sure is terrifying. Jiren actually reached his full potential when he started to become protective of 21, Vegeta will tell Goku that they missed their chance fighting the Gray.

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Teira-Nova In reply to t-aj [2020-09-05 11:20:57 +0000 UTC]

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t-aj In reply to Teira-Nova [2020-09-05 11:43:26 +0000 UTC]

Oh their very first date was hilarious. Jiren wearing his casual clothes, 21 eating like a beast, Jiren tipping more than he should, 21 knocking someone who hit on her out cold, being barred from entering the first restaurant, with Jiren NOT arresting the thieves the very next morning (Dyspo couldn't let it slide!)... Yeah, it was a disaster, that both enjoyed sooo much.
Oh she did help. Jiren had two accounts, one for him, one for 21 (courtesy of Toppo) Which he splitted his overdue payment, 50 50 as she's his student and all. Then he never withdraw a single penny from his own.
Oh in my story, he finished his growth spurt right before the second ToP, and since he didn't wear it, he never realized. Imagine Toppo's shock when Jiren arrived at his house in his Uniform? It was funny.
Oh that's the problem. Jiren needs a bit baggier tux, and from the most durable fabric possible.
Oh he's so intimidating, that he once scared Beerus of all people when he gave Goku the darkest glare for suggesting another tournament. Beerus commented how Jiren was scarier than anything else. Goku decided it was a good challenge. It took him only ten Senzu beans to heal actually....
Also, in my head canon, Jiren's eyes glow deep crimson when he's livid. Usually, his black eyes have a deep shade of blue ring around his pupils.

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Teira-Nova In reply to t-aj [2020-09-06 02:01:40 +0000 UTC]

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t-aj In reply to Teira-Nova [2020-09-06 02:33:04 +0000 UTC]

A disaster that made Jiren grin for the very first time ever, and in front of his teammates! 21 kinda like the chaos that happened, especially when Jiren didn't care about her eating manners.
Not only that, but they both got drunk. The fancier restaurant got raided late at night, only the sweets though.
Well, his first suit tore apart from his growth spurt. And since Toppo wasn't there, he couldn't buy another one. As for casual, well, his are his own custom made ones.
Oh I see, in my story, Jiren needed to replace his post ToP, as the spandex tore apart from his own Ki when he got completely livid.
Well, it was terrifying, like showing his vast still untapped strength. This time, Marcarita made him take a good night sleep and eat and drink well enough.
Goku got beaten up by Bulma, Beerus and Jiren. Also, after that, Toppo challenged him to a wrestling match. Toppo won easily, his bear hug was enough, and Jiren was thinking of joining Toppo's idea of a wrestling match.
Oh in my story, 21 would notice, and comment that he have some good eyes. Jiren just turned 180 degree, just to hide his blushing face. Marcarita is an amazing secret keeper.
Oh the glowing eyes is a warning that things got real. In my story, he gave a red hot glare to Vegetto before he unleashed a curb stomping beatdown and a magnatar wave explosion at him.

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Teira-Nova In reply to t-aj [2020-09-06 14:24:18 +0000 UTC]

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t-aj In reply to Teira-Nova [2020-09-06 14:59:06 +0000 UTC]

Bwahahahaha! 21 raiding an entire city worth of sweet is hilarious tbh. Hope Jiren talked her out of her guilt. Toppo would definitely bring a doctor or something for her stomach ache. She's a nice girl, so of course Jiren would help. Oh I see, in my story, she fight hunger the traditional way : a few tons of sweet! Jiren just doesn't care, he even though that it explained why she's so sweet. I won't be surprised if he did.
The only wrestling match he lost, was against Jiren, who's actually a wrestling fan. He even participated and won a wrestling tournament just to donate the prize money for orphans and the less fortunate. But yeah, Toppo's bear hug is able to crush bones within a second. Jiren's sleeper however... Yeah.
In my story, Vegetto earned Jiren's wrath when he eliminated Toppo, enough for Jiren to attack him in a brutal way and threw him like a ragdoll before the last Tak expired.

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Teira-Nova In reply to t-aj [2020-09-07 09:01:53 +0000 UTC]

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t-aj In reply to Teira-Nova [2020-09-07 13:15:20 +0000 UTC]

I knew it! They're the best heroic couple! 21 is such a sweet girl, Jiren wouldn't mind sharing everything with her. Of course Buu needs tons of sweet, fortunately, Mr. Satan is there. Oh I see. That's a neat idea. Yeah well, Jiren get his own food, and he doesn't have to pay for bills (electricity and water on planet fitness are for free!) So yeah, he would always help those who are in need, and less fortunate as they remind him a bit of himself. It happened to Kefla and Vegetto respectively. Kefla defused on the third hit, and Vegetto got a beating that generated enough shockwave to crack the very air! The potara shattered like half of Goku's and Vegeta's bones under the terrifying impact of a completely livid Jiren. He's scary when he needs to be. Also, he threw them away in frustration before he shattered the entire ring with one punch. One punch!

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Teira-Nova In reply to t-aj [2020-09-08 14:18:48 +0000 UTC]

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t-aj In reply to Teira-Nova [2020-09-08 15:01:10 +0000 UTC]

Oh I see... That's really good to know. In my story, she's a big eater, not always, but when she wants to eat, she does eat a lot more than anyone else. Poor Bulma who paid once for the astronomical bill...
Oh I see now. It's an amazing idea. Although in my story he kinda moved out to Netfiss, he still visit when he have a few days off. He actually enjoy sleeping at his home planet much more, where he compared sleeping a week there to sleeping five years elsewhere.
Yeah well, a primal Gray is the most dangerous being according to the Daishinkan himself! However, Jiren didn't get disqualified from the tournament since he didn't kill anyone. Actually, he apologized from Goku and Vegeta about losing control, and fortunately, Beerus had the foresight to bring some Senzu beans just in case...

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Teira-Nova In reply to t-aj [2020-09-09 12:45:52 +0000 UTC]

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t-aj In reply to Teira-Nova [2020-09-09 13:46:24 +0000 UTC]

No wonder. Jiren in my story prefer to stay in his home planet, or anywhere unpopulated. The apartment was in a complex where there's only a few people living there. Some of them are elderly, the others are doctors who work there. Of course physically speaking, Jiren does have an unrivaled strength.
That's great to know. I mean, Jiren inviting her to his home planet would be a heartwarming moment. Oh I see, 21 is really amazing tbh. Why am I not surprised that Jiren would leave most of the spaceship home empty? Jiren and Toppo themselves would tell them that in their Universe, death is NOT cheap, and that a life ending injury is the end of the fight. Jiren would even comment that he knows most if not all of the planets in his Universe, and ask Marcarita to find anything like a Senzu plant. She would confirm that there's no counterpart in their own.
In U7 death is so cheap, that made me wonder once, why should I be sad that any of them would die, while they went to have a coffee with their relatives in the other world and would get back anyway?
No seriously, Jiren would be like, "You're the luckiest Universe!" With Beerus agreeing.

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Teira-Nova In reply to t-aj [2020-09-10 11:31:42 +0000 UTC]

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t-aj In reply to Teira-Nova [2020-09-10 12:04:47 +0000 UTC]

I think that I did Toppo's Kawaii eyes and expression right now, #Kawaii_leader .
Well, time is irrelevant, as long as you're okay, and you're safe, we don't mind to wait. After all, One Piece wasn't published in a single year.
Oh I see. It's definitely gonna be the coolest thing I would think of, if not cooler.
U11 would be the only Universe to have a second chance, and that thanks to Android 17... Zen Buu was trapped, but once 17 wished to restore the Universes... And let's say that he took a liking to Jiren.
U11 are tough, and I have no doubts that with Jiren joining the team officially, they're going to be even tougher. Actually, I think that they will all improve tremendously.
Well, it's fortunate that his healing factor became fast, like really fast and efficient. Yeah I figured as much. Oh I know. In my story, she's able to use her magic, but not indefinitely, kinda like her Ki, but when it comes up to Ki level, hers is high, like 3rd Pride Trooper high.
Oh he would definitely be like, "I really need a drink right now!" Kind of mood so he can understand how cheap death is in U7, he even asked him how many relatives did he visit in the afterlife while slightly tipsy (tipsy Jiren is sarcastic! In my story anyway.) But yeah, in the 2nd ToP he participated just to wish the other Universes would be restored, but when he learned that there's no erasure, he didn't know what to wish for. Money? Nah, don't need it. His Sensei and friends and family? Probably won't be happy about it. Better mortal level in a Universe that had a level above 10? Immortality wasn't his thing. He didn't even know what he would wish for, until Zen Buu himself told him to wish for (spoiler)...

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Teira-Nova In reply to t-aj [2020-09-12 01:02:38 +0000 UTC]

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t-aj In reply to Teira-Nova [2020-09-12 01:38:53 +0000 UTC]

Oh they would definitely. In my story, before the 2nd ToP begins, Toppo and Jiren straight nodded and even shook hands with 17, also promising him that none of them would attack him. U11 took a different approach, and 17 was among to not touch list. She's strong and growing to be stronger, but she's more of a defensive fighter, like a certain Gray. Hehe, I see. In my story, she'll run into a few situations with Jiren, and the Gray will end up helping her with his.... Unusual sharp senses sometimes. Silent invisible enemies are not an issue to a Primal mode Jiren.
Of course he'd refuse, Jiren never kills, it's a rule. Immortality isn't something he'd accept. His pride won't take it that he would have to sacrifice what makes him, himself.
Hehe, of course Jiren would have some offsprings, in my story, he have a few actually. A bit more than he and 21 expected, but it was the best thing that ever happened to them ever since they got their closure. Oh he would. Jiren is an amazing fighter, who lacks something important. In my story, he's barely an adult, as his home planet year is actually two years and seven weeks. So yeah, he was still a kid by fifteen when he lost his friends and master (7 years home planet) and a toddler when he lost his parents and clan (2,3 years old)....
How long is a year in planet Cal'or? And his Sensei's name, what's his name please if you don't mind?

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Teira-Nova In reply to t-aj [2020-09-12 23:43:51 +0000 UTC]

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t-aj In reply to Teira-Nova [2020-09-13 00:22:57 +0000 UTC]

Well, none of them are willing to attack him since he's the reason why they had a second chance at the first place. Well, in my story, Primal mode boost his senses, reflexes, power and speed to a terrifyingly new level, with him fighting on instinct, which means that even if the enemies don't use Ki, he'd still be able to sense them with his sharper than usual sense of smell, hearing, sight and vibration feeling.
Oh he can use God Ki in my story, and he learned that in the very instant they explained it to him. He'll be more than fine. Even the troublesome dimensional traps won't work on him as he learned how to shatter dimensions somehow. In my story, Jiren will need to improve both in power and intellect if he wants to (redacted).
Well, in my story, the one fearsome opponent who's 21's father, decided to leave one final gift for her in case she settled down. The results were hilarious as Jiren mistaken their first baby for a parasitic organism or 21 going full Majin Buu on some poor soul. Only when he gave it a good smell did he remember that the Android had the very same smell to the new Ki, which made him remember something he forgot about...
That Evil-doer would lose easily against a fully Primal Jiren who tracked it down, beaten it toward the grave before he watched Toppo and Belmod Hakai it, yet he felt not an iota of satisfaction....
Oh I see. In my story, it just spins slower than Earth, and it's closest super planet is called Aqua, somewhere Jiren dove into a lot of times as a teen....
Master Tahu is a very awesome mccool name tbh, I just wondered about the origine? Gicchin was actually his alias in my story, Jiren himself told Belmod and Toppo, who knew him. Belmod for being his boss and Toppo for being his underling until the brave warrior retired from the Pride Troopers... Good Lord, I think that I will write a whole arc about Jiren.
The arc is about how Jiren decided to quit the Pride Troopers momentarily until he find and destroy his nemesis. Also, the Gray and Gicchin-sensei returning would be the best fuel for the Gray to go and seek, capture, and lead the destruction of the demonic fiend that took everything from him...

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Teira-Nova In reply to t-aj [2020-09-13 11:54:36 +0000 UTC]

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t-aj In reply to Teira-Nova [2020-09-13 12:36:05 +0000 UTC]

Well, Jiren can see in space and in darkness, it should be a semi-rule, also yeah, he does have a good hearing, second only to Dyspo, so yeah, it's extremely hard to get the drop in him. It's unfortunate, but I think that he would learn about it, eventually... Oh it would be funny indeed, as the young couple would kinda panic at first, as 21 never ate anyone, and Jiren was practically not thinking straight, as he was troubled by the fact that his life partner would be in a grave danger (very protective) only then for the doctor to congratulate them both, Toppo's Kawaii eyes returned with a vengeance it seems....
A couple of moons... Wait a second, were these couple of moons aligned in a weird way once in your comic that 21 transformed into her human form?
In my story, the entire solar system is inhabited, Belmod fought Jiren for the right to destroy it, and the Gray refused, as he felt that it was a momento for everyone he knew in his youth...
In my story, Jiren's favorite pastime when he doesn't have a mission is flying in space. It was something that he always did.
Oh I see. I had my doubts, but thanks for confirming it. I still struggle with naming my OCs, unfortunately. Oh I see. It's not really surprising. In my story, Master Tahu was in the Pride Troopers alongside with Toppo, in their youth at least. Well, Belmod is nicknamed the old clown by Jiren, who does have a bit of a violitric relationship with his boss. Belmod isn't his friend in mine, more of an acquaintance. Toppo on the other hand knew him as they were old partners. I see that in your story, you made Gicchin one of the coolest person, for founding a team of Superhero. That's something extremely cool imho.

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Teira-Nova In reply to t-aj [2020-09-16 08:11:50 +0000 UTC]

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t-aj In reply to Teira-Nova [2020-09-16 08:38:48 +0000 UTC]

Oh that's something I look into, as weird as his Kawaii eyes are, it's the funniest expression I ever seen Toppo having, poor Jiren, God give him strength to endure all the escapades that happened with the team. I think that Jiren would cry some manly tears of happiness as he realized that he became a dad, that his parents wish is granted, that everything that he suffered with would end soon...
Oh that comic made me laugh for a legit half an hour 😂🤣😂. It was so funny 😂 seeing Jiren's blush and attempting to forget about it, and how everything he encountered reminded him of the object of his flustered state. Toppo's widened eyes and straight moustache made me laugh out loud.
Him surviving in space is something of an asset. I won't be surprised that he would be carrying 21 in his arms while flying in the big unknown, it's something that canon Jiren would definitely do.
I look forward to that.
Well, Belmod and Jiren kinda ended up somewhat in the friendly category of the aquaintance spectrum, as they did spar with each other. Jiren had enough once and told him it's not funny to hit old clowns. Belmod asked him if he did have any problems with clowns, Jiren replied by no, but he hates seeing them hurt.
Oh I see, so that's why Jiren is angry at Belmod... In my story, they fought a while before he joined the Pride Troopers, and Jiren won. The second time Jiren flat out curb stomped the poor clown. Also, Ultra Instinct and Primal Jiren respectively are two of the most terrifying things for the other Universes, who none of them are ready for that...
In my, they ended up as friends in the weirdest of ways, Belmod kinda told Jiren that he will allow him to go to the afterlife for an entire day as a reward for winning in the second ToP and for almost beating Beerus, that earned a lot of points in Jiren's book. But he warned Belmod not to mess with his desciple or Toppo will be the Hakaishin soon, like much sooner than expected...
Master Tahu was kinda friends with Toppo in his youth. One conversation between Jiren, Toppo and Dyspo in a bar before the second ToP, and the two will have the thickest of relationship with each other. Also, Toppo flat out told Jiren that Tahu (Gicchin) was the previous leader of the Pride Troopers before he retired.

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Teira-Nova In reply to t-aj [2020-09-17 11:56:09 +0000 UTC]

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t-aj In reply to Teira-Nova [2020-09-17 12:38:37 +0000 UTC]

Who wouldn't? Being a father is the best thing that can happen to any man, oh no doubts at all. Also, he visited his parents, and she told him to give her six grandchildren at least.. Oh it's going to be hilarious if only I can describe the faces of Jiren and 21 once they heard it...
Bwahahahaha, definitely. The instant transmission malfunction is a legendary comic strip that made me laugh for a few minutes as I saw Jiren the Gray blush.
Oh he find their jokes funny actually. But he hates seeing them getting hurt. That's the only problem he have with clowns. I see, Belmod even was one of the most helpful people to Jiren after his depression about the loss of his teammates in the 2nd ToP happened. Jiren became too protective and Belmod straight told him not to be like that, actually, Belmod and Jiren did drink together a few times...
In mine they were teammates in the Pride Troopers, and Toppo never told anyone. Jiren and Toppo missed the good man, and since Jiren took most of his tactics from Tahu-sensei, yeah.
Oh I see, it makes a lot of sense. In my story, Toppo told Jiren that they had to suppress waves after waves of criminals back then. Also, Jiren helped them with most crisis.
In mine, Belmod knew of both, even remarked that Gicchin is like his ancestor, a lot. However, in the end, Belmod was drinking kegs of booze to try and escape until Marcarita comforted him. Then he fought a still young Jiren, and lost. The second time he fought Jiren, the Gray was about... 15 y.o. or so? But he still curb stomped Belmod. Third time was on their training to master U.I. Jiren learned it instantaneously after he got some sense of closure. Goku even told his Universe that they don't have a chance against Jiren once he glanced at the Gray.
Oh and I think that Jiren and Goku developing a rivalry/friendship would be a funny thing. Especially after U7 helping U6 and U11 in their rugby match...

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Teira-Nova In reply to t-aj [2020-09-19 22:59:10 +0000 UTC]

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t-aj In reply to Teira-Nova [2020-09-19 23:44:09 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, I'm sure he would... I know, he lost everything that matters in his youth... I know from experience that he doesn't want them to feel that pain.. I know that maybe better than it looks.. Oh yeah, finally some closure.. Of course she wants that, every grandma wants that... Oh that's the best news I heard this entire week, including that my closest person is okay, and that I can get what's mine!
Oh that's so funny 🤣. Drunk Jiren is hilarious 😆 tbh. But seriously, I think that a semi-tipsy Jiren in a wrestling match with the Pride Troopers would be a very funny scene that Belmod would definitely make a hilarious comment....
Serious about this, Belmod is the second best Hakaishin, yet he have a death wish! I mean, the only Hakaishin I'm sure is much stronger than Belmod, is full power Beerus. And oh boy, his fight with Jiren is legendary. Neither gained any advantage over the other... It was a 5 minutes match, which ended in a draw... But Jiren managed something impossible : Survive against the strongest being in the Multiverse twice!
If he's the same age in my story he's be.... Wow. Just wow, about 12 years and eight months in human age! Fortunately he's a young adult in your story, in mine he's still kinda a teen when he joined, then over the years grow up to be in his young adult. Only after the second ToP he would be considered an adult by his home planet, which is 21 years, and in that planet, it takes 45 years...
I'm not surprised, Jiren is strong enough to tank and surpass UI in the manga, if Goku and Golden Frieza didn't team up, he would be victorious, although, in the anime, his limit breaking mode was, like Toppo's Hakaishin mode, the best two things I'd consider canon.
Not quite. In my story, post ToP, U11 became too peaceful. Then the first wave of trouble made Jiren and Toppo leave 21 at Toppo's house and go save their comrades. Jiren even took charge of the whole thing as Toppo broke a line in the ranks of their enemies.
Oh I'm fired up! Thank you for re-inspiring me. I have to fix my PC and soon it seems... Take care my friend.

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Teira-Nova In reply to t-aj [2020-09-20 13:06:22 +0000 UTC]

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t-aj In reply to Teira-Nova [2020-09-20 14:10:06 +0000 UTC]

21 is a tragic person, losing her son, Gebo, marrying someone as toxic as Gero, who could've lived without being obsessed with revenge, which cost him his life, and the whole Fighter Z thing... Buu revived her because he saw that Jiren is one selfless guy, as he told him to get off his Universe, then he received all those who were killed unjustly, which made Buu salute the Gray in respect, and he decided to give 21 a better chance in a Universe she'd fit in perfectly since U11 is the best Universe when it comes up to the good side of people, the Good meter reading says it's a 9,5 out of ten
Hehe, Belmod once lost a drinking contest... Against Beerus of all Hakaishin. Of course Belmod is "stronger" than Beerus, and it turns out that he's actually, strong, like he can beat Whis strong. Also, Whis himself said that Belmod is stronger than Beerus, and Beerus never needed to go up to stage two.
Oh I see, our favorite Gray is amazing, at that age, Goku lost to Cell, but seriously, if at that age, Jiren is stronger than Belmod, even if barely, and had to push himself to the utter limits, then his strength is unfathomable right now. Jiren is a prodigy when it comes up to fighting, like Marcarita became afraid of Jiren succumbing to the rage of his Primal mode, which pushes the Gray above his limit, and Jiren can use Kaioken by 1k! And he can use God Ki, and even Ultra Instinct! In my story, he learned all of that in a month, a single month was enough for the Gray to improve tremendously. Also, he have a small Zenkai Boost, which reinforce his body everytime he got injured, but don't increase his power level to absurd levels. According to Marcarita, Jiren's body can easily handle the strain of Ultra Instinct state, as it's sturdy, like broke the standard of sturdiness. Jiren might seem OP in my story, but it's more of a reality ensue, as there would not be any plot armor to anyone, unfortunately...
Thanks a lot my friend. Please take care?

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Teira-Nova In reply to t-aj [2020-09-22 01:07:36 +0000 UTC]

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t-aj In reply to Teira-Nova [2020-09-22 01:42:28 +0000 UTC]

Well, tbh, I watched 21's story, well, 2/3 of it, and she's amazingly sweet and nice, also, she'd fit perfectly in U11 with all their advanced civilizations, and their amazing technology level, which kinda roped Jiren into it? (His introduction, where he used the shrinking ray and the containment capsule) Also, the Pride Troopers are kinda like a more heroic version of the Z fighters. Imagine Toppo, Dyspo, Kahseral, much less Jiren hearing about Frieza, would they leave him run amok? No, they would not. Would they stop the Saiyajin from exterminating the Tufels? Yes they definitely would. The short story is that, they would be the iron wall that protects the innocent 96% of the times. Also, in my story, Jiren straight had a plan that he cooked out with 21, as she was definitely the smartest person there... Easily the best person to make any plan work, and she's barely behind Dyspo in term of power level (Speed that are still unmatched!) But when it comes up to punching machines, well, she gave it a knock, which red at 950. Toppo flickered it, and it red 800, Jiren obligated it with a small poke!
She's definitely gonna be happier in U11, technologie, better Books, tech, and even subjects to talk about, although the Earth's recepies are the one thing she said that are kinda better, Until Jiren surprised her in her birthday by taking her in a planet where food is amazingly similar to Earth...
Belmod is stronger than regular Beerus, as Beerus never ever showed his true fighter form, as he never needed it. Whis didn't even know that his partner had such power hidden within, and yes, Beerus is the best fighter among all of the Hakaishin... And the oldest in his position... Legend says that he had to Hakai his own planet, which was an amazing story by Dragon Fist... It made me feel really sorry for Beerus who lost everything but Champa, his twin brother, and Whis, his close friend and partner...
Ah, the Gray's legendary limits breaking, that concept is amazing honestly, also, MUI Goku is no joke, he manhandled Moro, and yet, a full power Jiren would've made Moro look like a kid, in the manga, Jiren withstood MUI on his own power, not replying for Goku's body to break like Toei did (One better thing apart the backstory, that limit breaking moment...) So yeah, Jiren trained by Marcarita? Good luck the Multiverse, you're gonna need it for the strongest mortal had just became invincible!
In mine, Toppo increased his control over his Hakaishin form, so much that Beerus stand up in respect for the almost-Hakaishin. Vegetto found out that his attacks don't work on him. His solution made a bit angry Jiren snap!
I don't know what to say.. these moments are the hardest since... It's the worst that can happen to any character.... I can't name OCs unfortunately, as most of the time, they end up dying.... Unfortunately... Also, Jiren's backstory will be written fully after the 2nd ToP in the form of a special chapter... Where it explains the Gray's life story, how he trained, how he lost everything, how he just became obsessed with revenge, as he still remember the scent of that demon that took everything from him... And he decided to protect his teammates (21 is the newest) by getting away, just so he can finally deliver the wrath of Belmod on that Evil-doer.... That's a chapter I'd definitely love to write...
One last thing, you're a legend, so of course it's going to be amazing at least. Please take care, and looking forward to anything you publish. See you soon I hope?

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Teira-Nova In reply to t-aj [2020-09-22 21:40:08 +0000 UTC]

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t-aj In reply to Teira-Nova [2020-09-22 22:47:40 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, I knew it. Jiren and Toppo are best friends it seems... I agree about 21 being too pure, as she's just so kind, sweet, selfless... No wonder that Toppo, who knew them both, became a shipper on deck. That explains a lot, as the Evil-doer is the one thing that scared Jiren in my story, but not because he was afraid for his own safety, but his teammates and 21... Oh if he would know... I can see him screaming at the top of his lungs at Shin for his incompetence, and maybe scolding Beerus for his laziness unless we consider that he had a good reason for said laziness?
Of course he wouldn't mind, Jiren is the best heroic protagonist in my own story for a reason. Oh in my story, he told his team when he had a small vacation that he'd be busy, as he had some good week of sleep in his home planet, which let him stay awake and full throttle for a few months, to try and find out said planets, until Marcarita helped him, as Belmod didn't want the Gray to waste his time... Hehe, well, of course he's the sweetest guy in private, he even vowed once that he'll stop the threat of Zen Buu with his own life if he had to, and fortunately, it led to him meeting the best girlfriend ever....
Maybe they're both originated from the nexus point? Where twin Universe are connected? They're older than two hundred million years, but Buu of all people is as old as the Universes, which made me wonder... How could anyone beat that?
Yeah well, the Gray are from an old, erased Universe, likely Universe 13 and 18? I don't know...
In my story, Belmod would not do it, as he feared the wrath of one strong Gray XD , But really, it's a great idea in character of the Hakaishin, who should hope that one superhero won't caught up on that, or else he's going to get drunk and challenge his boss 😹! Also, yeah, 21 is one person who's more heroic than she looks, also, after the 2nd ToP, she jumped ship to another Universe, which made Buu laugh at the whole thing...
Well, we still have time hopefully? I mean, your stories are always amazing tbh, as it is something that we all feel that it's needed... In mine, after the ToP, the second one at least, Jiren would have to confront his own past, he looked tired, hopeless, and especially, fearful as his teammates got eliminated one by one, which made him realize that he needed to do something....
It was so amazingly cute.... Kawaii eyes and smile...
Please take care?

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t-aj [2020-08-21 16:34:06 +0000 UTC]

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cameronjr8 [2020-05-01 02:31:41 +0000 UTC]

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TheHellseeker [2020-04-20 08:19:29 +0000 UTC]

A part of me really really REALLY wants to see a gender role reversal of this.

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Teira-Nova In reply to TheHellseeker [2020-04-21 04:55:20 +0000 UTC]

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TheHellseeker In reply to Teira-Nova [2020-04-21 19:58:04 +0000 UTC]

We need more of that, honestly.

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ScorpionNinjaGirl [2019-12-07 02:21:53 +0000 UTC]

So cute!! 

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Teira-Nova In reply to ScorpionNinjaGirl [2019-12-08 01:36:12 +0000 UTC]

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sonicfanyeni [2019-12-04 03:11:17 +0000 UTC]

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Teira-Nova In reply to sonicfanyeni [2019-12-08 01:36:38 +0000 UTC]

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sonicfanyeni In reply to Teira-Nova [2019-12-09 02:17:22 +0000 UTC]

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OneGuy1301 [2019-12-04 03:09:15 +0000 UTC]

You look at that.
Our tin man had a heart all along

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KaijuMaster107 [2019-12-04 01:19:03 +0000 UTC]

Attaboy Jiren hold your delicate Pudding in your arms!

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Teira-Nova In reply to KaijuMaster107 [2019-12-08 01:37:07 +0000 UTC]

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KaijuMaster107 In reply to Teira-Nova [2019-12-08 02:02:36 +0000 UTC]

Now draw them banging! JK! XD!

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