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TempestasRex β€” Dirge
Published: 2007-06-02 01:37:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 110; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Description Dirge

I once was happy and so free,
But I was brought down by thee,
You blindsided me and chained my wing,
You then silenced the joyous song I sing,
I struggle and thrash erratically,
But you chained me so statically,
Joy and light I try to find,
But darkness and sorrow cloud my once free mind,
A song of death and fear fills my head,
A song of cries from those long dead,
I now sing a song to pray on fears,
A dirge ofΒ Β woe to all with ears…
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Comments: 23

DarlingAngel0565 [2007-09-16 17:50:44 +0000 UTC]

This one is sad and beautiful.
Nice work

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TempestasRex In reply to DarlingAngel0565 [2007-09-16 23:50:14 +0000 UTC]

*bow* Thank you, dear

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DarlingAngel0565 In reply to TempestasRex [2007-09-17 00:00:38 +0000 UTC]

You are quite welcome ^^
How are you doing?

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TempestasRex In reply to DarlingAngel0565 [2007-09-17 00:18:59 +0000 UTC]

And how are you?

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DarlingAngel0565 In reply to TempestasRex [2007-09-17 00:31:16 +0000 UTC]

Pretty good, working on my journal as we speak, you must stay on long enough to see, i am featuring you and our poem

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TempestasRex In reply to DarlingAngel0565 [2007-09-17 00:34:34 +0000 UTC]

YEAY!

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DarlingAngel0565 In reply to TempestasRex [2007-09-17 00:45:03 +0000 UTC]

You know it!!!!

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TempestasRex In reply to DarlingAngel0565 [2007-09-17 00:18:35 +0000 UTC]

Fairly well (I had 5 tacos

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DarlingAngel0565 In reply to TempestasRex [2007-09-17 00:30:41 +0000 UTC]

Wow ,
It would be lucky to see me eat 2..^^

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TempestasRex In reply to DarlingAngel0565 [2007-09-17 00:33:36 +0000 UTC]

Yeah... I am about to throw up but it was gooooood!

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DarlingAngel0565 In reply to TempestasRex [2007-09-17 00:44:49 +0000 UTC]

LOL, not at you, but remembering the same thing happening to me once...

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TempestasRex In reply to DarlingAngel0565 [2007-09-17 00:47:52 +0000 UTC]

Yes, it is bad when that happens

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DarlingAngel0565 In reply to TempestasRex [2007-09-17 01:06:13 +0000 UTC]

It sure is

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EMOisLOOOVE [2007-06-02 05:47:32 +0000 UTC]

She always comment before me. *cries* uhm. forgetting about my pity, I like this one too. A lot. Like always, can you wirte something I do not like? Probably not. XDD Erm, anyways, my favorite part is, "Joy and light I try to find,
But darkness and sorrow cloud my once free mind" it totally related to my everyday life. It just makes sense to me. Like...no matter how hard I try to fake a smile...or to pretend to be happy, it just makes me feel worse, especially when people buy it. I'm NOT HAPPY! Does anyone even know me anymore? Shouldn't they know this about me? Grr. Anyways. Awesome. I love it! So sad...yet...in a way makes me feel better...lol...this is soooo stupid, but...like, I can relate to it so much, it is almost comforting that it knows what I'm going through. But...yeah. I sound psychotic. But, yeah. lol. XD Sorry.
--Casey

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TempestasRex In reply to EMOisLOOOVE [2007-06-02 06:00:09 +0000 UTC]

Well thank you, it means alot that it brings you some measure of happiness.

Zane

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EMOisLOOOVE In reply to TempestasRex [2007-06-02 06:02:17 +0000 UTC]

haha. yeah. YOU ARE ON! I know, I'm weird...but it does. It's strange. I guess you get me, eh?

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TempestasRex In reply to EMOisLOOOVE [2007-06-02 06:10:53 +0000 UTC]

I guess i do XD

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EMOisLOOOVE In reply to TempestasRex [2007-06-02 06:11:42 +0000 UTC]

you better after...after....writing that! XP

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TempestasRex In reply to EMOisLOOOVE [2007-06-02 06:16:01 +0000 UTC]

God willing i hope so lol

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EMOisLOOOVE In reply to TempestasRex [2007-06-02 06:18:17 +0000 UTC]

XD lol

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Quicksilver-Hybrid [2007-06-02 01:53:22 +0000 UTC]

Yet another gem to my (hopefully) growing collection of your works. You managed to capture my own feelings so well in this one. Bravo, my dear.

"And as her wings were ripped away,
By the one she thought she loved,
She did not cry.
She did not ask 'why?'.
She simply walked away...
Broken.
Again."

(( S'cuse the excerpt there ))

~ q u i c k s i l v e r ~

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TempestasRex In reply to Quicksilver-Hybrid [2007-06-02 01:58:05 +0000 UTC]

very nice, and thank you once again for the fave. XD

Jack...

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Quicksilver-Hybrid In reply to TempestasRex [2007-06-02 02:04:06 +0000 UTC]

Most welcome. Must. Resist. Urge. To. BOW.

Ahaha.

~Q.

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