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Temiree In reply to WolfAli [2010-03-29 08:50:30 +0000 UTC]
His right, or viewer's right?
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raletheotter [2010-03-29 05:27:32 +0000 UTC]
I really love this!
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parallellogic [2010-03-29 04:38:26 +0000 UTC]
The proportions look really good on this, definitely feels more realistic over some of your previous work. The expression does show a lot of contempt, if you wanted to go more cartoony, you could probably go a tad higher and add a few more wrinkles around the dimples.
I'm not entirely sure what you're shooting for with these sketches, if you're aiming for practicing proportions, I think you've really been nailing those down recently - I would suggest, if you want to break out into another practice area, to look into some really dynamic poses, like ones where the limbs are doing in completely opposite directions [link]. Just looking through your recent works, your characters always appear to be portrayed as having their feet on the ground. You always seem to be going for something different in your works, and I thought perhaps more action/dynamic motion might be a new alternative...
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Temiree In reply to parallellogic [2010-03-29 08:49:59 +0000 UTC]
What I feel detracts from them is that they come out stiff and I feel there's no motion to them, at least as much as there should be. That's the main thing.
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Temiree In reply to parallellogic [2010-03-29 09:31:40 +0000 UTC]
Hm, that could work yeah. I notice my better sketches seem to follow a few principles mentioned. Thanks for the links!
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