Comments: 9
nycterent [2008-10-15 15:30:26 +0000 UTC]
I think this could do with more shading to give it a more three-d feel. The curves of the DNA only shadow at the very curves which implied they have sudden twists to them rather than continuous ones. There is also a bit of a contrast between the 2-d images and the 3-d ones and I'm not liking it. In general, I think this would be improved with unified lighting and with more focus on the coloring of the objects.
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ElaryWakefield [2008-09-03 11:54:33 +0000 UTC]
this is beautiful work. and i loooove the concept ^^ great job, i'll be posting this one!
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peggymintun [2008-08-30 13:32:30 +0000 UTC]
I love biology, microbiology, physics and all that is science, so had to take a closer look. One of my friends got me started on a series of coloring books. They are a great source of ideas. [link] Anyway, great job. And I like the crystals.
As far as an advanced critique, I would try to add more depth into the composition. Perhaps add more cells in on the right in varying sizes. They sort of dominate the double-helix, which should be the focal point of the composition.
But, I think this is good for the individual pieces, which you have done a great job on. I am inspired to try something inspired by science now.
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Tellora In reply to peggymintun [2008-08-30 15:09:42 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for the fav, watch and especially for taking the time to critique! I have given away this painting, but I will definitely think about your advice in future compositions.
And I look forward to see what you would do with the theme "science"!
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peggymintun In reply to Tellora [2008-08-31 01:08:06 +0000 UTC]
You are welcome. Thanks!
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HoshiRyu [2008-08-26 12:58:43 +0000 UTC]
I saw your submission on the main page, and as a chem nerd, I had to click. I think it looks great. The composition really flows, and all the parts are recognizable (if you know what they are!) The crystals look good too. Props on the double helix - those are hard to do! +Fav!
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Tellora In reply to HoshiRyu [2008-08-26 13:11:41 +0000 UTC]
Fellow chem nerd! Yay!
Wow, fav! Thanks a lot! I actually started the whole thing by sketching a double helix, and were surprised how good it looked. Then I built the whole composition around it.
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