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Published: 2003-07-14 22:21:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 2628; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 747
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That day, I felt something in my chest...It was hurting me from the inside... burning
I know what it was... my heart stopped....
it was crying for help...
It wanted to breathe...
It wanted to believe...
But it just gave up...
It was like a disease that doesn't kill but you can't live with it...
It was a word... just a word coming out from your lips...
I wasn't shining in your eyes... not anymore...
You left... you walked away from me vanishing into the mist...
My eyes hurts and my mouth is dry, I had to swallow my tears day after day...
I can't sleep because I know that you'll be there, in my dreams and even in my dreams you will not be in my arms...
Never again...
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I'm felling very weird this days and it's very hard to explain... damn... but well things happens for a reason... right??
This is meant to be emotional...
And this work goes for my carnalito *n05feratu and his site Hidden Fears
Comments and critics are always welcome.
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Comments: 49
oh by the way I LOVE what you wrote. i know how that feels
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hey this looks awesome, i used this pic from ur stock site hope ya dont mind "i used and abused it" hehe ya said to leave a note here not on ur old name so....here ya go.... [link]
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saw the original on your stock account first. this came out real nice.
the words are real, touching:
"I wasn't shining in your eyes... not anymore..."
nice expression.
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Your words are as beautiful as your images. Very deep stuff!!
Geoff
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no juegues conb pistolas por que un dia pum! y ay no te va a dar tiempo de decir, hijole si estaba cargada. plop!
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no te creo muchachito
ya mejor di que es de cerdad y que ya no vas a jugar con eso si
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Esa avienta chocolate, tenia una que echaba vainilla pero se la comio el perro
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jajaja carnal, eres el unico que lo viste... nadie mas lo entendio, me alegra que hayas sido tu
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oh shit _
this is fiiiirme_
sabes que loko_
u have some talent_
pero no talent como otros lames_
pero talent como " look @ this beyatch "
heheheeee
dime si esta bien si uso esto para un submission , si no its oquei,
eske to si connecta con migo un chingo_ tienes el OG sin layers.?
adonde vives temoc.?
tengo una idea para un cd cover pero es duro esplicar especialmente si no me conoses_ pero como que tu sabes la honda...... Quiero tomar foto de todos los homies en negro sobre una tumba_ ( are u familiar with the "in loving memory" sweater? )
todos usando esas sweters__ pero para organizar algo asi no es facil porque eso solo pasaba cuando uno de nosotro se moria_ y ahora Ya noy ay mas que 3 de nosotros_ pero se que puedo tomar varias fotos de nosotros tres y hacer otros como fantasmas_ o algo asi Y tambien se debe de hacer nuevas sweater porque a respecto para mis dead homies no voy a usar sus nombres__
sabes..?
pienso que sabes____
LAtez
clever oNe
only oNe
T_r_i_p_p_ _o_u_T ---><---- [link]
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Usa esa imagen si quieres homie, no hay bronca, si es para ti no hay bronca 
Soy puro chilango, en el mero centro del DF, aqui para lo que se te ofresca
Y si quieres ayuda con ese cd cover nomas me echas un grito y orale !
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simon limon _
aver si la uso pero de puro respeto, mejor I will admire from mi computer _
Yo andaba en el df por unos dias con mi primo cuando fui para mexica___ como andan los jales de graphico _ andan various o que honda con consigir jale por alla _ interesado ....?
al rato temoc__
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La neta esta caΓ±on encontrar chamba ahorita de eso de grafico... pero de que hay hay nomas hay que ser un cabron en eso.
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wAw !!.... ... la verdad que me shokeo, te re saRpaste jodido .. muy pero muy bueno, te admiro loko.
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es demasiada buena esta manipulacion. tiene toda una sobre lectura muy grosa, y fuerte, me gusta mucho!!!!!
aLiZ
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simple yet penetrating, a subtle rush of impounded feelings.
i like it and the picture accompanied. the picture adds that grasping touch. -.-
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Mmmmmmm........
no entiendo por que no te habia comentado esta???.. seria cuando me fui de vagaciones?.. no lo se carnal, disculpa.
lo unico que se, es que esta muy bien hecha.... y si! siempre hay momentos en los cuales nos sentimos como para darnos un tiro.
Muy bien hermano... muy bien hecho en esta.
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Wow, la manipulacion es excelente.
los colores q usaste, los brushes, todo... dan una impresion muy fuerte de angustia, dolor, tristeza... Demasiado realista y expresiva.
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Thats so cool bro, reminds me of that execution pic i did! great job man :] love it!
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uy, como me costo llegar hasta aca a dejarte un comment.
Me encanta!!!! esta muy bueno, la descripcion excelente y las texturas muy muy bueno como siempre Temoc
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the words are so beautiful and romantic i can't stop reading it over and over again, powerfully expressed through the image too good work
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Excellent. It seems like I can only get inspired enough to write sometimes when I'm pissed or depressed. Way to go.
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Wow..........
What can I say?
It's so imotional.
I'm a little teary eyed.
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nice manip!! holy shath those are great colors + textures... feeling the concept too, good job
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la produccion esta FANTASTICA !!!!!!!....emociones bien fuertes...'de-poca-madre' !!!!
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scenes like this always bring my heart up to a nervous rhythem. the past experiences i've had with people with guns to their head tell me to look away. this is a great emotional piece. i love it.
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...strong work... Looks also like a heavy metal cd cover... I can hear electric guitar and bass playing from here...
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Como te dije carnal.. estΓ© es uno de tus mejores trabajos.. tiene fuerza.. mensaje.. y tecnica.. me gusta...
AdemΓ‘s muchas gracias por aportar a mi website..
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WOW!!! Very deep description, and the photo is amazing.
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This is amazing man... especially when paired with the words. I need to swallow my tears right now. You've made me sad...
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dont kill yourself.
but you know, if you do, put it on a webcam.
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Fucking cool shit dood, nice concept, really nicely done too ^_^
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wow, man...
The post-production is really good, but the photo behind it... damn. Something of amazing.
Great job, bro. of course.
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This is emotional, my friend. Very much so. It made me to think about one friend of mine. She had a mental breakdown a couple of days ago and I was at her place when it happened. At one point I was sure that she's going to jump out of the window...
Anyway, this is very good work again. I hope you're feeling ok now.
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Great work temoc bro
And great words to go with the piece.
Very nice colors, and I love the emotions
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Who the hell is holding the gun??? You better tell him/her or you to put it down. Si no quieren que yo les haga algo. jejeje Ahora si en serio, es muy emotivo. Esta chida la descripcion. Se puede sentir tu hambre y tu tristeza. Me late el color medio verde. Like if it's in decay. Once again...
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Wow muy emotivo en especial la descripcion
te quedo muy bien Temoc
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this looks really great, you really look touch on it, i like it a lot, also the description is touching, nice work
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Awesome awesome awesome sweetie!! The words are so touching.
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